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Wonderman109 · Post by **Wonderman109** » Fri Jul 27, 2012 9:19 pm

Kill me for triple posting, but I needed to remove the post glitch. Oh well. '_'

llarson · Post by **llarson** » Fri Jul 27, 2012 9:19 pm

Thanks for both things . ^_^

Wonderman109 · Post by **Wonderman109** » Fri Jul 27, 2012 9:25 pm

llarson wrote:You know what wonderman? I have an Idea for what the parents can be.

The father- Vincent van Notoe - A father who's lazy and demands the player to find the TV Remote.

the mother- The moana Liza- A mother who complains a lot and demands you to do a bunch of chores NOW!

I also have a few more Ideas for a few more rooms:

The Library- It's boring and has no music or fun. Just a 40X40 room full of library books

The bathroom- It's flooded

-The Backyard- A mess of a bunch of random junk (You could make a bunch of random stuff that makes it look like it's being sucked into the void or oblivion XD)

Anyways do you like these Ideas?

The father and mother are possibles.

The library is a definite no but the bathroom and backyard could be.

However, the house is in the middle of Lost Wonderland's biggest desert, so the backyard wouldn't be terribly green...

llarson · Post by **llarson** » Fri Jul 27, 2012 9:30 pm

Well it could be the randomest backyard of all time XD
BTW How about a study that's the most loudest and annoying study you've ever been in?

Wonderman109 · Post by **Wonderman109** » Fri Jul 27, 2012 11:49 pm

That's what I'm planning.
I have to warn you, this level has no hope of coming out soon. It may become part of my storyline, and that means there'll be at least 15 adventures before it.

What I've Finished in the House of Crazy Eights:

The Front Yard -A desert entrance with some pesky fireflowers hanging about.

The Shed - A very dark room with lots of elements in small square rooms. No, it's not a smotherpuzzle; it's just a smother.

Entrance Hall- Full of annoying billboards that give you really stupid quizzes. Only the first one has an idea of a real quiz, and it's tricky because you have to find the dialog to go to the Void area before answering or you have to repeat the quiz.
And you're stuck if you don't go to the Void area, because it has a vital purple key you need in it.

Main Hall 1 - Looks normal, has a spikeyball and a moody billboard, but otherwise it's sort of normal. Leads off to a few rooms.

Front Area Closet - Really long but not wide, consisting of a long but not wide pool with a long but not wide bridge chain you have to activate sign by boring sign. Don't worry, the spikeyball and fireflowers will make it more exciting. At the end is a weird grandfather who gives you a key or coin.

Dining Room - A sort of smotherpuzzle combined with some limited magic puzzles and a once-only button puzzle. The main stand-out is that everything is breakable or one-time-use-only except at the end where the actual tables are.

Bathroom - Half-flooded, and full of dragonturtles, it's a real menace. It has a bathtub, sink, and toilet, and thanks to a strange tiny stinker in the toilet, you'll get shrunk by a different shrink-ray and get to explore all that up-close.

WHAT I'M WORKING ON OR GOING TO MAKE SOON:

Kitchen - The actual hub of the home, it's just north of the Main Hall 1. Grandma George is here, cooking a wonderful-smelling recipe. She offers to let you taste one of her soups.Unfortunately, she makes a mistake (or so you think) and passes a shrink-ray instead of her cooking spoon.
Then you have to traverse the recipes on the stove, the oven, the fridge, the cabinets, the microwave, and who knows what else I'll dream up.

Main Hall 2 - It will be identical to Main Hall 1 but without a billboard.

Chomper-and-Scritter Pen - A lot of scritters and a few chompers. That's all I'll say for now.

Library - A huge room divided into four outer mazes and an inner pool area with lots of gameplay elements smothered together alongside springs to make a really indecent but tough smotherpuzzle that I hope will cause MNIK to regret introducing the evil concept.

Expect flipping bookshelves and dialog bookshelves.

Nursery - Full of 'toys.' BEWARE THE BABY!

Living Room - Father Frank and Brother Bro request, no, DEMAND you to get the remote and there is a huge blow-out over who gets the remote in which you get sucked into the TV, which acts like a portal to the Anti-Void Void at one point.

Family Room - Very simple room with no puzzles; it's where Mother Melissa is and she has plenty of chores for you...

Bathroom 2nd Floor - Sister Sis is here and needs help with her cosmetics.

Bathroom 3rd floor - A secret portal taking you back to the Void.

Attic - Where the Main Hall 1 billboard goes after you talk to it. Full of junk, and has hidden secrets in its shady corners...

