2nd Adventure: TES P4: The Bluehouse

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2nd Adventure: TES P4: The Bluehouse

Post by loofisawesome » Sun Mar 01, 2015 2:30 pm

Alrighty, round 4!

Jutomi's video: Clicky again!
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Post by Master Wonder Mage » Sun Mar 01, 2015 8:04 pm

I noticed a bug in this adventure: if you read the billboard, it traps you, and you cannot get out of the dialog.

This adventure had a lot more care put into it, and it showed. The puzzles were far more structured/present, and there was a bit more plot motion. That being said, the plotting could use a little bit of work. The events of this adventure didn't seem to be really following up on anything that happened previously, rather seeming like a random event. You are suddenly going to a blue/greenhouse. This is the main thing, in my opinion, that you need to work on in a plot-oriented series like a tennis.
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Bottoms Up

Post by Jutomi » Mon Mar 02, 2015 12:06 am

Huh!

So it looks like we were sent, eastward, to an even colder place!

Unfortunately I did end up recording the glitchier version... :P

Still, it was pretty fun! Thank you. :mrgreen:
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Post by loofisawesome » Mon Mar 02, 2015 1:29 am

You mean, westward?
I'm glad you liked this one. Can't wait to see part 5!
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Left and Right

Post by Jutomi » Mon Mar 02, 2015 1:31 am

I get East/West and left/right mixed up. :?

Well, at least this was way more accurate than I was just now. :lol:
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Post by samuelthx » Mon Mar 02, 2015 8:17 am

This one's an improvement from your previous adventure--there are more puzzles! :D There wasn't much plot development here, though.
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Post by garirry » Fri Mar 06, 2015 7:37 pm

Definitely better than last adventure, but still a bit short and story-less in my opinion. Can't wait to see what newer adventures will be! :)
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Changing

Post by loofisawesome » Mon Jun 22, 2015 7:47 pm

I decided to change some things. I changed the topic titlle, deleted the message at my post, and removed the glitchy version.
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