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There was a planet called Wonderland. There was also stinker, Stinky, who lived there. One day he decided to take a stroll, for fun. Sometimes he ran and sometimes front flipped. Suddenly, an earthquake! He ran, and met a stinker named "Pootsie".
"Hello," said Stinky, "The name is Stinky, yours?"
"Pootsie." she replied.
Stinky said, "Have you felt the strange tremors recently?"
"Yes, these strange tremors also caused some trouble for me."
"Like What?" Stinky asked.
"Well, I was adventuring a cave with some wee stinkers, when these strange tremors happened. It blocked them off from me, and now I can't reach them! Can you help?" Pootsie said with a worried tone.
"Sure, I love adventures!" Stinky said,
"Great! Follow me, Stinky." Pootsie said, leading Stinky to the cave.

CHAPTER 1: A Detour To Take

"Are we there yet?" Stinky asked in boredom.
"Almost!" Pootsie said, approaching the cave entrance.
"Pootsie, are you sure this is the cave that you talked about?" Stinky asked.
"Sure is! Follow me Stinky, quickly!" Pootsie said leading Stinky into the cave.
"But why would wee stinkers come in here?"
"I dunno, curiosity?"
The two walked into the cave.
"It's very dark in here!" Stinky said, frightened.
"Don't tell me you're scared," Pootsie said in a smart way.
"No, why would I?" Stinky said, trying to be brave.
Pootsie giggled slightly, and they arrived to the destination.
"This is it, this is where I lost them." Pootsie said.
"Leave it to me!" Stinky said.
Later, Stinky comes out, with the wee stinkers.
"Well," Stinky said, "It was tough and annoying, but I got 'em."
"Yes! Lets get out of here." Pootsie said.
Then, a tremor happened!
"Lets get out of here, and fast! This cave is un-stable." Pootsie said.
Stinky, leading the way across a bridge, with the Wee stinkers following, the bridge collapsed, leaving Stinky on the other side.
"Oh no! The bridge collasped!" Pootsie said worried.
"Come on! Swim across!" Said the wee stinkers.
"I would, IF I WAS WATERPROOF! But don't worry, I'll find a way!" Stinky said walking into the Path of Fire.
"Good luck! Be careful!" Pootsie said, following the Wee Stinkers out of the cave.
Stinky was brave, 'I know I can do it. I can.' he thought. 'Even if I am acrobatic, I can still slip and fall into the chasm below, or be burnt to a crisp. Stinky was almost there after passing fire and ice. Just then he saw a Orange crystal.
"Wow!" he said, "I wonder whats it doing here." Stinky then took the crystal and made it out. Then he saw Pootsie and another stinker with her, he walked to them. Pootsie made eye contact with Stinky. "Yay, you're alive!" Pootsie said, "Here meet my friend Jedric."
"Hi Jedric, nice to meet you." Stinky said.
"Nice to meet you too, Stinky." Jedric said.
"Hey Jedric, do you know what this crystal is?" Stinky said.

just minor changes, or as i call it, a 'pencil' post

Ah.

There was a planet called Wonderland. There was also stinker, Stinky, who lived there. One day he decided to take a stroll, for fun. As he walked around, he suddenly felt several small earthquakes! He ran, and met a stinker named Pootsy.
"Hello," said Stinky, "The name is Stinky, yours?"
"Pootsy." she replied.
Stinky said, "Have you felt the strange tremors recently?"
"Yes, these strange tremors also caused some trouble for me."
"Like What?" Stinky asked.
"Well, I was adventuring a cave with some wee stinkers, when these strange tremors happened. It blocked them off from me, and now I can't reach them! Can you help?" Pootsy said with a worried tone.
"Sure, I love adventures!" Stinky said,
"Great! Follow me, Stinky." Pootsy said, leading Stinky to the cave.

CHAPTER 1: A Detour To Take

"Are we there yet?" Stinky asked in boredom.
"Almost!" Pootsy said, approaching the cave entrance.
"Pootsy, are you sure this is the cave that you talked about?" Stinky asked.
"Sure is! Follow me Stinky, quickly!" Pootsy said leading Stinky into the cave.
"But why would wee stinkers come in here?"
"I dunno, curiosity?"
The two walked into the cave.
"It's very dark in here!" Stinky said, frightened.
"Don't tell me you're scared," Pootsy said in a smart way.
"No, why would I?" Stinky said, trying to be brave.
Pootsy giggled slightly, and they arrived to the destination.
"This is it, this is where I lost them." Pootsy said.
"Leave it to me!" Stinky said.
Later, Stinky came out, with the wee stinkers.
"Well," Stinky said, "It was tough and annoying, but I got 'em."
"Yes! Lets get out of here." Pootsy said.
Then, a tremor occurred, and bridges collapsed along the route they used to travel into the cave.
"Lets get out of here, and fast! This cave is unstable!" Pootsy said.
Suddenly, the Wee Stinkers darted off. "Looks like they found a way out!", exclaimed Pootsy. However, as Pootsy followed the Wee Stinkers across the bridge, it collapsed.
Stinky was still on the other side!
"Oh no! The bridge collasped!" Pootsy said worriedly.
"Come on! Swim across!" said the wee stinkers.
"I would, IF I WAS WATERPROOF! But don't worry, I'll find a way!" Stinky said walking down into a side-cavern.
"Good luck! Be careful!" Pootsy said, following the Wee Stinkers out of the cave.
Stinky was traveling along, when he found a cave filled with gems.
"What luck!" thought Stinky.
After he collected all the gems, he saw blocking his path a passage filled with fire.
Stinky was brave. 'I know I can do it. I can,' he thought. 'Even if I am acrobatic, I can still slip and fall into the chasm below, or be burnt to a crisp." Finally, however, he made it through the passage. Unfortunately, a blue gate was blocking his way.
"I wonder how I can open this," Stinky said. After exploring for a while, he found an icy cave. He traveled through it, risking drowning several times.
After he unlocked the gate, he saw a beautiful orange crystal.
"Wow!" he said, "I wonder what it's doing here and what it is!" Stinky took the crystal and continued to the exit of the cave. Outside, he saw Pootsy with another Stinker in an orange top hat. He walked up to them. Pootsy made eye contact with Stinky. "Yay, you're alive!" Pootsy said, "Here meet my friend Jedlic."
"Hi Jedlic, nice to meet you." Stinky said.
"Nice to meet you too, Stinky." Jedlic said.
"Hey Jedlic, do you know what this crystal is?" Stinky said.
"No, but Morklin probably would," said Jedlic
"Morklin?" Stinky asked.
"Yes. He lives in Wondertown."
"How can I get there?"
"Take the road here to the east for about 3 Stinkometermiles."
"Okay. I'll get going."
"Wait..."
"What is it, Jedlic."
"You'll need a key to get there. It's in my basement."
"Well then, get it," Stinky says, beginning to get impatient,
"Well, there are scritters in my basement. I'm embarrassed to say it, but I'm afraid of scritters."
"Don't worry. I'll take care of them," Stinky said confidently.

