My first adventure.(reuploaded and delete errors)

global102 · Post by **global102** » Mon Sep 23, 2013 2:55 pm

Hi everyone.
I create first map on WA editor.

Links to the map is under. And bonus. If you have mofi editor you can play map version for mofi. Please tell me, what I should change.
Link: http://www.mediafire.com/?4f3gvgl3hxd5i ... bx31bd2ia8
PS In mediafire I have another name, than in real. And don't confuse WA MOFI version and WA version
In this version (1.1) of map I change:
-Add gloves for WA MOFI.
-I fix invisible walls and add buttons in MOFI.
-I add gloves for WA version.
I think now there won't be bugs and errors.

md · Post by md » Mon Sep 23, 2013 8:53 pm

The download link is broken, it says it does not exist anymore.
Please re-upload your adventure, and make sure that you do it correctly.

Oh, and welcome to the forums!

Lucky-Luc · Post by **Lucky-Luc** » Mon Sep 23, 2013 9:05 pm

Yup, welcome to the forums!

Before you reupload, you might want to check the "normal" version again. I think it's impossible without magic gloves.

md · Post by md » Sat Sep 28, 2013 2:34 am

I played this for a bit, not bad for a first adventure.

Anyway, just a couple of things you might like to consider in terms of uploading:
- Don't make adventures for the WA Editor in MOFI Format. Not everyone uses the cracked MOFI editor, and usually come here to play WA Editor adventures.
- Just as yot yot5 said to me, use the default attachment uploader to upload your works, rather than something like MediaFire.

Also, in terms of the adventure, you might want to consider:
- Set your dialog commands to non-repeatable. It is annoying how you keep reading them over and over when you step on them.
- Place definite positions for LevelExits with normal travel, rather than in random places.

Just a bit of constructive criticism; nothing too harsh!

You might also want to consider improving your grammar as it is quite hard to understand.