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Wonderland adventures the book(s)
Posted: Tue Nov 01, 2011 2:43 am
by eee226
Wonder If wonderland was a book?
Wonderland adventures the book
By eee226
In a magical land not too far away called Wonderland there lived a stinker named Stinky. One day stinky went for a walk, he skipped he ran and sometimes did a front flip. In his walk he heard shakings. He saw a female stinker named Pootsie, She said "Hi I'm pootsie whats yours" Stinky said "I'm stinky thank you... Did you hear the shakings?"...
This is all I done, If someone can finish it with me.
If it was a book, I would read the chapters everyday.
What would you do if its a book?
Posted: Tue Nov 01, 2011 3:15 am
by Sammy_P
Lemme do the re-writing.
A long time ago, in a magical land, not too far away...
There was a planet called Wonderland. There was also stinker, Stinky, who lived there. One day he decided to take a stroll, for fun. Sometimes he ran and sometimes front flipped. Suddenly, an earthquake! He ran, and met a stinker named "Pootsie".
"Hello," said Stinky, "The name is Stinky, yours?"
"Pootsie." she replied.
Stinky said, "Have you felt the strange tremors recently?"
Posted: Tue Nov 01, 2011 3:44 am
by eee226
This story will have some twists.
Posted: Tue Nov 01, 2011 7:54 am
by dig 222
When I was little I copied ALL the text from MOFI and made it into a book.
Maybe I can help with this if its a Project.
Posted: Tue Nov 01, 2011 7:17 pm
by ~xpr'd~
Moved to General Wonderland Stuff.
Anyways, shouldn't you finish the wonderland animation you were doing, or did you give up on that?
Posted: Tue Nov 01, 2011 8:37 pm
by LexieTheFox
(Continuation)
A long time ago, in a magical land, not too far away...
There was a planet called Wonderland. There was also stinker, Stinky, who lived there. One day he decided to take a stroll, for fun. Sometimes he ran and sometimes front flipped. Suddenly, an earthquake! He ran, and met a stinker named "Pootsie".
"Hello," said Stinky, "The name is Stinky, yours?"
"Pootsie." she replied.
Stinky said, "Have you felt the strange tremors recently?"
"Yes, these strange tremors also caused some trouble for me."
"Like What?" Stinky asked
"Well, i was adventuring a cave with some wee stinkers, when these strange tremors happened. It blocked them off from me, and now i can't reach them! Can you help?" Pootsie said with a worried tone.
"Sure, i love adventures!" Stinky said,
"Great! Follow me, Stinky." Pootsie said, leading Stinky to the cave.
Posted: Tue Nov 01, 2011 9:41 pm
by eee226
~xpr'd~ wrote:Moved to General Wonderland Stuff.
Anyways, shouldn't you finish the wonderland animation you were doing, or did you give up on that?
Don't worry I'm still working on it.
Posted: Tue Nov 01, 2011 10:01 pm
by Sammy_P
Wow, Lex! Your punctuation has improved! Hows Tails?
Book 1: From Shards To Pools (Orange Shard-Rainbow Temple)
Book 2: Forests, Deserts, And Voids (Forbidden Forest-The Void)
Book 3: Voyage To Fire Island, Part I
Book 4: Voyage To Fire Island, Part II
Wonderland Adventures: Book 1: From Shards To Pools
Table Of Contents:
PROLOUGE: The Beginning Of A New Adventure
Chapter 1: A Detour To Take
Chapter 2: Windmill Of Creatures
Chapter 3: The Magic Gloves
Chapter 4: Meet Morklin
Chapter 5: The Sewers, Part 1
Chapter 6: A Recap Of Small Proportions
Chapter 7: The Sewers, Part II: The Indigo Shard
Chapter 8: Mushroom Grove
Chapter 9: Caves Of Ice
Chapter 10: Welcome To The Foggy Mountains
Chapter 11: The Blue Shard
Chapter 12: The Rainbow Temple
Chapter 13: Another Stupid Recap
Chapter 14: Forbidden Forest
Chapter 15: Lonely Top/The Green Shard
Chapter 16: The Wastelands
Chapter 17: The Void
Chapter 18: The Aftermath
PROLOUGE: The Beginning Of A New Adventure
A long time ago, in a magical land, not too far away...