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There was a planet called Wonderland. There was also stinker, Stinky, who lived there. One day he decided to take a stroll, for fun. Sometimes he ran and sometimes front flipped. Suddenly, an earthquake! He ran, and met a stinker named Pootsy.
"Hello," said Stinky, "The name is Stinky, yours?"
"Pootsy." she replied.
Stinky said, "Have you felt the strange tremors recently?"
"Yes, these strange tremors also caused some trouble for me."
"Like What?" Stinky asked.
"Well, I was adventuring a cave with some wee stinkers, when these strange tremors happened. It blocked them off from me, and now I can't reach them! Can you help?" Pootsy said with a worried tone.
"Sure, I love adventures!" Stinky said,
"Great! Follow me, Stinky." Pootsy said, leading Stinky to the cave.

CHAPTER 1: A Detour To Take

"Are we there yet?" Stinky asked in boredom.
"Almost!" Pootsy said, approaching the cave entrance.
"Pootsy, are you sure this is the cave that you talked about?" Stinky asked.
"Sure is! Follow me Stinky, quickly!" Pootsy said leading Stinky into the cave.
"But why would wee stinkers come in here?"
"I dunno, curiosity?"
The two walked into the cave.
"It's very dark in here!" Stinky said, frightened.
"Don't tell me you're scared," Pootsy said in a smart way.
"No, why would I?" Stinky said, trying to be brave.
Pootsy giggled slightly, and they arrived to the destination.
"This is it, this is where I lost them." Pootsy said.
"Leave it to me!" Stinky said.
Later, Stinky came out, with the wee stinkers.
"Well," Stinky said, "It was tough and annoying, but I got 'em."
"Yes! Lets get out of here." Pootsy said.
Then, a tremor occurred, and bridges collapsed along the route they used to travel into the cave.
"Lets get out of here, and fast! This cave is unstable!" Pootsy said.
Suddenly, the Wee Stinkers darted off. "Looks like they found a way out!", exclaimed Pootsy. However, as Pootsy followed the Wee Stinkers across the bridge, it collapsed.
Stinky was still on the other side!
"Oh no! The bridge collasped!" Pootsie said worriedly.
"Come on! Swim across!" said the wee stinkers.
"I would, IF I WAS WATERPROOF! But don't worry, I'll find a way!" Stinky said walking down into a side-cavern.
"Good luck! Be careful!" Pootsie said, following the Wee Stinkers out of the cave.
Stinky was traveling along, when he found a cave filled with gems.
"What luck!" thought Stinky.
After he collected all the gems, he saw blocking his path a passage filled with fire.
Stinky was brave, 'I know I can do it. I can.' he thought. 'Even if I am acrobatic, I can still slip and fall into the chasm below, or be burnt to a crisp." Finally, however, he made it through the passage. Unfortunately, a blue gate was blocking his way.
"I wonder how I can open this," Stinky said. After exploring for a while, he found an icy cave. He traveled through it, risking drowning several times.
After he unlocked the gate, he saw a beautiful orange crystal.
"Wow!" he said, "I wonder what it's doing here and what it is!" Stinky took the crystal and continued to the exit of the cave. Outside, he saw Pootsy with another Stinker in an orange top hat. He walked up to them. Pootsy made eye contact with Stinky. "Yay, you're alive!" Pootsy said, "Here meet my friend Jedlic."
"Hi Jedlic, nice to meet you." Stinky said.
"Nice to meet you too, Stinky." Jedlic said.
"Hey Jedlic, do you know what this crystal is?" Stinky said.
"No, but Morklin probably would," said Jedlic
"Morklin?" Stinky asked.
"Yes. He lives in Wondertown."
"How can I get there?"
"Take the road here to the east for about 3 Stinkometermiles."
"Okay. I'll get going."
"Wait..."
"What is it, Jedlic?"
"You'll need a key to get there. It's in my basement."
"Well then, get it," Stinky says, beginning to get impatient,
"Well, there are scritters in my basement. I'm embarrassed to say it, but I'm afraid of scritters."
"Don't worry. I'll take care of them," Stinky said confidently.

END CHAP. 1

BEGIN CHAP. 2

Book 1: From Shards To Pools (Orange Shard-Rainbow Temple)
Book 2: A Forest, A Desert, And A Void (Forbidden Forest-The Void)
Book 3: Voyage To Fire Island, Part I
Book 4: Voyage To Fire Island, Part II

Wonderland Adventures: Book 1: From Shards To Pools

Table Of Contents:
PROLOUGE: The Beginning Of A New Adventure
Chapter 1: A Detour To Take
Chapter 2: Windmill Of Creatures
Chapter 3: The Magic Gloves
Chapter 4: Morklin The Wizard
Chapter 5: The Sewers, Part 1
Chapter 6: A Recap Of Small Proportions
Chapter 7: The Sewers, Part II: The Indigo Shard
Chapter 8: Mushroom Grove
Chapter 9: Caves Of Ice
Chapter 10: Welcome To The Foggy Mountains
Chapter 11: Foggy Mountains II: The Blue Shard
Chapter 12: The Rainbow Temple

CHAPTER 2: Windmill Of Creatures

"It's okay, Stinky, I know its dark and all, but all I gotta get is just a key..." Stinky clapped twice. A light turned on.

There was a planet called Wonderland. There was also stinker, Stinky, who lived there. One day he decided to take a stroll, for fun. Sometimes he ran and sometimes front flipped. Suddenly, an earthquake! He ran, and met a stinker named Pootsy.
"Hello," said Stinky, "The name is Stinky, yours?"
"Pootsy." she replied.
Stinky said, "Have you felt the strange tremors recently?"
"Yes, these strange tremors also caused some trouble for me."
"Like What?" Stinky asked.
"Well, I was adventuring a cave with some wee stinkers, when these strange tremors happened. It blocked them off from me, and now I can't reach them! Can you help?" Pootsy said with a worried tone.
"Sure, I love adventures!" Stinky said,
"Great! Follow me, Stinky." Pootsy said, leading Stinky to the cave.

