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						2nd Adventure - Variations
- Sammy_P
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2nd Adventure - Variations
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					Last edited by Sammy_P on Sat Nov 23, 2013 8:25 pm, edited 1 time in total.
									
			
									
						Thank you for the adventure! 
			
									
									Your only little stinker that's absolutely NOT a z-bot by this name,
Jutomi~
Also, if you want to see my level list, here it is!
(Also: List of Hubs, WA Manual)
Oh, and my YT wonderland channel. Forgot about that.
						Jutomi~
Also, if you want to see my level list, here it is!
(Also: List of Hubs, WA Manual)
Oh, and my YT wonderland channel. Forgot about that.
- Blazeknight
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This was a pretty sweet adventure! Of course you could do some improvements, but it showed a really neat idea and quite some potential.
The first room is a lot more fun if you do it without using Blink.
The second room contains a nice misdirection, well done! Without a doubt my favourite of the three.
The third room.. Okay, that one was a little weird, especially since I could easily recharge Blink.
Some advice for future adventures:
- So yeah, appereantly I've become an advocate against hidden information. Spy-eye, please! Also it would be nice to tell the player a bit more about the buttons. Not too bad in this adventure as it could be easily figured out, but generally a point I don't like
- Adding walls around the border of your rooms helps getting rid of those ugly black spots at the edges. Not sure if you might have done this on purpose, but I think it looks kind of cheap.
In spite of these flaws, a nice and recommandable 10 minute distraction!
			
									
									
						The first room is a lot more fun if you do it without using Blink.
The second room contains a nice misdirection, well done! Without a doubt my favourite of the three.
The third room.. Okay, that one was a little weird, especially since I could easily recharge Blink.
Some advice for future adventures:
- So yeah, appereantly I've become an advocate against hidden information. Spy-eye, please! Also it would be nice to tell the player a bit more about the buttons. Not too bad in this adventure as it could be easily figured out, but generally a point I don't like
- Adding walls around the border of your rooms helps getting rid of those ugly black spots at the edges. Not sure if you might have done this on purpose, but I think it looks kind of cheap.
In spite of these flaws, a nice and recommandable 10 minute distraction!
- MyNameIsKooky
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- Wonderland King
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Re: 2nd Adventure - Variations
Your only little stinker that's absolutely NOT a z-bot by this name,
Jutomi~
Also, if you want to see my level list, here it is!
(Also: List of Hubs, WA Manual)
Oh, and my YT wonderland channel. Forgot about that.
						Jutomi~
Also, if you want to see my level list, here it is!
(Also: List of Hubs, WA Manual)
Oh, and my YT wonderland channel. Forgot about that.