There was a planet called Wonderland. There was also stinker, Stinky, who lived there. One day he decided to take a stroll, for fun. Sometimes he ran and sometimes front flipped. Suddenly, an earthquake! He ran, and met a stinker named "Pootsie".
"Hello," said Stinky, "The name is Stinky, yours?"
"Pootsie." she replied.
Stinky said, "Have you felt the strange tremors recently?"
"Yes, these strange tremors also caused some trouble for me."
"Like What?" Stinky asked.
"Well, I was adventuring a cave with some wee stinkers, when these strange tremors happened. It blocked them off from me, and now I can't reach them! Can you help?" Pootsie said with a worried tone.
"Sure, I love adventures!" Stinky said,
"Great! Follow me, Stinky." Pootsie said, leading Stinky to the cave.
CHAPTER 1: A Detour To Take
"Are we there yet?"
"Almost!"
Hey eee, lemme PM you.
Posted: Tue Nov 01, 2011 10:47 pm
by LexieTheFox
Sammy_P wrote:Wow, Lex! Your punctuation has improved! Hows Tails?
Book 1: From Shards To Pools (Orange Shard-Rainbow Temple)
Book 2: Forests, Deserts, And Voids (Forbidden Forest-The Void)
Book 3: Voyage To Fire Island, Part I
Book 4: Voyage To Fire Island, Part II
Wonderland Adventures: Book 1: From Shards To Pools
Table Of Contents:
PROLOUGE: The Beginning Of A New Adventure
Chapter 1: A Detour To Take
Chapter 2: Windmill Of Creatures
Chapter 3: The Magic Gloves
Chapter 4: Meet Morklin
Chapter 5: The Sewers, Part 1
Chapter 6: A Recap Of Small Proportions
Chapter 7: The Sewers, Part II: The Indigo Shard
Chapter 8: Mushroom Grove
Chapter 9: Caves Of Ice
Chapter 10: Welcome To The Foggy Mountains
Chapter 11: The Blue Shard
Chapter 12: The Rainbow Temple
Chapter 13: Another Stupid Recap
Chapter 14: Forbidden Forest
Chapter 15: Lonely Top/The Green Shard
Chapter 16: The Wastelands
Chapter 17: The Void
Chapter 18: The Aftermath
PROLOUGE: The Beginning Of A New Adventure
A long time ago, in a magical land, not too far away...
There was a planet called Wonderland. There was also stinker, Stinky, who lived there. One day he decided to take a stroll, for fun. Sometimes he ran and sometimes front flipped. Suddenly, an earthquake! He ran, and met a stinker named "Pootsie".
"Hello," said Stinky, "The name is Stinky, yours?"
"Pootsie." she replied.
Stinky said, "Have you felt the strange tremors recently?"
"Yes, these strange tremors also caused some trouble for me."
"Like What?" Stinky asked.
"Well, I was adventuring a cave with some wee stinkers, when these strange tremors happened. It blocked them off from me, and now I can't reach them! Can you help?" Pootsie said with a worried tone.
"Sure, I love adventures!" Stinky said,
"Great! Follow me, Stinky." Pootsie said, leading Stinky to the cave.
CHAPTER 1: A Detour To Take
"Are we there yet?"
"Almost!"
Hey eee, lemme PM you.
Please don't call me lex, I prefer Lexie, and Thanks.
PROLOUGE: The Beginning Of A New Adventure
A long time ago, in a magical land, not too far away...
There was a planet called Wonderland. There was also stinker, Stinky, who lived there. One day he decided to take a stroll, for fun. Sometimes he ran and sometimes front flipped. Suddenly, an earthquake! He ran, and met a stinker named "Pootsie".
"Hello," said Stinky, "The name is Stinky, yours?"
"Pootsie." she replied.
Stinky said, "Have you felt the strange tremors recently?"
"Yes, these strange tremors also caused some trouble for me."
"Like What?" Stinky asked.
"Well, I was adventuring a cave with some wee stinkers, when these strange tremors happened. It blocked them off from me, and now I can't reach them! Can you help?" Pootsie said with a worried tone.
"Sure, I love adventures!" Stinky said,
"Great! Follow me, Stinky." Pootsie said, leading Stinky to the cave.
CHAPTER 1: A Detour To Take
"Are we there yet?" Stinky asked in bordom.
"Almost!" Pootsie said, approaching the cave entrance.