Basement - Too much to say here, let's just say it's full of traps, monsters, and other unpleasant things.

Death Room - Enter it on the 2nd floor to die...or so you think, anyways.

Certain Death Room - Kills you upon entry unless you find a secret way in. On 3rd floor.

Museum Room - Very boring place. Plans here undecided for now, but I guarantee it will look like a museum.

Master Bedroom - Full of sleeping people, loud alarm clocks, and wee stinkers and wee chompers.

Study - Like the library but smaller and more peaceful.

Office - One of the craziest rooms in the house. Full of papers, pens, and the like. The paranoid supercomputer can drag you in so you can greet Clippy and the Alphabet Committee.

Locked Room - Full of floating locks guarding a mystery room.

Secret Passage and Mystery Rooms 1 through 5 - (there's nothing writtten here)

Twin Bedroom - Grandpa Georgina asks you to fetch his teeth along with other tasks that you at least THINK are tedious...

Backyard - Made of three sections, a crazy one full of junk and a portal to Oblivion, another that looks fairly normal, and the boss one that you can only access at the end of the level. May have the family pet mini-boss.

Secret Attic-Above-The-Attic - Has a lot of surprises, including a tall captain of a pirate ship holding an anchor and an annoyed thwart.

Boss Room(s) - Undecided for now

Sewers - Can be accessed via secret passsages or the attic. Like any sewer in Wonderland, really.

Garden Room - A greenhouse with plant-y puzzles. Don't ask me what that means.

Spare Room - Empty - or is it?

Guest Bedroom - Full of guests. Yeah, really.

Lovely Bedroom - Plenty of gems and a clever trap.

Gaming Room - Where a bunch of weird stinkers in top hats are playing a game of Crazy Eights. Also has GAMES.

Stupid Dialog Room - (no description available)

Hidden Medieval Trap Room - In basement.

Dark Rooms - As you think they are...

Garden: Huge plants, talking statues, and more...

The Monster's Room: A stinker in the Main Hall 2 warns you not to open the door to this room or SOMETHING (he himself has no idea what it is) will grab you and you'll never be seen again.

Laundry Room: The laundry machine will suck you in.

Pantry: Storage ahoy!

Cold Room: In basement behind west stairs, and freezing.

Invention Room: Full of inventions of all sorts.

And probably more as I think of it...

llarson · Post by **llarson** » Sat Jul 28, 2012 1:06 am

I NEED YOUR MIND!
I like your descriptions. How about the museum has a bunch of random stinkers in there saying that they're the "Living wax figures"

Wonderman109 · Post by **Wonderman109** » Sat Jul 28, 2012 1:18 am

Aha. You're already making a good start.
And also, while you're add it, add:

A garage with car-sized spikeyballs.
A recipe with flipping cuboids, one with Stone Wysps, one with Chairs,

etc.

A dialog bookshelf or two in the library...

A LOT OF DUMB POINTLESS DIALOG IN THE STUPID DIALOG ROOM, OBVIOUSLY!!!

A POOL ROOM AND CHANGEROOM.

A giant vacuum cleaner that you get inside, shrink with a certain shrink ray from the bathroom, and use to perform one ot Mother Melissa's chores.

The roof. Lots of ideas.

An outdoor garden.

A parlour.

llarson · Post by **llarson** » Sat Jul 28, 2012 1:29 am

Garage : How about giant dragon turtles too that are said to be their source of transportation

Dialouge room : A bunch of spammy dialouges . Similar to (You weren't here when it was released but) Mynameiskooky's LolhowdoIedit's part with a bunch of dialouge's that say "Lol dialouge's slowing you down"

Pool room : Transporters cover every inch of this room

Change Room : It has a bunch of spikeyballs that flip (Set them to diagonal and have them go somewhere like east, west, north ect.)

The roof : Have santa clause take a vacation there

Outdoor garden : A bunch of giant flowers . Not all of them cute....

Parlour : A bunch of chairs and a waitress that's too impatient and a bartender that's too stupid

IDK What you meant by "while you're add it, add" So I guessed you meant more Ideas. Here's some pretty daft Ideas for you

.

EDIT: A few more

Recipes : Add 1 (Insert object here) and put it in the oven and let it burn the house to the ground. If this is too hard please just cook it in the microwave

Bookshelves: THE WASTE OF TIME BOOK THAT YOU'LL NEVER WANT TO READ IN A MILLION YEARS!!!!!1!1!11!!!

Vacuum cleaner : A bunch of dusty spikeyballs (I'll make these texture's if you want)

BTW We're starting to become friends in a way aren't we?