CHAPTER 1: A Detour To Take

"Are we there yet?" Stinky asked in boredom.
"Almost!" Pootsy said, approaching the cave entrance.
"Pootsy, are you sure this is the cave that you talked about?" Stinky asked.
"Sure is! Follow me Stinky, quickly!" Pootsy said leading Stinky into the cave.
"But why would wee stinkers come in here?"
"I dunno, curiosity?"
The two walked into the cave.
"It's very dark in here!" Stinky said, frightened.
"Don't tell me you're scared," Pootsy said in a smart way.
"No, why would I?" Stinky said, trying to be brave.
Pootsy giggled slightly, and they arrived to the destination.
"This is it, this is where I lost them." Pootsy said.
"Leave it to me!" Stinky said.
Later, Stinky came out, with the wee stinkers.
"Well," Stinky said, "It was tough and annoying, but I got 'em."
"Yes! Lets get out of here." Pootsy said.
Then, a tremor occurred, and bridges collapsed along the route they used to travel into the cave.
"Lets get out of here, and fast! This cave is unstable!" Pootsy said.
Suddenly, the Wee Stinkers darted off. "Looks like they found a way out!", exclaimed Pootsy. However, as Pootsy followed the Wee Stinkers across the bridge, it collapsed.
Stinky was still on the other side!
"Oh no! The bridge collasped!" Pootsie said worriedly.
"Come on! Swim across!" said the wee stinkers.
"I would, IF I WAS WATERPROOF! But don't worry, I'll find a way!" Stinky said walking down into a side-cavern.
"Good luck! Be careful!" Pootsie said, following the Wee Stinkers out of the cave.
Stinky was traveling along, when he found a cave filled with gems.
"What luck!" thought Stinky.
After he collected all the gems, he saw blocking his path a passage filled with fire.
Stinky was brave, 'I know I can do it. I can.' he thought. 'Even if I am acrobatic, I can still slip and fall into the chasm below, or be burnt to a crisp." Finally, however, he made it through the passage. Unfortunately, a blue gate was blocking his way.
"I wonder how I can open this," Stinky said. After exploring for a while, he found an icy cave. He traveled through it, risking drowning several times.
After he unlocked the gate, he saw a beautiful orange crystal.
"Wow!" he said, "I wonder what it's doing here and what it is!" Stinky took the crystal and continued to the exit of the cave. Outside, he saw Pootsy with another Stinker in an orange top hat. He walked up to them. Pootsy made eye contact with Stinky. "Yay, you're alive!" Pootsy said, "Here meet my friend Jedlic."
"Hi Jedlic, nice to meet you." Stinky said.
"Nice to meet you too, Stinky." Jedlic said.
"Hey Jedlic, do you know what this crystal is?" Stinky said.
"No, but Morklin probably would," said Jedlic
"Morklin?" Stinky asked.
"Yes. He lives in Wondertown."
"How can I get there?"
"Take the road here to the east for about 3 Stinkometermiles."
"Okay. I'll get going."
"Wait..."
"What is it, Jedlic?"
"You'll need a key to get there. It's in my basement."
"Well then, get it," Stinky says, beginning to get impatient,
"Well, there are scritters in my basement. I'm embarrassed to say it, but I'm afraid of scritters."
"Don't worry. I'll take care of them," Stinky said confidently.
CHAPTER 2: Windmill Of Creatures

"It's okay, Stinky, I know its dark and all, but all I gotta get is just a key..." Stinky clapped twice. A light turned on. Stinky was quietly walking around the place, then he saw a little cute scritter. "Hi cute little scritter, you may be cute but you must get out of here.

By the way, my idea for revised chapters. The windmill doesn't seem important enough to have it's own chapter.
PROLOUGE: The Beginning Of A New Adventure
Chapter 1: A Detour To Take
Chapter 2: The Road To Wondertown
Chapter 3: Meet Morklin the Wizard
Chapter 4: Into the Sewers
Chapter 5: Horace's Dilemna
Chapter 6: Catching the Thief
Chapter 7: The Mushroom Grove
Chapter 8: Exploring Wondertown
Chapter 9: South of the Foggy Mountains
Chapter 10: Welcome To The Foggy Mountains
Chapter 11: The Blue Shard
Chapter 12: The Rainbow Temple

Emerald141 wrote:is dere problem?

No offense, but literature versions of video games almost always turn out to be hilariously bad, like this one.

MyNameIsKooky wrote:

Emerald141 wrote:is dere problem?

No offense, but literature versions of video games almost always turn out to be hilariously bad, like this one.

So? It's something to waste time on.

Whoa... I actually remembered to use the quote button.

Master Wonder Mage wrote:

MyNameIsKooky wrote:

Emerald141 wrote:is dere problem?

No offense, but literature versions of video games almost always turn out to be hilariously bad, like this one.

So? It's something to waste time on.

Whoa... I actually remembered to use the quote button.

If you insist. :p

MyNameIsKooky wrote:

Emerald141 wrote:is dere problem?

No offense, but literature versions of video games almost always turn out to be hilariously bad, like this one.

Except this one.

http://evinagears.com/

IF I WAS WATERPROOF!!!


But writing ALL of the adventures in WA could make a veeery long and tedious book. Maybe you could choose one adventure, and write a long description of how Stinky solved it. This would give readers the experience of WA puzzles, but not soooo many it gets boring.

tyteen4a03 wrote:

MyNameIsKooky wrote:

Emerald141 wrote:is dere problem?

No offense, but literature versions of video games almost always turn out to be hilariously bad, like this one.

Except this one.

http://evinagears.com/

That's fanfiction, which isn't what I'm referring to.

MyNameIsKooky wrote:

tyteen4a03 wrote:

MyNameIsKooky wrote:

Emerald141 wrote:is dere problem?

No offense, but literature versions of video games almost always turn out to be hilariously bad, like this one.

Except this one.

http://evinagears.com/

That's fanfiction, which isn't what I'm referring to.

Oh, Toontown didn't really have a storyline anyways.

But the style of how evina wrote can be referred to.

tyteen4a03 wrote:

MyNameIsKooky wrote:

Emerald141 wrote:is dere problem?

No offense, but literature versions of video games almost always turn out to be hilariously bad, like this one.

Except this one.

http://evinagears.com/

...I actually didn't like Gears...

(No offense.)

There was a planet called Wonderland. There was also stinker, Stinky, who lived there. One day he decided to take a stroll, for fun. Sometimes he ran and sometimes front flipped. Suddenly, an earthquake! He ran, and met a stinker named Pootsy.
"Hello," said Stinky, "The name is Stinky, yours?"
"Pootsy." she replied.
Stinky said, "Have you felt the strange tremors recently?"
"Yes, these strange tremors also caused some trouble for me."
"Like What?" Stinky asked.
"Well, I was adventuring a cave with some wee stinkers, when these strange tremors happened. It blocked them off from me, and now I can't reach them! Can you help?" Pootsy said with a worried tone.
"Sure, I love adventures!" Stinky said,
"Great! Follow me, Stinky." Pootsy said, leading Stinky to the cave.