"Is this the cave, that you talked about? Pootsie?" Stinky asked,
"Sure is! Follow me Stinky, quickly!" Pootsie said leading Stinky into the cave..
(Sorry for making such small add-ons when i add to it, its just that as i contenue to make my new Project, it drains my creativity dearly.)
Posted: Tue Nov 01, 2011 10:55 pm
by eee226
I only have the demo, so I can only do the demo plot.
A long time ago, in a magical land, not too far away...
There was a planet called Wonderland. There was also stinker, Stinky, who lived there. One day he decided to take a stroll, for fun. Sometimes he ran and sometimes front flipped. Suddenly, an earthquake! He ran, and met a stinker named "Pootsie".
"Hello," said Stinky, "The name is Stinky, yours?"
"Pootsie." she replied.
Stinky said, "Have you felt the strange tremors recently?"
"Yes, these strange tremors also caused some trouble for me."
"Like What?" Stinky asked.
"Well, I was adventuring a cave with some wee stinkers, when these strange tremors happened. It blocked them off from me, and now I can't reach them! Can you help?" Pootsie said with a worried tone.
"Sure, I love adventures!" Stinky said,
"Great! Follow me, Stinky." Pootsie said, leading Stinky to the cave.
CHAPTER 1: A Detour To Take
"Are we there yet?" Stinky asked in bordom.
"Almost!" Pootsie said, approaching the cave entrance.
"Is this the cave, that you talked about? Pootsie?" Stinky asked,
"Sure is! Follow me Stinky, quickly!" Pootsie said leading Stinky into the cave..
"Sure is creepy here" Stinky said scared,
They walked everywhere looking for the wee stinkers.
They saw springs stick on to the wall.
"After you Stinky" Pootsie said,
"Wheeeeeeeeeeeeeee Woo Hoo!!!!!" They both said.
Posted: Tue Nov 01, 2011 11:03 pm
by LexieTheFox
eee226 wrote:I only have the demo, so I can only do the demo plot.
A long time ago, in a magical land, not too far away...
There was a planet called Wonderland. There was also stinker, Stinky, who lived there. One day he decided to take a stroll, for fun. Sometimes he ran and sometimes front flipped. Suddenly, an earthquake! He ran, and met a stinker named "Pootsie".
"Hello," said Stinky, "The name is Stinky, yours?"
"Pootsie." she replied.
Stinky said, "Have you felt the strange tremors recently?"
"Yes, these strange tremors also caused some trouble for me."
"Like What?" Stinky asked.
"Well, I was adventuring a cave with some wee stinkers, when these strange tremors happened. It blocked them off from me, and now I can't reach them! Can you help?" Pootsie said with a worried tone.
"Sure, I love adventures!" Stinky said,
"Great! Follow me, Stinky." Pootsie said, leading Stinky to the cave.
CHAPTER 1: A Detour To Take
"Are we there yet?" Stinky asked in bordom.
"Almost!" Pootsie said, approaching the cave entrance.
"Is this the cave, that you talked about? Pootsie?" Stinky asked,
"Sure is! Follow me Stinky, quickly!" Pootsie said leading Stinky into the cave..
"Sure is creepy here" Stinky said scared,
They walked everywhere looking for the wee stinkers.
They saw springs stick on to the wall.
"After you Stinky" Pootsie said,
"Wheeeeeeeeeeeeeee Woo Hoo!!!!!" They both said.
PROLOUGE: The Beginning Of A New Adventure
A long time ago, in a magical land, not too far away...
There was a planet called Wonderland. There was also stinker, Stinky, who lived there. One day he decided to take a stroll, for fun. Sometimes he ran and sometimes front flipped. Suddenly, an earthquake! He ran, and met a stinker named "Pootsie".
"Hello," said Stinky, "The name is Stinky, yours?"
"Pootsie." she replied.
Stinky said, "Have you felt the strange tremors recently?"
"Yes, these strange tremors also caused some trouble for me."
"Like What?" Stinky asked.
"Well, I was adventuring a cave with some wee stinkers, when these strange tremors happened. It blocked them off from me, and now I can't reach them! Can you help?" Pootsie said with a worried tone.
"Sure, I love adventures!" Stinky said,
"Great! Follow me, Stinky." Pootsie said, leading Stinky to the cave.
CHAPTER 1: A Detour To Take
"Are we there yet?" Stinky asked in bordom.
"Almost!" Pootsie said, approaching the cave entrance.
