WA:Invasion of the Dark [HUB] [NEW DEMO] [UPDATE-4] [TRAILER]

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WA:Invasion of the Dark [HUB] [NEW DEMO] [UPDATE-4] [TRAILER]

Post by Yoda » Mon Sep 12, 2016 1:12 pm

Wonderland Adventures: Invasion of the Dark

UPDATE - 4

There hasn’t been an update for a long time, so I think it’s time to finally post some new information about the hub itself here.
I wasn't playing this game nor editing anything for a long time so there is no such a huge innovations here. I played my hub a month ago and I have to admit, it's bad. When I started working on this hub I was new in editing and I didn't know much about it. After a few years of practicing I think I have finally become better in all that stuff. I find 4 main imperfections in my older versions of this hub:
+ 1. Decoration: Ok, this hub looks just ugly. Back then I didn't pay attention on decorating interior and adventures, but now I see how important it is. Just a few details are enough to make everything much more interesting and playable. In future, I'll definitely spend more time decorating then I did it before.
+ 2. Puzzles: I'm not so good in making puzzles, but I'm definitely better than before. Lots of adventures are just stupidly made. Some of them are too easy, some of them are too confusing and I don't like it. So I want to recreate most of adventures and make them more fun and challenging. Also, this hub has neither puzzle progression nor some kind of tutorial adventures, so I have changed it. The first 15 adventures are much more easier and they show every aspect of puzzles that will appear in upcoming adventures, but in more difficult form.
+ 3. Story: I totally agree with "Wonderland King" that the storyline is a bit rushed. The story stays the same, but this time it is better represented and also the first time that you will meet your main enemy is after more then 10 adventures. Before your meeting with main enemy you need to finish some tasks in the city and explore it. It won't take a long time before you find out that something is wrong in Wonderland. I'll try to make this hub constantly giving you parts of the story but just at the end you will actually find out what's going on. I hope I won't make that mistake again.
+ 4. Dialogs: My English sucks, I know, but I'm improving it. That's the reason why I can't sometime represent my story as I want. There is no much to say about it, dialogs are just bad and I need to fix them. I have also made different dialogs for every stinker in the city. Everyone has something to say you and from their dialogs you will find out more about problems in Wonderland. Sometimes they will give you some rewords just by talking to them, so it really worth. I think that will give this hub much more of life.

I'm currently working on fixing these imperfections and it will take some time. The whole demo part is almost finished and I think it looks good. I'll put here new demo version after so you can try it :D

Story

Years have passed since the failed z-bots invasion ended. Science has advanced a lot during that time and that brings our heroes to the Wondercity. Soon, they noticed that something was wrong and then they discovered the evil that had been trapped for centuries, they found darkness...

Hub Progress

I need to fix lots of things here so I'm not sure about hub progress anymore. Now with certainty, I can say only this much:

- Chapter 1: Deep Dark ........ 100% (2/2 adventures)
- Chapter 2: Wondercity ....... 95% (13/13 adventures) (need to add stores, library and a few more small details)
- Chapter 3: Magic World....... 100% (1/1 adventures)
- Chapter 4:
- Chapter 5:
- Chapter 6:
- Chapter 7:
- Chapter 8:
- Chapter 9:
- Chapter 10:
- Chapter 11:
- Chapter 12:
- Chapter 13:
- Chapter 14:
- Chapter 15:

Trailer

Even though this trailer is horrible made, I like it. It shows something about this hub but still not too much. I'm also planning to make one more trailer in the future, but since then, enjoy in this one :D

Here is the link

Demo

If you want to play demo version of my hub, you can download it here...
First you must be registered to this forum or you will not be able to download it.

Download link

This demo version contains 15 adventures and lot of SPOILERS!!!!
I would also like to mention that this is a new demo version, much better than the old one. This is roughly the final version of the first two chapters of this story. If you have played the old demo version of this hub, I recommend you try this one as well, because it is completely different.