CHAPTER 1: A Detour To Take

"Are we there yet?" Stinky asked in boredom.
"Almost!" Pootsy said, approaching the cave entrance.
"Pootsy, are you sure this is the cave that you talked about?" Stinky asked.
"Sure is! Follow me Stinky, quickly!" Pootsy said leading Stinky into the cave.
"But why would wee stinkers come in here?"
"I dunno, curiosity?"
The two walked into the cave.
"It's very dark in here!" Stinky said, frightened.
"Don't tell me you're scared," Pootsy said in a smart way.
"No, why would I?" Stinky said, trying to be brave.
Pootsy giggled slightly, and they arrived to the destination.
"This is it, this is where I lost them." Pootsy said.
"Leave it to me!" Stinky said.
Later, Stinky came out, with the wee stinkers.
"Well," Stinky said, "It was tough and annoying, but I got 'em."
"Yes! Lets get out of here." Pootsy said.
Then, a tremor occurred, and bridges collapsed along the route they used to travel into the cave.
"Lets get out of here, and fast! This cave is unstable!" Pootsy said.
Suddenly, the Wee Stinkers darted off. "Looks like they found a way out!", exclaimed Pootsy. However, as Pootsy followed the Wee Stinkers across the bridge, it collapsed.
Stinky was still on the other side!
"Oh no! The bridge collasped!" Pootsie said worriedly.
"Come on! Swim across!" said the wee stinkers.
"I would, IF I WAS WATERPROOF! But don't worry, I'll find a way!" Stinky said walking down into a side-cavern.
"Good luck! Be careful!" Pootsie said, following the Wee Stinkers out of the cave.
Stinky was traveling along, when he found a cave filled with gems.
"What luck!" thought Stinky.
After he collected all the gems, he saw blocking his path a passage filled with fire.
Stinky was brave, 'I know I can do it. I can.' he thought. 'Even if I am acrobatic, I can still slip and fall into the chasm below, or be burnt to a crisp." Finally, however, he made it through the passage. Unfortunately, a blue gate was blocking his way.
"I wonder how I can open this," Stinky said. After exploring for a while, he found an icy cave. He traveled through it, risking drowning several times.
After he unlocked the gate, he saw a beautiful orange crystal.
"Wow!" he said, "I wonder what it's doing here and what it is!" Stinky took the crystal and continued to the exit of the cave. Outside, he saw Pootsy with another Stinker in an orange top hat. He walked up to them. Pootsy made eye contact with Stinky. "Yay, you're alive!" Pootsy said, "Here meet my friend Jedlic."
"Hi Jedlic, nice to meet you." Stinky said.
"Nice to meet you too, Stinky." Jedlic said.
"Hey Jedlic, do you know what this crystal is?" Stinky said.
"No, but Morklin probably would," said Jedlic
"Morklin?" Stinky asked.
"Yes. He lives in Wondertown."
"How can I get there?"
"Take the road here to the east for about 3 Stinkometermiles."
"Okay. I'll get going."
"Wait..."
"What is it, Jedlic?"
"You'll need a key to get there. It's in my basement."
"Well then, get it!" Stinky says, beginning to get impatient,
"Well, there are scritters in my basement. I'm embarrassed to say it, but I'm afraid of scritters."
"Don't worry. I'll take care of them," Stinky said confidently.
Stinky walked in.
"Hey wait! You forgot the lantern!"
Stinky was already in the basement.
"It's okay, Stinky, I know its dark and all, but all I gotta get is just a key..." Stinky clapped twice. A light turned on. Stinky was quietly walking around the place, then he saw a little cute scritter. "Hi cute little scritter, you may be cute but you must get out of here."
Stinky kicked it into a nearby cage, which made a 'Nyak!' sound. "Oh boy, chompers."
Stinky's eyes started to adjust. "That's better!" he said. Stinky saw more, and kicked them.
Stinky saw a key, and grabbed it, and got outside.



I wonder if MS will see this. I've always wanted to be featured on the Midnight Post.

There was a planet called Wonderland. There was also stinker, Stinky, who lived there. One day he decided to take a stroll, for fun. Sometimes he ran and sometimes front flipped. Suddenly, an earthquake! He ran, and met a stinker named Pootsy.
"Hello," said Stinky, "The name is Stinky, yours?"
"Pootsy." she replied.
Stinky said, "Have you felt the strange tremors recently?"
"Yes, these strange tremors also caused some trouble for me."
"Like What?" Stinky asked.
"Well, I was adventuring a cave with some wee stinkers, when these strange tremors happened. It blocked them off from me, and now I can't reach them! Can you help?" Pootsy said with a worried tone.
"Sure, I love adventures!" Stinky said,
"Great! Follow me, Stinky." Pootsy said, leading Stinky to the cave.

CHAPTER 1: A Detour To Take

"Are we there yet?" Stinky asked in boredom.
"Almost!" Pootsy said, approaching the cave entrance.
"Pootsy, are you sure this is the cave that you talked about?" Stinky asked.
"Sure is! Follow me Stinky, quickly!" Pootsy said leading Stinky into the cave.
"But why would wee stinkers come in here?"
"I dunno, curiosity?"
The two walked into the cave.
"It's very dark in here!" Stinky said, frightened.
"Don't tell me you're scared," Pootsy said in a smart way.
"No, why would I?" Stinky said, trying to be brave.
Pootsy giggled slightly, and they arrived to the destination.
"This is it, this is where I lost them." Pootsy said.
"Leave it to me!" Stinky said.
Later, Stinky came out, with the wee stinkers.
"Well," Stinky said, "It was tough and annoying, but I got 'em."
"Yes! Lets get out of here." Pootsy said.
Then, a tremor occurred, and bridges collapsed along the route they used to travel into the cave.
"Lets get out of here, and fast! This cave is unstable!" Pootsy said.
Suddenly, the Wee Stinkers darted off. "Looks like they found a way out!", exclaimed Pootsy. However, as Pootsy followed the Wee Stinkers across the bridge, it collapsed.
Stinky was still on the other side!
"Oh no! The bridge collasped!" Pootsie said worriedly.
"Come on! Swim across!" said the wee stinkers.
"I would, IF I WAS WATERPROOF! But don't worry, I'll find a way!" Stinky said walking down into a side-cavern.
"Good luck! Be careful!" Pootsie said, following the Wee Stinkers out of the cave.
Stinky was traveling along, when he found a cave filled with gems.
"What luck!" thought Stinky.
After he collected all the gems, he saw blocking his path a passage filled with fire.
Stinky was brave, 'I know I can do it. I can.' he thought. 'Even if I am acrobatic, I can still slip and fall into the chasm below, or be burnt to a crisp." Finally, however, he made it through the passage. Unfortunately, a blue gate was blocking his way.
"I wonder how I can open this," Stinky said. After exploring for a while, he found an icy cave. He traveled through it, risking drowning several times.
After he unlocked the gate, he saw a beautiful orange crystal.
"Wow!" he said, "I wonder what it's doing here and what it is!" Stinky took the crystal and continued to the exit of the cave. Outside, he saw Pootsy with another Stinker in an orange top hat. He walked up to them. Pootsy made eye contact with Stinky. "Yay, you're alive!" Pootsy said, "Here meet my friend Jedlic."
"Hi Jedlic, nice to meet you." Stinky said.
"Nice to meet you too, Stinky." Jedlic said.
"Hey Jedlic, do you know what this crystal is?" Stinky said.
"No, but Morklin probably would," said Jedlic
"Morklin?" Stinky asked.
"Yes. He lives in Wondertown."
"How can I get there?"
"Take the road here to the east for about 3 Stinkometermiles."
"Okay. I'll get going."
"Wait..."
"What is it, Jedlic?"
"You'll need a key to get there. It's in my basement."
"Well then, get it!" Stinky says, beginning to get impatient,
"Well, there are scritters in my basement. I'm embarrassed to say it, but I'm afraid of scritters."
"Don't worry. I'll take care of them," Stinky said confidently.
Stinky walked in.
"Hey wait! You forgot the lantern!"
Stinky was already in the basement.
"It's okay, Stinky, I know its dark and all, but all I gotta get is just a key..." Stinky clapped twice. A light turned on. Stinky was quietly walking around the place, then he saw a little cute scritter. "Hi cute little scritter, you may be cute but you must get out of here."
Stinky kicked it into a nearby cage, which made a 'Nyak!' sound. "Oh boy, chompers."
Stinky's eyes started to adjust. "That's better!" he said. Stinky saw more, and kicked them.
Stinky saw a key, and grabbed it, and got outside.
"Ok I got it" said Stinky,
So Pootsie and the wee stinkers waved goodbye to him as he went on a big journey.