"Is this the cave, that you talked about? Pootsie?" Stinky asked,
"Sure is! Follow me Stinky, quickly!" Pootsie said leading Stinky into the cave..
"Its very dark in here!" Stinky said, frightened.
"Don't tell me your scared," Pootsie said in a Smart way.
"No, why would i?" Stinky said, trying to be brave.
Pootsie giggled slightly, and they arrived to the destination.
"This is it, this is where i lost them." Pootsie said.
"Leave it to me!" Stinky said,
After half an hour all of the Wee stinkers were rescued.
"Yes! we have them, lets get out of here." Pootsie said,
Just then.. a Tremor happened
"Lets get out of here, and fast! This cave is un-stable." Pootsie said leading stinky and following the Wee stinkers, but just as Pootsie crossed the bridge she got seperated from Stinky!
"Oh no! The bridge collasped!" Pootsie said worried.
"Don't worry, i'll find a way!" Stinky said walking into the Path of Fire.
"Good luck! Becareful!" Pootsie said, following the Wee Stinkers out of the
cave.
TO BE CONTENUED
Posted: Tue Nov 01, 2011 11:06 pm
by Master Wonder Mage
It's kind of confusing to say Stinky got separated from Pootsy. Other than that, nice job.
Posted: Tue Nov 01, 2011 11:08 pm
by LexieTheFox
Master Wonder Mage wrote:It's kind of confusing to say Stinky got separated from Pootsy. Other than that, nice job.
Thanks, and sorry. Like i said a couple posts ago, the Project i'm making is draining my Creativity (Because its not in MOFI doubles it, as my Creativity goes wild in MOFI)
Posted: Tue Nov 01, 2011 11:18 pm
by eee226
A long time ago, in a magical land, not too far away...
There was a planet called Wonderland. There was also stinker, Stinky, who lived there. One day he decided to take a stroll, for fun. Sometimes he ran and sometimes front flipped. Suddenly, an earthquake! He ran, and met a stinker named "Pootsie".
"Hello," said Stinky, "The name is Stinky, yours?"
"Pootsie." she replied.
Stinky said, "Have you felt the strange tremors recently?"
"Yes, these strange tremors also caused some trouble for me."
"Like What?" Stinky asked.
"Well, I was adventuring a cave with some wee stinkers, when these strange tremors happened. It blocked them off from me, and now I can't reach them! Can you help?" Pootsie said with a worried tone.
"Sure, I love adventures!" Stinky said,
"Great! Follow me, Stinky." Pootsie said, leading Stinky to the cave.
CHAPTER 1: A Detour To Take
"Are we there yet?" Stinky asked in bordom.
"Almost!" Pootsie said, approaching the cave entrance.
"Is this the cave, that you talked about? Pootsie?" Stinky asked,
"Sure is! Follow me Stinky, quickly!" Pootsie said leading Stinky into the cave..
"Its very dark in here!" Stinky said, frightened.
"Don't tell me your scared," Pootsie said in a Smart way.
"No, why would i?" Stinky said, trying to be brave.
Pootsie giggled slightly, and they arrived to the destination.
"This is it, this is where i lost them." Pootsie said.
"Leave it to me!" Stinky said,
After half an hour all of the Wee stinkers were rescued.
"Yes! we have them, lets get out of here." Pootsie said,
Just then.. a Tremor happened
"Lets get out of here, and fast! This cave is un-stable." Pootsie said leading stinky and following the Wee stinkers, but just as Pootsie crossed the bridge she got seperated from Stinky!
"Oh no! The bridge collasped!" Pootsie said worried.
"Don't worry, i'll find a way!" Stinky said walking into the Path of Fire.
"Good luck! Becareful!" Pootsie said, following the Wee Stinkers out of the
cave.
Stinky tried to be brave.....
He had to go through fire,
Moments later he did it.
He slipped in ice, he opened buttons, he..... even front flipped again.
Posted: Tue Nov 01, 2011 11:51 pm
by Sammy_P
There was a planet called Wonderland. There was also stinker, Stinky, who lived there. One day he decided to take a stroll, for fun. Sometimes he ran and sometimes front flipped. Suddenly, an earthquake! He ran, and met a stinker named "Pootsie".
"Hello," said Stinky, "The name is Stinky, yours?"
"Pootsie." she replied.
Stinky said, "Have you felt the strange tremors recently?"
