Mario's journey

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Mario's journey

Post by tails the fox » Sun Oct 31, 2010 6:56 am

A fanfic i made.
Still in progress though.

Mario's Journey
Prolouge
Mario and Luigi have been invited to see Peach again.
Only this time, Peach has something special to give.
When they get there they enter and reach Peach.
"Hello Luigi, hello Mario." Peach says.
"I want to give you...this." Peach says kissing Mario on the head and pulling a sheet off a table thats packed with:
Pasta! Ravioli! Spagheti! AND CAAAAAAAAAAAKKKKKKKKEEEEEE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
"MOMA MIA!!!" Mario yells.
"Moooommmmaaa...miiiaaa..." Luigi says fainting.
"Shall we dine?" Peach asks as she wakes up luigi.
"Lets'a dine!" Mario says.
"Let'sa GO!" Luigi says.
"Wait someones'a missing..." Luigi says.
"oh.. you mean Daisy?" Peach says as Daisy enteres the room!!!
"Moommaa miaa...." Luigi says swooning.
They sit down, and start eating.
But in the middle of this great morning, Bowser just has to spoil everyones appatite.
"Oh no! Bowser!" Peach says.
"Not'a gain!" Mario says.
Twink crashes through the window.
A toad that just came in barly got hit.
"Whooaaaa!" Twink yells hiting the place where the toad just was.
"MMOOMMAA MMIIAA!!!" Mario yells
"Ow........my head......ow...." Twink says.
Twink seems to be older now. Hes bigger too!
"Huh? Mario! Peach its good to see you! But no time BOWSERS COMING!" Twink yells, just then Bowser crashes through knocking everybody-
to the ground!!!
"Moommaa miaa..." Luigi says.
Bowser fireballs Luigi.
"OWOWOW!" Luigi yells
"Luigi!" Mario yells.
Mario jumps up and Powerjumps on Bowser.
Bowser turns red and shoots a fire beam at Mario.
"MMOOMMAA MMIIAA!!!" Mario yells
"BWA HAHAHHARGH!!!" Bowser laughs.
Mario falls to the ground.
"Ooohhh... umph.." Mario says fainting.
"Mario!!!" Peach yells
'MARIO!" Twink yells.
"MOMA MIIAA! MARIO!" Luigi yells.
Bowser appears.
"Its time to say GOODNIGHT!" Bowser says.
Mario wakes up to destroyed remains of the once named peach castle, now its just peices of it.
"MMOOMMAA MMIIAA!!!!!!" Mario yells.
"ugghh...." Luigi said coming out of rocks.
"Luigi!" Mario yells.
"MARIO!" Luigi yells relieved.
"What'a happened?" Mario asks.
"Bowser'a happened, he knocked you out and the rest of us. Next thing i'a know i'm here and Peach and Daisy are GONE!!!" Luigi says.
"MMOOMMAA MMIIAA!!!" Mario yells shocked.
Mario then goes with Luigi to toad town.
Only to find it completly destroyed.
"MOMA MIA!" Mario yells.
"Ohhh nooo....." Luigi says.
"Ekkk..." Mario says.
"MARIO! look!" Luigi says.
Luigi pointed at 2 1-UP mushrooms and a Star, including some superboots.
Mario went and grabed them.
Mario gained:Focus
Mario gained:Jump-Lvl-3
Mario gained:2 EXTRA LIVES!
"Mario! I can help you!" Luigi said.
"Hmmm... Lets'a GO!" Mario says bringing Luigi along...
End of chapter1
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