Wonderman109 · Post by **Wonderman109** » Sat Jul 28, 2012 1:51 am

I am dreaming up some other spikey textures I could use.

BTW AWESOME IDEAS. *feels epicness*

Wonderman109 · Post by **Wonderman109** » Sat Jul 28, 2012 2:21 am

llarson wrote:Garage : How about giant dragon turtles too that are said to be their source of transportation

GAHH NO THAT WOULDN'T DO, (EVEN THOUGH THEIR HOUSE IS ALREADY INFESTED BEYOND BELIEF WITH DRAGONTURTLES)

Dialouge room : A bunch of spammy dialouges . Similar to (You weren't here when it was released but) Mynameiskooky's LolhowdoIedit's part with a bunch of dialouge's that say "Lol dialouge's slowing you down"

I PLAYED THAT LEVEL. IT GAVE ME FREAKISH AND SLIGHTLY INAPPROPRIATE IDEAS FOR MY OWN LEVELS.

Pool room : Transporters cover every inch of this room

TOO EASY!

Change Room : It has a bunch of spikeyballs that flip (Set them to diagonal and have them go somewhere like east, west, north ect.)

MAYBE...

The roof : Have santa clause take a vacation there

HA HA! THAT'S NOT A BAD IDEA!

Outdoor garden : A bunch of giant flowers . Not all of them cute....

PART OF IT. THE GARDEN WILL BE HUGE, SO...

Parlour : A bunch of chairs and a waitress that's too impatient and a bartender that's too stupid

LOVE IT.

IDK What you meant by "while you're add it, add" So I guessed you meant more Ideas. Here's some pretty daft Ideas for you .

EDIT: A few more

Recipes : Add 1 (Insert object here) and put it in the oven and let it burn the house to the ground. If this is too hard please just cook it in the microwave

GREAT

Bookshelves: THE WASTE OF TIME BOOK THAT YOU'LL NEVER WANT TO READ IN A MILLION YEARS!!!!!1!1!11!!!

SERIOUSLY? *RUNS*

Vacuum cleaner : A bunch of dusty spikeyballs (I'll make these texture's if you want)

THAT'S A MAYBE. I WAS THINKING OF MR. SMOG *

BTW We're starting to become friends in a way aren't we?

OMG LOL OOPS LOL etc.

Comments in uppercase letters. *shot*

BTW, mentioning Mr. Smog, here's another hilarious list: of all the crazy characters I'll be including in my storyline for my adventures!

Evil King
Evilrile
Evenerile
Happy DuckMuffet the Third
LOL GIRL VIII
The Prancing Fruitbeasts
Mr. Smog
The Man In Black
The Man With A Beard But No Hair
The Woman With Hair But No Beard
The Jade Monstrosity Machine
Sir Loin
Grandpa Georgina
Grandma George
Miss Ter
The Invisible Voice (abbreviated to TIV)
Mr. MANLY
The Copycat
The Tasmanian Devil
Mr. Totem
Darren Quizmaster and his family
Dictionary Man
The Will-o-the-Wisp
The Good Thwart Overlord
The Eldest Elder
Scrat the Scritter Villain
Magic Makers Inc's CEO
The Random Crazy Guy
Sir Lady
Mrs. Gentleman
The Merchant of Venetian Curtains
ABCDEFGHIJKLMNOPQRSTUVWXYZ (do NOT ask where I got this one from)

AND MORE, PUNKS! *hides in bomb shelter*

Wonderman109 · Post by **Wonderman109** » Sat Jul 28, 2012 2:30 am

Master Wonder Mage wrote:...

Giants again?

Master Wonder Mage · Post by **Master Wonder Mage** » Sat Jul 28, 2012 2:32 am

Not really. Red, the Shadow Stinker and a Chomper, whose name you should be able to guess if you've played the previous adventures.

llarson · Post by **llarson** » Sat Jul 28, 2012 3:26 am

Wonderman109 wrote: The Man With A Beard But No Hair
The Woman With Hair But No Beard

I see you read A series of unfortunate events. *runs*
Anyways how about these:

Change room:A bunch of horribly distorted coins

Pool room: A room filled with a bunch of spikeyballs (A pun on the game "pool" but usually it's called a billiard)

Outdoor garden: The gardener is mad and creates a bunch of fireflowers

Bookshelves: The serious book that'll bore you to death

Like 'em?

StinkerSquad01 · Post by **StinkerSquad01** » Sat Jul 28, 2012 3:29 am

Wonderman109 wrote:Entrance Hall- Full of annoying billboards that give you really stupid quizzes. Only the first one has an idea of a real quiz, and it's tricky because you have to find the dialog to go to the Void area before answering or you have to repeat the quiz.