"Yes, these strange tremors also caused some trouble for me."
"Like What?" Stinky asked.
"Well, I was adventuring a cave with some wee stinkers, when these strange tremors happened. It blocked them off from me, and now I can't reach them! Can you help?" Pootsie said with a worried tone.
"Sure, I love adventures!" Stinky said,
"Great! Follow me, Stinky." Pootsie said, leading Stinky to the cave.
CHAPTER 1: A Detour To Take
"Are we there yet?" Stinky asked in boredom.
"Almost!" Pootsie said, approaching the cave entrance.
"Pootsie, are you sure this is the cave that you talked about?" Stinky asked.
"Sure is! Follow me Stinky, quickly!" Pootsie said leading Stinky into the cave.
"But why would wee stinkers come in here?"
"I dunno, curiosity?"
The two walked into the cave.
"It's very dark in here!" Stinky said, frightened.
"Don't tell me you're scared," Pootsie said in a smart way.
"No, why would I?" Stinky said, trying to be brave.
Pootsie giggled slightly, and they arrived to the destination.
"This is it, this is where I lost them." Pootsie said.
"Leave it to me!" Stinky said.
Later, Stinky comes out, with the wee stinkers.
"Well," Stinky said, "It was tough and annoying, but I got 'em."
"Yes! Lets get out of here." Pootsie said.
Then, a tremor happened!
"Lets get out of here, and fast! This cave is un-stable." Pootsie said.
Stinky, leading the way across a bridge, with the Wee stinkers following, the bridge collapsed, leaving Stinky on the other side.
"Oh no! The bridge collasped!" Pootsie said worried.
"Come on! Swim across!" Said the wee stinkers.
"I would, IF I WAS WATERPROOF! But don't worry, I'll find a way!" Stinky said walking into the Path of Fire.
"Good luck! Be careful!" Pootsie said, following the Wee Stinkers out of the cave.
Stinky was brave, 'I know I can do it. I can.' he thought. 'Even if I am acrobatic, I can still slip and fall into the chasm below, or be burnt to a crisp.' With courage, he got across. Stinky ran out, and saw Pootsie, outside a windmill.
Book 1: From Shards To Pools (Orange Shard-Rainbow Temple)
Book 2: A Forest, A Desert, And A Void (Forbidden Forest-The Void)
Book 3: Voyage To Fire Island, Part I
Book 4: Voyage To Fire Island, Part II
Wonderland Adventures: Book 1: From Shards To Pools
Table Of Contents:
PROLOUGE: The Beginning Of A New Adventure
Chapter 1: A Detour To Take
Chapter 2: Windmill Of Creatures
Chapter 3: The Magic Gloves
Chapter 4: Morklin The Wizard
Chapter 5: The Sewers, Part 1
Chapter 6: A Recap Of Small Proportions
Chapter 7: The Sewers, Part II: The Indigo Shard
Chapter 8: Mushroom Grove
Chapter 9: Caves Of Ice
Chapter 10: Welcome To The Foggy Mountains
Chapter 11: The Blue Shard
Chapter 12: The Rainbow Temple
Chapter 2: Windmill Of Creatures
Posted: Tue Nov 01, 2011 11:57 pm
by Master Wonder Mage
You kind of missed "Frostbite Cave" and the orange shard.
Posted: Wed Nov 02, 2011 12:04 am
by Emerald141
Posted: Wed Nov 02, 2011 12:05 am
by Sammy_P
Where is Frostbite Cave and The Orange Shard again? I haven't played this game in a while.
Posted: Wed Nov 02, 2011 12:06 am
by LexieTheFox
Emerald141 wrote:Here, try this for the intro instead:
"The curse is in effect, foolish Adventurer! Soon you will fall under the memory spell, leaving Wonderland open to my legion's attack!"
It was true. Already I was beginning to forget what was going on. I couldn't remember who was speaking. I couldn't even remember my name.
"Do you like them, 'hero'? I call them the Thwarts. They will fulfill my master plan once and for all, plunging Wonderland into a vortex of shadow! When that happens, the only things left intact will be my empire... and the Vial!"
I had to stop them. I didn't know why, but the only thing I wanted was to protect the planet. I didn't care whether I lived or died. All that mattered was bringing this mysterious Shadow Stinker down.
