UPDATE - 4
There hasn’t been an update for a long time, so I think it’s time to finally post some new information about the hub itself here.
I wasn't playing this game nor editing anything for a long time so there is no such a huge innovations here. I played my hub a month ago and I have to admit, it's bad. When I started working on this hub I was new in editing and I didn't know much about it. After a few years of practicing I think I have finally become better in all that stuff. I find 4 main imperfections in my older versions of this hub:
+ 1. Decoration: Ok, this hub looks just ugly. Back then I didn't pay attention on decorating interior and adventures, but now I see how important it is. Just a few details are enough to make everything much more interesting and playable. In future, I'll definitely spend more time decorating then I did it before.
+ 2. Puzzles: I'm not so good in making puzzles, but I'm definitely better than before. Lots of adventures are just stupidly made. Some of them are too easy, some of them are too confusing and I don't like it. So I want to recreate most of adventures and make them more fun and challenging. Also, this hub has neither puzzle progression nor some kind of tutorial adventures, so I have changed it. The first 15 adventures are much more easier and they show every aspect of puzzles that will appear in upcoming adventures, but in more difficult form.
+ 3. Story: I totally agree with "Wonderland King" that the storyline is a bit rushed. The story stays the same, but this time it is better represented and also the first time that you will meet your main enemy is after more then 10 adventures. Before your meeting with main enemy you need to finish some tasks in the city and explore it. It won't take a long time before you find out that something is wrong in Wonderland. I'll try to make this hub constantly giving you parts of the story but just at the end you will actually find out what's going on. I hope I won't make that mistake again.
+ 4. Dialogs: My English sucks, I know, but I'm improving it. That's the reason why I can't sometime represent my story as I want. There is no much to say about it, dialogs are just bad and I need to fix them. I have also made different dialogs for every stinker in the city. Everyone has something to say you and from their dialogs you will find out more about problems in Wonderland. Sometimes they will give you some rewords just by talking to them, so it really worth. I think that will give this hub much more of life.
I'm currently working on fixing these imperfections and it will take some time. The whole demo part is almost finished and I think it looks good. I'll put here new demo version after so you can try it
Story
Years have passed since the failed z-bots invasion ended. Science has advanced a lot during that time and that brings our heroes to the Wondercity. Soon, they noticed that something was wrong and then they discovered the evil that had been trapped for centuries, they found darkness...
Hub Progress
I need to fix lots of things here so I'm not sure about hub progress anymore. Now with certainty, I can say only this much:
- Chapter 1: Deep Dark ........ 100% (2/2 adventures)
- Chapter 2: Wondercity ....... 95% (13/13 adventures) (need to add stores, library and a few more small details)
- Chapter 3: Magic World....... 100% (1/1 adventures)
- Chapter 4:
- Chapter 5:
- Chapter 6:
- Chapter 7:
- Chapter 8:
- Chapter 9:
- Chapter 10:
- Chapter 11:
- Chapter 12:
- Chapter 13:
- Chapter 14:
- Chapter 15:
Trailer
Even though this trailer is horrible made, I like it. It shows something about this hub but still not too much. I'm also planning to make one more trailer in the future, but since then, enjoy in this one
Here is the link
Demo
If you want to play demo version of my hub, you can download it here...
First you must be registered to this forum or you will not be able to download it.
Download link
This demo version contains 15 adventures and lot of SPOILERS!!!!
I would also like to mention that this is a new demo version, much better than the old one. This is roughly the final version of the first two chapters of this story. If you have played the old demo version of this hub, I recommend you try this one as well, because it is completely different.
I'm sure there are many more things that need to be fixed, if you have any objections feel free to say so
I hope you enjoy
- Yoda