I'm sure there are many more things that need to be fixed, if you have any objections feel free to say so :lol:

I hope you enjoy :mrgreen:

- Yoda
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Post by Wonderman109 » Mon Sep 12, 2016 8:58 pm

Welcome to the forum you are.
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Post by Yoda » Sat Sep 17, 2016 8:23 am

Wonderman109 wrote:Welcome to the forum you are.

Thank you :D
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Post by Wonderland King » Sat Oct 01, 2016 6:26 pm

I'm not done yet (I've been pretty disorganized in my Wonderlanding since school started), but I just want to say that I'm really enjoying this demo so far - the storyline is a bit rushed, but the gameplay is very well done, and, ah... quite devious. :twisted:
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Post by Master Wonder Mage » Sun Oct 02, 2016 4:30 am

I've made it to the point where a Stinker instructs you to find Mr. Basil (having completed Cedric-in-the-Morning's four stars), and I cannot find any way to progress beyond that. Am I missing something?
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Post by Yoda » Mon Oct 03, 2016 8:52 am

Master Wonder Mage wrote:I've made it to the point where a Stinker instructs you to find Mr. Basil (having completed Cedric-in-the-Morning's four stars), and I cannot find any way to progress beyond that. Am I missing something?

Yes you missed Mr. Basil, he is under the tent.
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Post by Master Wonder Mage » Sun Oct 16, 2016 11:38 pm

Started a playthrough of the demo.

well, actually i started it like two weeks ago, but was too lazy to start uploading it until now

Part 1 here: https://youtu.be/YblQe87QtNk
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Post by Yoda » Fri Dec 09, 2016 1:03 pm

Wonderland King wrote:I'm not done yet (I've been pretty disorganized in my Wonderlanding since school started), but I just want to say that I'm really enjoying this demo so far - the storyline is a bit rushed, but the gameplay is very well done, and, ah... quite devious. :twisted:
I know the storyline is a bit rushed but this is 10% of the story, you will see what I am mean in full version :)
Thanks for playing!
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Post by Yoda » Fri Dec 09, 2016 1:06 pm

Master Wonder Mage wrote:Started a playthrough of the demo.

well, actually i started it like two weeks ago, but was too lazy to start uploading it until now

Part 1 here: https://youtu.be/YblQe87QtNk
Thank you but maybe you can update your post reply and add link of all parts :?
and did you find Mr. Basil at the end?
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Post by Jutomi » Sat Jun 03, 2017 11:51 pm

Just bumping this, since I'm updating my list of hubs;
is this hub still being worked on, or planned on being worked on?
Your only little stinker that's absolutely NOT a z-bot by this name,
Jutomi~ :mrgreen:

Also, if you want to see my level list, here it is! :D
(Also: List of Hubs, WA Manual)
Oh, and my YT wonderland channel. Forgot about that.
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Post by Yoda » Sun Jun 04, 2017 8:59 pm

Jutomi wrote:Just bumping this, since I'm updating my list of hubs;
is this hub still being worked on, or planned on being worked on?
Yes, I am still working on this hub. And also, I made a big progress since January as can be seen on hub progress, that is up.
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Post by FinnThor » Sun Jun 04, 2017 10:55 pm

Yoda wrote:
Jutomi wrote:Just bumping this, since I'm updating my list of hubs;
is this hub still being worked on, or planned on being worked on?
Yes, I am still working on this hub. And also, I made a big progress since January as can be seen on hub progress, that is up.
WHOA.

WHOA, WHOA, WHOA!

WHAT'S WITH ALL THE PROGRESS?

THAT'S AMAZING.
Cheese!

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Post by Yoda » Mon Jun 05, 2017 9:27 pm

FinnThor wrote:
Yoda wrote:
Jutomi wrote:Just bumping this, since I'm updating my list of hubs;
is this hub still being worked on, or planned on being worked on?
Yes, I am still working on this hub. And also, I made a big progress since January as can be seen on hub progress, that is up.
WHOA.

WHOA, WHOA, WHOA!

WHAT'S WITH ALL THE PROGRESS?