I moved to attack him with my staff, but my movements were agonizingly slow, as if in a dream. The villain in front of me smirked, then motioned to the seven nearby furballs to commence firing. My life was about to end, and the planet would be destroyed soon after. There was nothing I could do.
Suddenly, there was a shining burst of multicolored stars. I heard a tiny voice say, "Quick! Grab on!"
I had no choice; I grabbed on to the strange star creature that had appeared in front of me. Before I knew it, I was no longer in the Void; I was flying high in the skies above Wonderland, the air whipping against my face.
"Who are you? Where are you taking me?"
"You'll find out very soon; I'm afraid there isn't anything I can do to prevent the memory loss spell. Come find me. Maybe we can play Catch sometime..."
The voice began to sound fainter and fainter, eventually fading to nothingness. My eyes closed for the last time and I knew no more.
***
"Welcome to Wonderland Adventures!"
I sat straight up. Where had that voice come from? It sounded like someone I knew, but then again...
"Use the mouse to play the game and control your character. Click (OK) to continue."
"Did you just... break the fourth wall?" I groaned.
I couldn't remember anything. I had no memories beyond waking up in this field, and it was a miracle that I could even speak Stinkese. What was going on?
"You've clicked on a spot that is 'not walkable', such as rocky walls or water. Please select another goal for your character."
So many questions, so few answers. One thing was for certain, however: I wasn't going to discover anything by just lying in a field the whole day. There was only one way to go: South, along the path.
You like? :3
Oh yess.. Yess.. Me likie.. .My preccioussss MY PRECCIOUSS HAHAHAH - *cough cough* Ahem.. Yes, it is neat. *Jumps into Near-by Bush*
Posted: Wed Nov 02, 2011 12:07 am
by LexieTheFox
Sammy_P wrote:Where is Frostbite Cave and The Orange Shard again? I haven't played this game in a while.
Frostbite Cave - The Adventure after Passage of Fire where you get a Blue key from.
The Orange Shard - Isn't even a adventure. Its the area after the Blue gate where you find it.
Posted: Wed Nov 02, 2011 12:09 am
by eee226
There was a planet called Wonderland. There was also stinker, Stinky, who lived there. One day he decided to take a stroll, for fun. Sometimes he ran and sometimes front flipped. Suddenly, an earthquake! He ran, and met a stinker named "Pootsie".
"Hello," said Stinky, "The name is Stinky, yours?"
"Pootsie." she replied.
Stinky said, "Have you felt the strange tremors recently?"
"Yes, these strange tremors also caused some trouble for me."
"Like What?" Stinky asked.
"Well, I was adventuring a cave with some wee stinkers, when these strange tremors happened. It blocked them off from me, and now I can't reach them! Can you help?" Pootsie said with a worried tone.
"Sure, I love adventures!" Stinky said,
"Great! Follow me, Stinky." Pootsie said, leading Stinky to the cave.
CHAPTER 1: A Detour To Take
"Are we there yet?" Stinky asked in boredom.
"Almost!" Pootsie said, approaching the cave entrance.
"Pootsie, are you sure this is the cave that you talked about?" Stinky asked.
"Sure is! Follow me Stinky, quickly!" Pootsie said leading Stinky into the cave.
"But why would wee stinkers come in here?"
"I dunno, curiosity?"
The two walked into the cave.
"It's very dark in here!" Stinky said, frightened.
"Don't tell me you're scared," Pootsie said in a smart way.
"No, why would I?" Stinky said, trying to be brave.
Pootsie giggled slightly, and they arrived to the destination.
"This is it, this is where I lost them." Pootsie said.
"Leave it to me!" Stinky said.
Later, Stinky comes out, with the wee stinkers.
"Well," Stinky said, "It was tough and annoying, but I got 'em."
"Yes! Lets get out of here." Pootsie said.
Then, a tremor happened!
"Lets get out of here, and fast! This cave is un-stable." Pootsie said.
Stinky, leading the way across a bridge, with the Wee stinkers following, the bridge collapsed, leaving Stinky on the other side.
"Oh no! The bridge collasped!" Pootsie said worried.
"Come on! Swim across!" Said the wee stinkers.
"I would, IF I WAS WATERPROOF! But don't worry, I'll find a way!" Stinky said walking into the Path of Fire.
"Good luck! Be careful!" Pootsie said, following the Wee Stinkers out of the cave.
