Test no. 001

Koopson44 · Post by **Koopson44** » Sat Apr 19, 2014 5:22 pm

The beginning of a new quest.

MyNameIsKooky · Post by **MyNameIsKooky** » Sat Apr 19, 2014 5:49 pm

Pretty decent for one of your first adventures.

Some tips:

- In most cases, you'll want to make dialogue-triggering General Commands non-repeatable. You should've set "Repeatable" to "No" on the General Command at the beginning of this adventure that triggers the dialogue. Otherwise, the player is able to step on that General Command again to keep repeating the dialogue, which makes no sense in the context of the story.
- Instead of having long and boring hallways where the player has to collect a ton of items, have the player be able to progress through them very quickly by adding springs or something.

Wonderland King · Post by **Wonderland King** » Sat Apr 19, 2014 6:11 pm

It took me a while to find those coins.

Is this going to be a series?

Koopson44 · Post by **Koopson44** » Sat Apr 19, 2014 6:26 pm

Wonderland King wrote:It took me a while to find those coins.

Is this going to be a series?

I was thinking so, yes. Not really a hub, though.

Wonderman109 · Post by **Wonderman109** » Sun Apr 20, 2014 1:53 am

Yikes, those coins...

Jutomi · Post by **Jutomi** » Sun Apr 20, 2014 3:55 am

I found it to be a rather short and sweet adventure; thank you.