Sounds like a ripoff of MNIK's Mr. Billboard.

Wonderman109 · Post by **Wonderman109** » Sat Jul 28, 2012 3:00 pm

Actually none of the billboards' quizzes are like that except the first a little.

*runs*

SPOILER!:

1st one: Techincally a rip-off of Mr. Billboard because it's the only one that actually gives you a quiz of any real difficulty. But it only appears in the house and that's that, OK?

2nd one: A stupid quiz. Don't bother asking what it's about, you'd be disappointed.

3rd one: It has only one question in which you can choose an item to collect...

Also, it spins.

4th one: Upon talking to it, you get teleported to a secret place I won't decribe. The actual sign is tiny but becomes enormous when you see it in the secret place.

5th one: If you flunk the quiz, you get to go to WAHOO! If you pass, you get to go to YAHOO! There IS a difference.

The billboard in the Hall 1 is HUGE to the point of it not fitting in the level screen and has the weirdest texture ever. It creeped me out when I took another look a the hall to check something that I had a nightmare about it. If anyone faints when they see it, THEY HAVE BEEN WARNED.

Master Wonder Mage · Post by **Master Wonder Mage** » Sat Jul 28, 2012 4:06 pm

And it's not like MNIK's Mr. Billboard is a new concept, it's just that they both are signs. People could come up with that without MNIK. This, for once, is not a ripoff in my opinion.

Wonderman109 · Post by **Wonderman109** » Sat Jul 28, 2012 4:40 pm

OK thanks.

Anyone want to take a guess what the main hall billboard's texture is?

Wonderman109 · Post by **Wonderman109** » Sat Jul 28, 2012 4:54 pm

llarson wrote:
Wonderman109 wrote: The Man With A Beard But No Hair
The Woman With Hair But No Beard
I see you read A series of unfortunate events. *runs*

MyNameIsKooky wrote: MY EVIL PLAN IS RUINED!
Anyways how about these:

Change room:A bunch of horribly distorted coins

Plus the spikeyballs, and more...I'll see about it...I want it to be mazy and full of long halls so it'll be awesome somewhat anyways...

Pool room: A room filled with a bunch of spikeyballs (A pun on the game "pool" but usually it's called a billiard)

That would suit the game room more...

Outdoor garden: The gardener is mad and creates a bunch of fireflowers

A possible...

Bookshelves: The serious book that'll bore you to death

Here you go again... *hides in bomb shelter*

Like 'em?

My comments in bold.

StinkerSquad01 · Post by **StinkerSquad01** » Sat Jul 28, 2012 6:18 pm

Well, I didn't know they weren't going to be like his quizzes. You say billboards and quizzes so it just reminds me of MNIK's character.

llarson · Post by **llarson** » Sat Jul 28, 2012 7:22 pm

Wonderman109 wrote:
llarson wrote:
Wonderman109 wrote: The Man With A Beard But No Hair
The Woman With Hair But No Beard
I see you read A series of unfortunate events. *runs*

MyNameIsKooky wrote: MY EVIL PLAN IS RUINED!
Anyways how about these:

Change room:A bunch of horribly distorted coins

Plus the spikeyballs, and more...I'll see about it...I want it to be mazy and full of long halls so it'll be awesome somewhat anyways...

Pool room: A room filled with a bunch of spikeyballs (A pun on the game "pool" but usually it's called a billiard)

That would suit the game room more...

Outdoor garden: The gardener is mad and creates a bunch of fireflowers

A possible...

Bookshelves: The serious book that'll bore you to death

Here you go again... *hides in bomb shelter*

Like 'em?
My comments in bold.

Ok how about these?

Change room : A bunch of 1 coin tollgates crammed together to make halls and you have to save the coins you collect for the tollgate at the end.
I might use this concept for one of my levels.

Pool room : You go underwater and see a bunch of underwater stinkers but stinkers can't swim.

Outdoor garden: A bunch of GIANT plants along with fireflowers. Kinda like "The Pop Path" in a way except with bigger flowers and random fireflowers.

Bookshelves : This is the diary of a person that hate's you.

Better?

Sammy_P · Post by **Sammy_P** » Sat Jul 28, 2012 8:53 pm

This conversation is mostly Wonderman and Llarson, so can this be moved to PM?

llarson · Post by **llarson** » Sat Jul 28, 2012 9:09 pm

Meh sure anyways

Future Somebody wrote:I'm stuck on the gate part. Any tips?