Stinky was brave, 'I know I can do it. I can.' he thought. 'Even if I am acrobatic, I can still slip and fall into the chasm below, or be burnt to a crisp. Stinky was almost there after passing fire and ice. Just then he saw a Orange crystal.
Posted: Wed Nov 02, 2011 12:11 am
by Master Wonder Mage
Awesome yes. But it contradicts my adventure plans. Oh well, for your series it's awesome. The orange shard is the first shard you gain. You can't really skip it without messing the plot up.
EDIT: Oops, fail. I was referring to Emerald's post.
Posted: Wed Nov 02, 2011 12:11 am
by Sammy_P
Okay.
HEY IF WE CAN GET MS TO PUBLISH THIS AND MAKE IT A BOOK WONDERLAND COULD BE A BIT MORE FAMOUS
BUT OUR NAMES WOULD BE REVEALED
SO USERS CAN STALK US
Posted: Wed Nov 02, 2011 12:13 am
by eee226
Sammy_P wrote:Okay.
HEY IF WE CAN GET MS TO PUBLISH THIS AND MAKE IT A BOOK WONDERLAND COULD BE A BIT MORE FAMOUS
BUT OUR NAMES WOULD BE REVEALED
SO USERS CAN STALK US
Thats what I was thinking before I made this post
Posted: Wed Nov 02, 2011 12:17 am
by Sammy_P
AND WE COULD WIN AN AWARD
AND WE COULD MEET IN REAL LIFE WHICH WOULD BE
EPIC
Posted: Wed Nov 02, 2011 12:20 am
by eee226
There was a planet called Wonderland. There was also stinker, Stinky, who lived there. One day he decided to take a stroll, for fun. Sometimes he ran and sometimes front flipped. Suddenly, an earthquake! He ran, and met a stinker named "Pootsie".
"Hello," said Stinky, "The name is Stinky, yours?"
"Pootsie." she replied.
Stinky said, "Have you felt the strange tremors recently?"
"Yes, these strange tremors also caused some trouble for me."
"Like What?" Stinky asked.
"Well, I was adventuring a cave with some wee stinkers, when these strange tremors happened. It blocked them off from me, and now I can't reach them! Can you help?" Pootsie said with a worried tone.
"Sure, I love adventures!" Stinky said,
"Great! Follow me, Stinky." Pootsie said, leading Stinky to the cave.
CHAPTER 1: A Detour To Take
"Are we there yet?" Stinky asked in boredom.
"Almost!" Pootsie said, approaching the cave entrance.
"Pootsie, are you sure this is the cave that you talked about?" Stinky asked.
"Sure is! Follow me Stinky, quickly!" Pootsie said leading Stinky into the cave.
"But why would wee stinkers come in here?"
"I dunno, curiosity?"
The two walked into the cave.
"It's very dark in here!" Stinky said, frightened.
"Don't tell me you're scared," Pootsie said in a smart way.
"No, why would I?" Stinky said, trying to be brave.
Pootsie giggled slightly, and they arrived to the destination.
"This is it, this is where I lost them." Pootsie said.
"Leave it to me!" Stinky said.
Later, Stinky comes out, with the wee stinkers.
"Well," Stinky said, "It was tough and annoying, but I got 'em."
"Yes! Lets get out of here." Pootsie said.
Then, a tremor happened!
"Lets get out of here, and fast! This cave is un-stable." Pootsie said.
Stinky, leading the way across a bridge, with the Wee stinkers following, the bridge collapsed, leaving Stinky on the other side.
"Oh no! The bridge collasped!" Pootsie said worried.
"Come on! Swim across!" Said the wee stinkers.
"I would, IF I WAS WATERPROOF! But don't worry, I'll find a way!" Stinky said walking into the Path of Fire.
"Good luck! Be careful!" Pootsie said, following the Wee Stinkers out of the cave.
Stinky was brave, 'I know I can do it. I can.' he thought. 'Even if I am acrobatic, I can still slip and fall into the chasm below, or be burnt to a crisp. Stinky was almost there after passing fire and ice. Just then he saw a Orange crystal.
"Wow!" he said, I wonder whats it doing here
, Stinky then took the crystal and made it out.
Posted: Wed Nov 02, 2011 12:24 am
by Emerald141
Posted: Wed Nov 02, 2011 12:25 am
by Master Wonder Mage
Master Wonder Mage wrote:Awesome yes. But it contradicts my adventure plans. Oh well, for your series it's awesome. The orange shard is the first shard you gain. You can't really skip it without messing the plot up.