There was a planet called Wonderland. There was also stinker, Stinky, who lived there. One day he decided to take a stroll, for fun. Sometimes he ran and sometimes front flipped. Suddenly, an earthquake! He ran, and met a stinker named Pootsy.
"Hello," said Stinky, "The name is Stinky, yours?"
"Pootsy." she replied.
Stinky said, "Have you felt the strange tremors recently?"
"Yes, these strange tremors also caused some trouble for me."
"Like What?" Stinky asked.
"Well, I was adventuring a cave with some wee stinkers, when these strange tremors happened. It blocked them off from me, and now I can't reach them! Can you help?" Pootsy said with a worried tone.
"Sure, I love adventures!" Stinky said,
"Great! Follow me, Stinky." Pootsy said, leading Stinky to the cave.

CHAPTER 1: A Detour To Take

"Are we there yet?" Stinky asked in boredom.
"Almost!" Pootsy said, approaching the cave entrance.
"Pootsy, are you sure this is the cave that you talked about?" Stinky asked.
"Sure is! Follow me Stinky, quickly!" Pootsy said leading Stinky into the cave.
"But why would wee stinkers come in here?"
"I dunno, curiosity?"
The two walked into the cave.
"It's very dark in here!" Stinky said, frightened.
"Don't tell me you're scared," Pootsy said in a smart way.
"No, why would I?" Stinky said, trying to be brave.
Pootsy giggled slightly, and they arrived to the destination.
"This is it, this is where I lost them." Pootsy said.
"Leave it to me!" Stinky said.
Later, Stinky came out, with the wee stinkers.
"Well," Stinky said, "It was tough and annoying, but I got 'em."
"Yes! Lets get out of here." Pootsy said.
Then, a tremor occurred, and bridges collapsed along the route they used to travel into the cave.
"Lets get out of here, and fast! This cave is unstable!" Pootsy said.
Suddenly, the Wee Stinkers darted off. "Looks like they found a way out!", exclaimed Pootsy. However, as Pootsy followed the Wee Stinkers across the bridge, it collapsed.
Stinky was still on the other side!
"Oh no! The bridge collasped!" Pootsie said worriedly.
"Come on! Swim across!" said the wee stinkers.
"I would, IF I WAS WATERPROOF! But don't worry, I'll find a way!" Stinky said walking down into a side-cavern.
"Good luck! Be careful!" Pootsie said, following the Wee Stinkers out of the cave.
Stinky was traveling along, when he found a cave filled with gems.
"What luck!" thought Stinky.
After he collected all the gems, he saw blocking his path a passage filled with fire.
Stinky was brave, 'I know I can do it. I can.' he thought. 'Even if I am acrobatic, I can still slip and fall into the chasm below, or be burnt to a crisp." Finally, however, he made it through the passage. Unfortunately, a blue gate was blocking his way.
"I wonder how I can open this," Stinky said. After exploring for a while, he found an icy cave. He traveled through it, risking drowning several times.
After he unlocked the gate, he saw a beautiful orange crystal.
"Wow!" he said, "I wonder what it's doing here and what it is!" Stinky took the crystal and continued to the exit of the cave. Outside, he saw Pootsy with another Stinker in an orange top hat. He walked up to them. Pootsy made eye contact with Stinky. "Yay, you're alive!" Pootsy said, "Here meet my friend Jedlic."
"Hi Jedlic, nice to meet you." Stinky said.
"Nice to meet you too, Stinky." Jedlic said.
"Hey Jedlic, do you know what this crystal is?" Stinky said.
"No, but Morklin probably would," said Jedlic
"Morklin?" Stinky asked.
"Yes. He lives in Wondertown."
"How can I get there?"
"Take the road here to the east for about 3 Stinkometermiles."
"Okay. I'll get going."
"Wait..."
"What is it, Jedlic?"
"You'll need a key to get there. It's in my basement."
"Well then, get it!" Stinky says, beginning to get impatient,
"Well, there are scritters in my basement. I'm embarrassed to say it, but I'm afraid of scritters."
"Don't worry. I'll take care of them," Stinky said confidently.
Stinky walked in.
"Hey wait! You forgot the lantern!"
Stinky was already in the basement.
"It's okay, Stinky, I know its dark and all, but all I gotta get is just a key..." Stinky clapped twice. A light turned on. Stinky was quietly walking around the place, then he saw a little cute scritter. "Hi cute little scritter, you may be cute but you must get out of here."
Stinky kicked it into a nearby cage, which made a 'Nyak!' sound. "Oh boy, chompers."
Stinky's eyes started to adjust. "That's better!" he said. Stinky saw more, and kicked them.
Stinky saw a key, and grabbed it, and got outside.
"Ok I got it" said Stinky,
So Pootsie and the wee stinkers waved goodbye to him as he went on a big journey.
We walked toward Wondertown. On the path, he saw a sign. It said:
"Wondertown
3 stinkometermiles".
It meant that Wondertown is 3 stinkometermiles away. Duh.

There. I put 2 setences. Now I got a bit of credit.

boywhoflies wrote: We walked toward Wondertown. On the path, he saw a sign. It said:
"Wondertown
3 stinkometermiles".
It meant that Wondertown is 3 stinkometermiles away. Duh.

There. I put 2 setences. Now I got a bit of credit.

Yay, point of view change, yay!

Typo. I need to type slower. XD

There was a planet called Wonderland. There was also stinker, Stinky, who lived there. One day he decided to take a stroll, for fun. Sometimes he ran and sometimes front flipped. Suddenly, an earthquake! He ran, and met a stinker named Pootsy.
"Hello," said Stinky, "The name is Stinky, yours?"
"Pootsy." she replied.
Stinky said, "Have you felt the strange tremors recently?"
"Yes, these strange tremors also caused some trouble for me."
"Like What?" Stinky asked.
"Well, I was adventuring a cave with some wee stinkers, when these strange tremors happened. It blocked them off from me, and now I can't reach them! Can you help?" Pootsy said with a worried tone.
"Sure, I love adventures!" Stinky said,
"Great! Follow me, Stinky." Pootsy said, leading Stinky to the cave.