Wonderman109 · Post by **Wonderman109** » Sat Jul 28, 2012 11:49 pm

llarson wrote: Change room : A bunch of 1 coin tollgates crammed together to make halls and you have to save the coins you collect for the tollgate at the end.
I might use this concept for one of my levels.

Again and hopefully for the last time, you aren't going to think of anything that would suit the place. The pool is supposed to have the main puzzle, not the change rooms.

Pool room : You go underwater and see a bunch of underwater stinkers but stinkers can't swim.

Actually, I'm planning something more like a bunch of junk, springs, and some swimming monsters in an underwater environment to make a puzzle with rotators.

Outdoor garden: A bunch of GIANT plants along with fireflowers. Kinda like "The Pop Path" in a way except with bigger flowers and random fireflowers.

Sorry, I didn't play that adventure, I don't know what you mean.

Bookshelves : This is the diary of a person that hate's you.

Perhaps...but it would be very complicated...

Better?

Bold.

Picture=Strangest thing I've ever seen.

llarson · Post by **llarson** » Sat Jul 28, 2012 11:53 pm

Wonderman109 wrote:
Picture=Strangest thing I've ever seen.

If you look quite a few page's back you'll see a picture Master Wonder Mage took of a bunch of chompers and there were soo many that it resulted in a MAV. Anyways my level's out now

. BTW What is a change room anyways? I've only been working on my guess of it.

Wonderman109 · Post by **Wonderman109** » Sun Jul 29, 2012 12:12 am

llarson wrote:
Wonderman109 wrote:
Picture=Strangest thing I've ever seen.
If you look quite a few page's back you'll see a picture Master Wonder Mage took of a bunch of chompers and there were soo many that it resulted in a MAV. Anyways my level's out now . BTW What is a change room anyways? I've only been working on my guess of it.

Um...a series of halls with closed stalls for people to change in and out of swimwear and lockers to lock their clothes and other accesroies in...it's kind of common knowledge...

Of course, in Wonderland no one wears clothes except that stinkers wear hats, glasses and shoes. That's the irony in it.

llarson · Post by **llarson** » Sun Jul 29, 2012 12:18 am

I guess I'll dump my list of characters here:

KEY:

Normal = Ally or other
Red = Villain
Dark Red = Darker villain
Cyan = Shadow stinker

Jeffrey: Hardly the first character I came up with

Bob Boerson: Pretty much the second main character I came up with. He was originally the security guard at this random place I made (Before the bigtown stories as it wasn't in bigtown) called Spring.inc and he locked you up with a bunch of chompers coming in through the vents.
he them got scared of your sunscreen and left (Yes this part was taken out as he's not a shadow stinker).

Madame Phsyce: She was the first with a custom cap. She now has a rainbow cap though.

Peggy cream: The Vice president of boring co.

Barney Bowler: The Vice President of the Bad bowler hats

Modern: My gateskeeper. He was originally the gateskeeper at this random place with a bunch of doors.

The very angry stinker: He appeared in this fail attempt at a level based on "Cloud 9" by Ice. He basically gave you a stupid quiz and got mad and swore his revenge. He originally lived in a tiny house.

YoYo Jank: He was originally a rastastinker. He's basically a radio man.

The Traveling Pawn Shop: or the TTPS. I liked the idea of the cosmic merchant so I made him however I was aware of pawn shops trading things which is what he'll do. He has yet to do that.

Shadelyn: The creepiest villain ever made.

Pam Spam: She looks similar to Peggy Cream. She'll more or less make another appearence.

Mr.Rollo: An arcade owner.

yot yot5 · Post by **yot yot5** » Sun Jul 29, 2012 11:04 am

llarson wrote:Meh sure anyways
Future Somebody wrote:I'm stuck on the gate part. Any tips?

Nice gates.

Nobody · Post by **Nobody** » Sun Jul 29, 2012 1:45 pm

llarson wrote:Meh sure anyways
Future Somebody wrote:I'm stuck on the gate part. Any tips?

Looks easy. Only one gate color?

Wonderman109 · Post by **Wonderman109** » Sun Jul 29, 2012 3:50 pm

I'll guess the gates have different subcolours.

EDIT: My next adventure will be out soon. It's my WACC3 entry, so it's not very big or exciting, should anyone want to care about it.

llarson · Post by **llarson** » Sun Jul 29, 2012 7:18 pm

The gate puzzle is from an unreleased adventure called "The shock" and I put a bunch of random yellow gates with a bunch of different subcolours randomly and left random spaces. I decided to bring back this concept since I ran out of Ideas (I'm saving one for a later adventure)