EDIT: Oops, fail. I was referring to Emerald's post.
Posted: Wed Nov 02, 2011 12:37 am
by eee226
Oh well
There was a planet called Wonderland. There was also stinker, Stinky, who lived there. One day he decided to take a stroll, for fun. Sometimes he ran and sometimes front flipped. Suddenly, an earthquake! He ran, and met a stinker named "Pootsie".
"Hello," said Stinky, "The name is Stinky, yours?"
"Pootsie." she replied.
Stinky said, "Have you felt the strange tremors recently?"
"Yes, these strange tremors also caused some trouble for me."
"Like What?" Stinky asked.
"Well, I was adventuring a cave with some wee stinkers, when these strange tremors happened. It blocked them off from me, and now I can't reach them! Can you help?" Pootsie said with a worried tone.
"Sure, I love adventures!" Stinky said,
"Great! Follow me, Stinky." Pootsie said, leading Stinky to the cave.
CHAPTER 1: A Detour To Take
"Are we there yet?" Stinky asked in boredom.
"Almost!" Pootsie said, approaching the cave entrance.
"Pootsie, are you sure this is the cave that you talked about?" Stinky asked.
"Sure is! Follow me Stinky, quickly!" Pootsie said leading Stinky into the cave.
"But why would wee stinkers come in here?"
"I dunno, curiosity?"
The two walked into the cave.
"It's very dark in here!" Stinky said, frightened.
"Don't tell me you're scared," Pootsie said in a smart way.
"No, why would I?" Stinky said, trying to be brave.
Pootsie giggled slightly, and they arrived to the destination.
"This is it, this is where I lost them." Pootsie said.
"Leave it to me!" Stinky said.
Later, Stinky comes out, with the wee stinkers.
"Well," Stinky said, "It was tough and annoying, but I got 'em."
"Yes! Lets get out of here." Pootsie said.
Then, a tremor happened!
"Lets get out of here, and fast! This cave is un-stable." Pootsie said.
Stinky, leading the way across a bridge, with the Wee stinkers following, the bridge collapsed, leaving Stinky on the other side.
"Oh no! The bridge collasped!" Pootsie said worried.
"Come on! Swim across!" Said the wee stinkers.
"I would, IF I WAS WATERPROOF! But don't worry, I'll find a way!" Stinky said walking into the Path of Fire.
"Good luck! Be careful!" Pootsie said, following the Wee Stinkers out of the cave.
Stinky was brave, 'I know I can do it. I can.' he thought. 'Even if I am acrobatic, I can still slip and fall into the chasm below, or be burnt to a crisp. Stinky was almost there after passing fire and ice. Just then he saw a Orange crystal.
"Wow!" he said, I wonder whats it doing here , Stinky then took the crystal and made it out. Then he saw pootsie and another stinker with her, he walked to them. "Yay your alive!" Pootsie said, here meet my friend Jedric. "Hi Jedric, nice to meet you" Stinky said. "Nice to meet you too Stinky" Jedric said. "Hey Jedric, do you know what this crystal is?" Stinky said.
Posted: Wed Nov 02, 2011 12:44 am
by Master Wonder Mage
I'm working on a complete guide to the Wonderland of my adventure series. Here is the Table of Contents.
Book 1: Creatures of Wonderland
Part 1: Intelligent Creatures
Chapter 1: Stinkers
Chapter 2: Rainbow Stars
Chapter 3: Thwarts
Chapter 4: Ice Trolls
Chapter 5: Z-bots
Chapter 6: Kabooms!
Part 2: Non-intelligent Creatures
Chapter 1: Chompers
Chapter 2: Scourges
Chapter 3: Spikeyballs
Chapter 4: Scritters
Chapter 5: UFOs
Chapter 6: FireFlowers
Book 2: History of Wonderland
Chapter 1: The First Era: Under the Dnaldner Gib
Chapter 2: The Second Era: Stinky, Loof, Qookie, and Peegue
Chapter 3: The Third Era: Mass Migration
Chapter 4: The Fourth Era: Mortifer's Reign
Chapter 5: The Fifth Era: The Return of the Founders
Book 3: Measures of Wonderland
Chapter 1: Distance
Chapter 2: Time
Chapter 3: Geography of Wonderland
If I left out any creatures, let me know.