CHAPTER 1: A Detour To Take

"Are we there yet?" Stinky asked in boredom.
"Almost!" Pootsy said, approaching the cave entrance.
"Pootsy, are you sure this is the cave that you talked about?" Stinky asked.
"Sure is! Follow me Stinky, quickly!" Pootsy said leading Stinky into the cave.
"But why would wee stinkers come in here?"
"I dunno, curiosity?"
The two walked into the cave.
"It's very dark in here!" Stinky said, frightened.
"Don't tell me you're scared," Pootsy said in a smart way.
"No, why would I?" Stinky said, trying to be brave.
Pootsy giggled slightly, and they arrived to the destination.
"This is it, this is where I lost them." Pootsy said.
"Leave it to me!" Stinky said.
Later, Stinky came out, with the wee stinkers.
"Well," Stinky said, "It was tough and annoying, but I got 'em."
"Yes! Lets get out of here." Pootsy said.
Then, a tremor occurred, and bridges collapsed along the route they used to travel into the cave.
"Lets get out of here, and fast! This cave is unstable!" Pootsy said.
Suddenly, the Wee Stinkers darted off. "Looks like they found a way out!", exclaimed Pootsy. However, as Pootsy followed the Wee Stinkers across the bridge, it collapsed.
Stinky was still on the other side!
"Oh no! The bridge collasped!" Pootsie said worriedly.
"Come on! Swim across!" said the wee stinkers.
"I would, IF I WAS WATERPROOF! But don't worry, I'll find a way!" Stinky said walking down into a side-cavern.
"Good luck! Be careful!" Pootsie said, following the Wee Stinkers out of the cave.
Stinky was traveling along, when he found a cave filled with gems.
"What luck!" thought Stinky.
After he collected all the gems, he saw blocking his path a passage filled with fire.
Stinky was brave, 'I know I can do it. I can.' he thought. 'Even if I am acrobatic, I can still slip and fall into the chasm below, or be burnt to a crisp." Finally, however, he made it through the passage. Unfortunately, a blue gate was blocking his way.
"I wonder how I can open this," Stinky said. After exploring for a while, he found an icy cave. He traveled through it, risking drowning several times.
After he unlocked the gate, he saw a beautiful orange crystal.
"Wow!" he said, "I wonder what it's doing here and what it is!" Stinky took the crystal and continued to the exit of the cave. Outside, he saw Pootsy with another Stinker in an orange top hat. He walked up to them. Pootsy made eye contact with Stinky. "Yay, you're alive!" Pootsy said, "Here meet my friend Jedlic."
"Hi Jedlic, nice to meet you." Stinky said.
"Nice to meet you too, Stinky." Jedlic said.
"Hey Jedlic, do you know what this crystal is?" Stinky said.
"No, but Morklin probably would," said Jedlic
"Morklin?" Stinky asked.
"Yes. He lives in Wondertown."
"How can I get there?"
"Take the road here to the east for about 3 Stinkometermiles."
"Okay. I'll get going."
"Wait..."
"What is it, Jedlic?"
"You'll need a key to get there. It's in my basement."
"Well then, get it!" Stinky says, beginning to get impatient,
"Well, there are scritters in my basement. I'm embarrassed to say it, but I'm afraid of scritters."
"Don't worry. I'll take care of them," Stinky said confidently.
Stinky walked in.
"Hey wait! You forgot the lantern!"
Stinky was already in the basement.
"It's okay, Stinky, I know its dark and all, but all I gotta get is just a key..." Stinky clapped twice. A light turned on. Stinky was quietly walking around the place, then he saw a little cute scritter. "Hi cute little scritter, you may be cute but you must get out of here."
Stinky kicked it into a nearby cage, which made a 'Nyak!' sound. "Oh boy, chompers."
Stinky's eyes started to adjust. "That's better!" he said. Stinky saw more, and kicked them.
Stinky saw a key, and grabbed it, and got outside.
"Ok I got it" said Stinky,
So Pootsie and the wee stinkers waved goodbye to him as he went on a big journey.
He walked toward Wondertown. On the path, he saw a sign. It said:
"Wondertown
3 stinkometermiles".
It meant that Wondertown is 3 stinkometermiles away. Duh.

Typo. I need to type slower. XD

There was a planet called Wonderland. There was also stinker, Stinky, who lived there. One day he decided to take a stroll, for fun. Sometimes he ran and sometimes front flipped. Suddenly, an earthquake! He ran, and met a stinker named Pootsy.
"Hello," said Stinky, "The name is Stinky, yours?"
"Pootsy." she replied.
Stinky said, "Have you felt the strange tremors recently?"
"Yes, these strange tremors also caused some trouble for me."
"Like What?" Stinky asked.
"Well, I was adventuring a cave with some wee stinkers, when these strange tremors happened. It blocked them off from me, and now I can't reach them! Can you help?" Pootsy said with a worried tone.
"Sure, I love adventures!" Stinky said,
"Great! Follow me, Stinky." Pootsy said, leading Stinky to the cave.