THAT'S AMAZING.
Thank you, I try hard :D
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Post by Yoda » Sat Sep 02, 2017 4:25 pm

Update-3 is finally out! Go up and check it :wink:
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Post by Yoda » Sat Sep 23, 2017 9:38 am

I decided to put some screenshots of my hub here... so... here they are :)
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Post by Airie » Sat Sep 23, 2017 2:34 pm

wow.
wow.
WOW! :D
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Post by FinnThor » Sat Sep 23, 2017 2:46 pm

Nice work there, Yoda!

Just make sure that you lower the waterheight of the floor tiles so water doesn't stick out in the air. :wink:
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Post by Yoda » Sun Sep 24, 2017 6:01 pm

FinnThor wrote:Nice work there, Yoda!

Just make sure that you lower the waterheight of the floor tiles so water doesn't stick out in the air. :wink:
Thanks :D

Yeah, I will fix it, I always forget it :lol: thanks for the advice :wink:
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Post by Yoda » Sun Sep 24, 2017 6:02 pm

Airie wrote:wow.
wow.
WOW! :D
I'm glad you like it :D
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Re: WA:Invasion of the Dark [HUB] [NEW DEMO] [UPDATE-4] [TRAILER]

Post by Yoda » Sat Jul 25, 2020 11:18 pm

New update is out, check it out :D
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Re: WA:Invasion of the Dark [HUB] [NEW DEMO] [UPDATE-4] [TRAILER]

Post by john1013 » Tue Sep 21, 2021 1:24 pm

can you add anymore walkthru's, Im stuck in the library?
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Re: WA:Invasion of the Dark [HUB] [NEW DEMO] [UPDATE-4] [TRAILER]

Post by Jutomi » Sun Aug 28, 2022 7:39 pm

Hi John! A year late (so you probably won't ever read this lol), but I went ahead and recorded... well, the first Demo. Admittedly I'm saving the rest of it for when the final product comes out (hopefully soon? :D)

Nonetheless, for posterity sake, I hope you all enjoy. :)

Part 1 - The Deep Dark

Part 2 - Magic in the Morning

Part 3 - Trapped in the Cave with Hoodlums

Part 4 - Don't Kill Me, Wondertown

Part 5 - Breaking and Entering

Part 6 - Silence in the Library

Part 7 - Magic Rush 1/4: Blink & Flash

Part 8 - Magic Rush 2/4: Brr & Pop

Part 9 - Magic Rush 3/4: Grow

Part 10 - Magic Rush 4/4: Pow & Floing

Part 11 - Beautiful Garden

Part 12 - The Flooded Windmill (Finale)
Your only little stinker that's absolutely NOT a z-bot by this name,
Jutomi~ :mrgreen:

Also, if you want to see my level list, here it is! :D
(Also: List of Hubs, WA Manual)
Oh, and my YT wonderland channel. Forgot about that.
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Re: WA:Invasion of the Dark [HUB] [NEW DEMO] [UPDATE-4] [TRAILER]

Post by Yoda » Tue Aug 30, 2022 7:08 pm

Jutomi wrote:
Sun Aug 28, 2022 7:39 pm
Hi John! A year late (so you probably won't ever read this lol), but I went ahead and recorded... well, the first Demo. Admittedly I'm saving the rest of it for when the final product comes out (hopefully soon? :D)

Nonetheless, for posterity sake, I hope you all enjoy. :)

Part 1 - The Deep Dark

Part 2 - Magic in the Morning

Part 3 - Trapped in the Cave with Hoodlums

Part 4 - Don't Kill Me, Wondertown

Part 5 - Breaking and Entering

Part 6 - Silence in the Library

Part 7 - Magic Rush 1/4: Blink & Flash

Part 8 - Magic Rush 2/4: Brr & Pop

Part 9 - Magic Rush 3/4: Grow

Part 10 - Magic Rush 4/4: Pow & Floing

Part 11 - Beautiful Garden

Part 12 - The Flooded Windmill (Finale)
Thanks for making a walkthru, it was fun watching it, reminds me of good old days :mrgreen:
New progress update is coming very soon.
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