On Top of the Void Mouth Part 1: Thwarting the Siege.

Master Wonder Mage · Post by **Master Wonder Mage** » Mon Mar 02, 2015 3:59 am

Type: Storyline-Tennis
Difficulty: Easy
Puzzle Difficulty: Very Easy
Action Difficulty: Moderate
Length: Moderately Short
Settings: Cave (Mechanical/Natural)
Synopsis: The Red Thwart has sent a message to you asking that you come to the Thwart's home cave quickly. You make your way there, wondering what it is about.

The final product was not all I was hoping, but the value of getting it out quickly seemed higher than heavily revising it. So, here it is.

Part one of Tennis with Jutomi.

EDIT: Changed the filename format to match what I'll be using in the future.

samuelthx · Post by **samuelthx** » Mon Mar 02, 2015 8:11 am

This was an interesting start to a new tennis!
Pretty easy puzzles, but the Pow and chomper area was rather annoying.

The plot is pretty good, and it will be interesting to see how this develops further.
Thanks for sharing!

StinkerSquad01 · Post by **StinkerSquad01** » Mon Mar 02, 2015 7:03 pm

Oooh. Looking forward to the next part!

Jutomi · Post by **Jutomi** » Mon Mar 02, 2015 7:21 pm

Wow!

Such action and drama you have indeed added here.

I thank you for abducting my little stinker
to either save the thwarts or die with all of Wonderland.

We needed some more epic adventures.

I look forward to trying my hand to make the
next part as epic and close enough to the main
settings as possible.

loofisawesome · Post by **loofisawesome** » Mon Mar 02, 2015 10:14 pm

Oh, yay! A new tennis!

NOW YOU HAVE TWO TENNISES TO WORRY ABOUT JUTOMI

Jutomi · Post by **Jutomi** » Mon Mar 02, 2015 10:44 pm

Yeah, but, I took up the challenge,
and unless something bad happens,
I intend to stick to them both.

I have a feeling this will probably end up being
a slower tennis on both of our behalves, though.

Sofoulini · Post by **Sofoulini** » Mon Mar 02, 2015 10:50 pm

Oh yes...
Go on Jutomi.
I'm sure you will won in the end.
I support you my friend!!!

Be careful thought

Blake and Master Wonder Mage won't give up easily this challenge!!!

anklejbiter · Post by **anklejbiter** » Thu Mar 05, 2015 8:57 pm

I actually made it through the chomper part (luckily) in one try, with no saving. Yikes! I tottaly freaked out though, a full second...

anklejbiter · Post by **anklejbiter** » Thu Mar 05, 2015 11:24 pm

Loved it though.

garirry · Post by **garirry** » Fri Mar 06, 2015 1:48 am

Finally I repaired my computer, I can now play/make adventures!

That adventure was great. Is it normal that there is no music? The chomper part was a bit annoying, but overall, was not stressful. Thanks for that adventure.

loofisawesome · Post by **loofisawesome** » Fri Mar 06, 2015 1:50 am

You need to download MWM's POTZ music pack.

Master Wonder Mage · Post by **Master Wonder Mage** » Fri Mar 06, 2015 2:07 am

Ah, oops. I'll try to remember to post when music packs are needed.

Nearly all adventures I publish will use my music pack. Many will also use MNIK's as well.

Sofoulini · Post by **Sofoulini** » Fri Mar 06, 2015 10:30 pm

Oh my...The area with chompers is really hard.
It gives me a lot of nightmares and it's very hard...
I don't know how to pass it.

Jutomi · Post by **Jutomi** » Fri Mar 06, 2015 10:34 pm

There are a few ways to solve this segment.

The jest is that you use one pow charge on each chomper,
with the last charge being used on the TNT barrels.

Fast reflexes and great coordination is one solution.
Cheating's another. (:roll:)
Luck is yet another...

What I did to help me out was immediately go as far right as possible,
pow the lower-right chomper, go to the end, and

ANNIHILATE EVERYTHING IN SIGHT.

Sofoulini · Post by **Sofoulini** » Fri Mar 06, 2015 10:39 pm

Hm...I will try it when I will find time...
Well,thanks for the advice Jutomi !!!

garirry · Post by **garirry** » Fri Mar 06, 2015 10:51 pm

The important part is to not spam your charges; 8 will be used for the chompers, and you need the last one to finish the stage. I personally go slowly and first defeat the closest, and going on and on. You must do it quick, so you should definitely save the game before the match and keep going on until you win.

ab-47 · Post by **ab-47** » Sun Mar 22, 2015 5:11 pm

Great level, so far the plot is clear and fascinating. Hopefully I'd expect more levels from you, MWM.

Master Wonder Mage · Post by **Master Wonder Mage** » Mon Mar 23, 2015 2:00 am

ab-47 wrote:Great level, so far the plot is clear and fascinating. Hopefully I'd expect more levels from you, MWM.

Part 3 is coming. Some day. Having computer issues again which are slowing me down.

Master Wonder Mage · Post by **Master Wonder Mage** » Sat May 09, 2015 1:34 pm

Since Part 3 is underway again now that school is starting to wind down for me, I changed the file name to match the format I'll be using in the future. No idea why I wasn't using this format already.

No need to redownload if you don't care about the sorting, but, Jutomi, would you mind, when you get a chance, changing part 2's file name to "Void Mouth#ototvm002"

Jutomi · Post by **Jutomi** » Sat May 09, 2015 5:46 pm

Not at all; I was in fact thinking the same thing just reading that message.

Nobody · Post by **Nobody** » Mon Aug 17, 2015 4:48 am

I'm getting around to actually playing these adventures, this is a good first tennis part.

MyNameIsKooky · Post by **MyNameIsKooky** » Mon Aug 17, 2015 4:56 am

This was a nice adventure. My only complaint is that the non-puzzle areas feel sort of empty - when you have large open spaces like that, they could use some more scenery and/or NPCs (for instance, the courtyard from The Mysterious Duck Part 16 was a pretty great "large hub area").

Yzfm · Post by **Yzfm** » Mon Aug 17, 2015 10:11 am

Figured I'd play that as well. Great adventure indeed!

|Cookie| · Post by **|Cookie|** » Mon Aug 17, 2015 10:28 am

This adventure was good, I had a few minor problems with it, though. Mainly because of how the wlvs looked, they looked kinda "flat", I think alternating between walls' heights, adding rocks/mushrooms in a few places here and there and adding a few glowworms would've made the large empty area look a lot better, but that's a minor thing more than anything, so uh... yeah.
I also wished the mecha-chomper area was a little more forgiving.
Overall, it was a nice experience! Thanks for sharing it!

Master Wonder Mage · Post by **Master Wonder Mage** » Mon Aug 17, 2015 2:33 pm

Yeah, I will admit this was kinda lazy, especially on scenery, but hey. I made it in a single day. That's like, the fastest thing I've done since TMD4, or something.

Jutomi · Post by **Jutomi** » Thu May 04, 2017 5:56 pm

So, I'm well aware that it's a bit late for this - well over two years late, ok.

Still, here you go.

Part 1

Part 2

Part 3

On Top of the Void Mouth Part 1: Thwarting the Siege.

On Top of the Void Mouth Part 1: Thwarting the Siege.

Resistance of the Seige

Acceptance

Help Via Running Right

Info

Thwarting the Siege