CHAPTER 1: A Detour To Take

"Are we there yet?" Stinky asked in boredom.
"Almost!" Pootsy said, approaching the cave entrance.
"Pootsy, are you sure this is the cave that you talked about?" Stinky asked.
"Sure is! Follow me Stinky, quickly!" Pootsy said leading Stinky into the cave.
"But why would wee stinkers come in here?"
"I dunno, curiosity?"
The two walked into the cave.
"It's very dark in here!" Stinky said, frightened.
"Don't tell me you're scared," Pootsy said in a smart way.
"No, why would I?" Stinky said, trying to be brave.
Pootsy giggled slightly, and they arrived to the destination.
"This is it, this is where I lost them." Pootsy said.
"Leave it to me!" Stinky said.
Later, Stinky came out, with the wee stinkers.
"Well," Stinky said, "It was tough and annoying, but I got 'em."
"Yes! Lets get out of here." Pootsy said.
Then, a tremor occurred, and bridges collapsed along the route they used to travel into the cave.
"Lets get out of here, and fast! This cave is unstable!" Pootsy said.
Suddenly, the Wee Stinkers darted off. "Looks like they found a way out!", exclaimed Pootsy. However, as Pootsy followed the Wee Stinkers across the bridge, it collapsed.
Stinky was still on the other side!
"Oh no! The bridge collasped!" Pootsie said worriedly.
"Come on! Swim across!" said the wee stinkers.
"I would, IF I WAS WATERPROOF! But don't worry, I'll find a way!" Stinky said walking down into a side-cavern.
"Good luck! Be careful!" Pootsie said, following the Wee Stinkers out of the cave.
Stinky was traveling along, when he found a cave filled with gems.
"What luck!" thought Stinky.
After he collected all the gems, he saw blocking his path a passage filled with fire.
Stinky was brave, 'I know I can do it. I can.' he thought. 'Even if I am acrobatic, I can still slip and fall into the chasm below, or be burnt to a crisp." Finally, however, he made it through the passage. Unfortunately, a blue gate was blocking his way.
"I wonder how I can open this," Stinky said. After exploring for a while, he found an icy cave. He traveled through it, risking drowning several times.
After he unlocked the gate, he saw a beautiful orange crystal.
"Wow!" he said, "I wonder what it's doing here and what it is!" Stinky took the crystal and continued to the exit of the cave. Outside, he saw Pootsy with another Stinker in an orange top hat. He walked up to them. Pootsy made eye contact with Stinky. "Yay, you're alive!" Pootsy said, "Here meet my friend Jedlic."
"Hi Jedlic, nice to meet you." Stinky said.
"Nice to meet you too, Stinky." Jedlic said.
"Hey Jedlic, do you know what this crystal is?" Stinky said.
"No, but Morklin probably would," said Jedlic
"Morklin?" Stinky asked.
"Yes. He lives in Wondertown."
"How can I get there?"
"Take the road here to the east for about 3 Stinkometermiles."
"Okay. I'll get going."
"Wait..."
"What is it, Jedlic?"
"You'll need a key to get there. It's in my basement."
"Well then, get it!" Stinky says, beginning to get impatient,
"Well, there are scritters in my basement. I'm embarrassed to say it, but I'm afraid of scritters."
"Don't worry. I'll take care of them," Stinky said confidently.
Stinky walked in.
"Hey wait! You forgot the lantern!"
Stinky was already in the basement.
"It's okay, Stinky, I know its dark and all, but all I gotta get is just a key..." Stinky clapped twice. A light turned on. Stinky was quietly walking around the place, then he saw a little cute scritter. "Hi cute little scritter, you may be cute but you must get out of here."
Stinky kicked it into a nearby cage, which made a 'Nyak!' sound. "Oh boy, chompers."
Stinky's eyes started to adjust. "That's better!" he said. Stinky saw more, and kicked them.
Stinky saw a key, and grabbed it, and got outside.
"Ok I got it" said Stinky,
So Pootsie and the wee stinkers waved goodbye to him as he went on a big journey.
He walked toward Wondertown. On the path, he saw a sign. It said:
"Wondertown
3 stinkometermiles".
It meant that Wondertown is 3 stinkometermiles away. Duh.
Stinky began to walk to Wondertown when he met a stinker with a purple wizard hat.
"Hello! I'm Cedric-in-the-Morning!" said the stinker. "The purple magic of the rainbow allows you to teleport! You can even teleport OVER WATER!"
"OH YEAH!" Stinky said, then proceeding to play a nonexistant quitar.
"However," Cedric-in-the-Morning continued, "you need gloves to do Magic... AND THE NEAREST PAIR OF GLOVES IS IN A CAVE!!!"
"Aww!" Stinky said.

You copied my typo message, just so you know.

There was a planet called Wonderland. There was also stinker, Stinky, who lived there. One day he decided to take a stroll, for fun. Sometimes he ran and sometimes front flipped. Suddenly, an earthquake! He ran, and met a stinker named Pootsy.
"Hello," said Stinky, "The name is Stinky, yours?"
"Pootsy." she replied.
Stinky said, "Have you felt the strange tremors recently?"
"Yes, these strange tremors also caused some trouble for me."
"Like What?" Stinky asked.
"Well, I was adventuring a cave with some wee stinkers, when these strange tremors happened. It blocked them off from me, and now I can't reach them! Can you help?" Pootsy said with a worried tone.
"Sure, I love adventures!" Stinky said,
"Great! Follow me, Stinky." Pootsy said, leading Stinky to the cave.

CHAPTER 1: A Detour To Take

"Are we there yet?" Stinky asked in boredom.
"Almost!" Pootsy said, approaching the cave entrance.
"Pootsy, are you sure this is the cave that you talked about?" Stinky asked.
"Sure is! Follow me Stinky, quickly!" Pootsy said leading Stinky into the cave.
"But why would wee stinkers come in here?"
"I dunno, curiosity?"
The two walked into the cave.
"It's very dark in here!" Stinky said, frightened.
"Don't tell me you're scared," Pootsy said in a smart way.
"No, why would I?" Stinky said, trying to be brave.
Pootsy giggled slightly, and they arrived to the destination.
"This is it, this is where I lost them." Pootsy said.
"Leave it to me!" Stinky said.
Later, Stinky came out, with the wee stinkers.
"Well," Stinky said, "It was tough and annoying, but I got 'em."
"Yes! Lets get out of here." Pootsy said.
Then, a tremor occurred, and bridges collapsed along the route they used to travel into the cave.
"Lets get out of here, and fast! This cave is unstable!" Pootsy said.
Suddenly, the Wee Stinkers darted off. "Looks like they found a way out!", exclaimed Pootsy. However, as Pootsy followed the Wee Stinkers across the bridge, it collapsed.
Stinky was still on the other side!
"Oh no! The bridge collasped!" Pootsie said worriedly.
"Come on! Swim across!" said the wee stinkers.
"I would, IF I WAS WATERPROOF! But don't worry, I'll find a way!" Stinky said walking down into a side-cavern.
"Good luck! Be careful!" Pootsie said, following the Wee Stinkers out of the cave.
Stinky was traveling along, when he found a cave filled with gems.
"What luck!" thought Stinky.
After he collected all the gems, he saw blocking his path a passage filled with fire.
Stinky was brave, 'I know I can do it. I can.' he thought. 'Even if I am acrobatic, I can still slip and fall into the chasm below, or be burnt to a crisp." Finally, however, he made it through the passage. Unfortunately, a blue gate was blocking his way.
"I wonder how I can open this," Stinky said. After exploring for a while, he found an icy cave. He traveled through it, risking drowning several times.
After he unlocked the gate, he saw a beautiful orange crystal.
"Wow!" he said, "I wonder what it's doing here and what it is!" Stinky took the crystal and continued to the exit of the cave. Outside, he saw Pootsy with another Stinker in an orange top hat. He walked up to them. Pootsy made eye contact with Stinky. "Yay, you're alive!" Pootsy said, "Here meet my friend Jedlic."
"Hi Jedlic, nice to meet you." Stinky said.
"Nice to meet you too, Stinky." Jedlic said.
"Hey Jedlic, do you know what this crystal is?" Stinky said.
"No, but Morklin probably would," said Jedlic
"Morklin?" Stinky asked.
"Yes. He lives in Wondertown."
"How can I get there?"
"Take the road here to the east for about 3 Stinkometermiles."
"Okay. I'll get going."
"Wait..."
"What is it, Jedlic?"
"You'll need a key to get there. It's in my basement."
"Well then, get it!" Stinky says, beginning to get impatient,
"Well, there are scritters in my basement. I'm embarrassed to say it, but I'm afraid of scritters."
"Don't worry. I'll take care of them," Stinky said confidently.
Stinky walked in.
"Hey wait! You forgot the lantern!"
Stinky was already in the basement.
"It's okay, Stinky, I know its dark and all, but all I gotta get is just a key..." Stinky clapped twice. A light turned on. Stinky was quietly walking around the place, then he saw a little cute scritter. "Hi cute little scritter, you may be cute but you must get out of here."
Stinky kicked it into a nearby cage, which made a 'Nyak!' sound. "Oh boy, chompers."
Stinky's eyes started to adjust. "That's better!" he said. Stinky saw more, and kicked them.
Stinky saw a key. "Got it." said he.
He took it, and went outside. Well, after tripping over 5 barrels.
"Thanks for exterminat-"
"Caging." said Stinky.
"O-oh okay. Caging those scritters." said Jedic.
"Well, gotta go. See you later, Jedic and Pootsie."
So Pootsie, the wee stinkers, and Jedic waved goodbye to him as he started his journey. On his way, he saw a sign:
"Wondertown
3 stinkometermiles".
Stinky continued.

PROLOUGE: The Beginning Of A New Adventure (done)
Chapter 1: A Detour To Take (done)
Chapter 2: The Road Of 3 Stinkometermiles
Chapter 3: Meet Morklin the Wizard
Chapter 4: Into the Sewers
Chapter 5: Horace's Dilemna
Chapter 6: Catching the Thief
Chapter 7: The Mushroom Grove
Chapter 8: Exploring Wondertown
Chapter 9: South of the Foggy Mountains
Chapter 10: Welcome To The Foggy Mountains
Chapter 11: The Blue Shard
Chapter 12: The Rainbow Temple

On his way, he saw some more stinkers, AS ANOTHER TREMOR HAPPENED.

There was a planet called Wonderland. There was also stinker, Stinky, who lived there. One day he decided to take a stroll, for fun. Sometimes he ran and sometimes front flipped. Suddenly, an earthquake! He ran, and met a stinker named Pootsy.
"Hello," said Stinky, "The name is Stinky, yours?"
"Pootsy." she replied.
Stinky said, "Have you felt the strange tremors recently?"
"Yes, these strange tremors also caused some trouble for me."
"Like What?" Stinky asked.
"Well, I was adventuring a cave with some wee stinkers, when these strange tremors happened. It blocked them off from me, and now I can't reach them! Can you help?" Pootsy said with a worried tone.
"Sure, I love adventures!" Stinky said,
"Great! Follow me, Stinky." Pootsy said, leading Stinky to the cave.

CHAPTER 1: A Detour To Take

"Are we there yet?" Stinky asked in boredom.
"Almost!" Pootsy said, approaching the cave entrance.
"Pootsy, are you sure this is the cave that you talked about?" Stinky asked.
"Sure is! Follow me Stinky, quickly!" Pootsy said leading Stinky into the cave.
"But why would wee stinkers come in here?"
"I dunno, curiosity?"
The two walked into the cave.
"It's very dark in here!" Stinky said, frightened.
"Don't tell me you're scared," Pootsy said in a smart way.
"No, why would I?" Stinky said, trying to be brave.
Pootsy giggled slightly, and they arrived to the destination.
"This is it, this is where I lost them." Pootsy said.
"Leave it to me!" Stinky said.
Later, Stinky came out, with the wee stinkers.
"Well," Stinky said, "It was tough and annoying, but I got 'em."
"Yes! Lets get out of here." Pootsy said.
Then, a tremor occurred, and bridges collapsed along the route they used to travel into the cave.
"Lets get out of here, and fast! This cave is unstable!" Pootsy said.
Suddenly, the Wee Stinkers darted off. "Looks like they found a way out!", exclaimed Pootsy. However, as Pootsy followed the Wee Stinkers across the bridge, it collapsed.
Stinky was still on the other side!
"Oh no! The bridge collasped!" Pootsie said worriedly.
"Come on! Swim across!" said the wee stinkers.
"I would, IF I WAS WATERPROOF! But don't worry, I'll find a way!" Stinky said walking down into a side-cavern.
"Good luck! Be careful!" Pootsie said, following the Wee Stinkers out of the cave.
Stinky was traveling along, when he found a cave filled with gems.
"What luck!" thought Stinky.
After he collected all the gems, he saw blocking his path a passage filled with fire.
Stinky was brave, 'I know I can do it. I can.' he thought. 'Even if I am acrobatic, I can still slip and fall into the chasm below, or be burnt to a crisp." Finally, however, he made it through the passage. Unfortunately, a blue gate was blocking his way.
"I wonder how I can open this," Stinky said. After exploring for a while, he found an icy cave. He traveled through it, risking drowning several times.
After he unlocked the gate, he saw a beautiful orange crystal.
"Wow!" he said, "I wonder what it's doing here and what it is!" Stinky took the crystal and continued to the exit of the cave. Outside, he saw Pootsy with another Stinker in an orange top hat. He walked up to them. Pootsy made eye contact with Stinky. "Yay, you're alive!" Pootsy said, "Here meet my friend Jedlic."
"Hi Jedlic, nice to meet you." Stinky said.
"Nice to meet you too, Stinky." Jedlic said.
"Hey Jedlic, do you know what this crystal is?" Stinky said.
"No, but Morklin probably would," said Jedlic
"Morklin?" Stinky asked.
"Yes. He lives in Wondertown."
"How can I get there?"
"Take the road here to the east for about 3 Stinkometermiles."
"Okay. I'll get going."
"Wait..."
"What is it, Jedlic?"
"You'll need a key to get there. It's in my basement."
"Well then, get it!" Stinky says, beginning to get impatient,
"Well, there are scritters in my basement. I'm embarrassed to say it, but I'm afraid of scritters."
"Don't worry. I'll take care of them," Stinky said confidently.
Stinky walked in.
"Hey wait! You forgot the lantern!"
Stinky was already in the basement.
"It's okay, Stinky, I know its dark and all, but all I gotta get is just a key..." Stinky clapped twice. A light turned on. Stinky was quietly walking around the place, then he saw a little cute scritter. "Hi cute little scritter, you may be cute but you must get out of here."
Stinky kicked it into a nearby cage, which made a 'Nyak!' sound. "Oh boy, chompers."
Stinky's eyes started to adjust. "That's better!" he said. Stinky saw more, and kicked them.
Stinky saw a key. "Got it." said he.
He took it, and went outside. Well, after tripping over 5 barrels.
"Thanks for exterminat-"
"Caging." said Stinky.
"O-oh okay. Caging those scritters." said Jedic.
"Well, gotta go. See you later, Jedic and Pootsie."
So Pootsie, the wee stinkers, and Jedic waved goodbye to him as he started his journey. On his way, he saw a sign:
"Wondertown
3 stinkometermiles".
Stinky continued.


Chapter 2: The Road Of 3 Stinkometermiles

On his way, he saw some more stinkers, AS ANOTHER TREMOR HAPPENED.

Sammy_P wrote:*Sammy_P's post*

Oh noes
You have removed what I wrote

Well, I'm too lazy to write another 2 setences.

boywhoflies wrote:

Sammy_P wrote:*Sammy_P's post*

Oh noes
You have removed what I wrote

and what I wrote D: