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I have a little idea.
Let's all make stories about ourselves in Wonderland.
I'm gonna send my story soon.
How'bout u all?

Ok I may think about it . I will do it my story :
There was a stinker named Michael Then he got killed by a fire flower The end .

Like my story

epicdude15 wrote:Ok I may think about it . I will do it my story :
There was a stinker named Michael Then he got killed by a fire flower The end .

Like my story

lolz!

kidkidaaa1 wrote:

epicdude15 wrote:Ok I may think about it . I will do it my story :
There was a stinker named Michael Then he got killed by a fire flower The end .

Like my story

lolz!

Too unstory of you!
Well, it's more like a paragraph rather than a story!

LOL

Wonderland fanfiction, amirite?

I always wanted to write something scary like "The Terrible Secret of Animal Crossing", but for Wonderland Adventures. I'd have to finish MOFI first, though, to know its story (so that I don't contradict the canon)

Right now I don't have the time due to school assignments owning me hard (I was sick for two months, which is hard to make up for, cause May is the last school month for us) and I also think I lack the writing skills to pull it off well.

But... maybe, sometime...

Dark Drago wrote:

epicdude15 wrote:Ok I may think about it . I will do it my story :
There was a stinker named Michael Then he got killed by a fire flower The end .

Like my story

Too unstory of you!
Well, it's more like a paragraph rather than a story!

LOL

Ok, how about this:

There was a stinker. His name was Michael. He met a fire flower. The fire flower shot a fireball. The fireball hit Michael. Michael died. The end.

That's more than one sentence, isn't it?

yot yot5 wrote:

Dark Drago wrote:

epicdude15 wrote:Ok I may think about it . I will do it my story :
There was a stinker named Michael Then he got killed by a fire flower The end .

Like my story

Too unstory of you!
Well, it's more like a paragraph rather than a story!

LOL

Ok, how about this:

There was a stinker. His name was Michael. He met a fire flower. The fire flower shot a fireball. The fireball hit Michael. Michael died. The end.

That's more than one sentence, isn't it?

I'd be honored to know why he ventured into the forest and why the fireflower killed him and all that. You can make this story mysterious and a big one too!

Dark Drago wrote:

yot yot5 wrote:

Dark Drago wrote:

epicdude15 wrote:Ok I may think about it . I will do it my story :
There was a stinker named Michael Then he got killed by a fire flower The end .

Like my story

Too unstory of you!
Well, it's more like a paragraph rather than a story!

LOL

Ok, how about this:

There was a stinker. His name was Michael. He met a fire flower. The fire flower shot a fireball. The fireball hit Michael. Michael died. The end.

That's more than one sentence, isn't it?

You know, this is still not quite a story. I'd be honored to know why he ventured into the forest and why the fireflower killed him and all that. You can make this story mysterious and a big one too!

I'm not completely sure whether or not you're missing the point.

okay, here's my wonderland story...

Stinky: Fresh Star of Wonder-Aire :

Now this is a story all about how
Stinky's life got flipped & cursored upside down
And I'd like to take a minute, so just play right there
I'll tell you how Stinky became the star of a town called Wonder-Aire.

In West Midnight Synergy born and raised
On the level-editor is where he spent most of his days
Chillin' out maxin' relaxin' all cool
The scouge sent some fireballs outside of my school
When a couple of Kaboom's who were up to no good
Started makin' trouble in my wonderland neighborhood
I got in one little fight and my Loof got scared
And he said you're movin' in with your Qookie and Peeque in W-Air

I begged and pleaded with Loof day after day
But he packed up my stars and sent me on my way
He gave me a coin and then a bonus coin too
I set loose my ghost-man on this level with a boo-.
First class yo this is bad
Drinkin' gold-star juice out of a fountain is sad.
Is this what the players of W-Air live like
Hmmm this might be the thing to be-like.

But wait I hear there are coilies, z-botts and all that
Is this the type of place that they should send me at ?
I don't think so I'll see when I get there
I hope they're prepared for the star of Wonder-Air

Well uh, the edited level looked great and when I saw it, it came out
There was a dude looked like a chomper standin' there with my name out
I ain't tryin' to lose this level yet I just started it
I sprang with the quickness of lightening in this level so bene-fit.

I whistled for a transporter and then it came near
The title said "Untitled", and had ice on the border.
If anything I could say that this level was dear
But I thought nah forget it, this level is dis-order!

I pulled up to the custom house near the gator,
then yelled to the boxie, "Yo generator, see ya later!"
Looked at my time-clock I was almost there
To finish at the gate as the star of Wonder-Air.
________________________________________________________
..Sorry, it's obvious that I mutated the lyrics from "Fresh Prince..".
Please don't sue me.
http://artists.letssingit.com/will-smit ... ir-dq8l5kj

Story time kids :
WA Pow island escape... In story mode...
The once was a stinker named Michael ! He was on his way to Pow island suddenly An Ice berg was in the way , Leading them into another direction. So they ventured into the mysterious Pow sea (Where no one ever escaped)
And Suddenly... a THUMP The Ship had landed on bay. But the thing was. No stinkers were on it But Michael ! So he Ventured into the Pow forest Of no idea of where he was... Suddenly while he was crossing the beach with Blink A Kaboom walked past behind him. He Rubbed his eyes as thinking it was his imagination. But it wasnt ! Another Hord of baby boomers came walking past . So he followed them. As soon as he arrived to the kaboom village named "Boomers pass" He relized he was following kabooms And he gave out a yell ! The kabooms now relized he was behind them following him. They started talking to him saying that they were harmless and they were just protecting the shard of light from the Thwarts that never turned good and from the Ice trolls that NEEDED it ! So he understood and helped...

A few days later he was guarding the shard while the kabooms were getting some more kabooms to help rebuild the wall that was made out of wood (since the fire flower burned it) All of a sudden Michael gave a blink and he heard a laugh like "hehehe" Sounded like thwarts . He relized they just took the shard of light ! So he went to follow them . Along with baby boomers for he had forgotten that they were with him...

TO BE CONTINUED TOMORROW...

VirtLands wrote:okay, here's my wonderland story...

Stinky: Fresh Star of Wonder-Aire :

Now this is a story all about how
Stinky's life got flipped & cursored upside down
And I'd like to take a minute, so just play right there
I'll tell you how Stinky became the star of a town called Wonder-Aire.

In West Midnight Synergy born and raised
On the level-editor is where he spent most of his days
Chillin' out maxin' relaxin' all cool
The scouge sent some fireballs outside of my school
When a couple of Kaboom's who were up to no good
Started makin' trouble in my wonderland neighborhood
I got in one little fight and my Loof got scared
And he said you're movin' in with your Qookie and Peeque in W-Air

I begged and pleaded with Loof day after day
But he packed up my stars and sent me on my way
He gave me a coin and then a bonus coin too
I set loose my ghost-man on this level with a boo-.
First class yo this is bad
Drinkin' gold-star juice out of a fountain is sad.
Is this what the players of W-Air live like
Hmmm this might be the thing to be-like.

But wait I hear there are coilies, z-botts and all that
Is this the type of place that they should send me at ?
I don't think so I'll see when I get there
I hope they're prepared for the star of Wonder-Air

Well uh, the edited level looked great and when I saw it, it came out
There was a dude looked like a chomper standin' there with my name out
I ain't tryin' to lose this level yet I just started it
I sprang with the quickness of lightening in this level so bene-fit.

I whistled for a transporter and then it came near
The title said "Untitled", and had ice on the border.
If anything I could say that this level was dear
But I thought nah forget it, this level is dis-order!

I pulled up to the custom house near the gator,
then yelled to the boxie, "Yo generator, see ya later!"
Looked at my time-clock I was almost there
To finish at the gate as the star of Wonder-Air.
________________________________________________________
..Sorry, it's obvious that I mutated the lyrics from "Fresh Prince..".
Please don't sue me.
http://artists.letssingit.com/will-smit ... ir-dq8l5kj

That's some top class poetry, you must a very good poet!

yot yot5 wrote:Ok, how about this:

There was a stinker. His name was Michael. He met a fire flower. The fire flower shot a fireball. The fireball hit Michael. Michael died. The end.

That's more than one sentence, isn't it?

I'll like to give it a good addition!

There was a stinker living in WONDERTOWN. His name was Michael. He ventured into the forever forest. He met a fire flower. The fire flower shot a fire ball. It hit him. While he was hit, he went into a parallel dimension where he was lost in a violet void and a huge image of the fireflower appeared before him. The fireflower said "you killed my girlfriend with pow magic, I'm taking revenge for it". Then he died. THE END

Dark Drago wrote:

yot yot5 wrote:Ok, how about this:

There was a stinker. His name was Michael. He met a fire flower. The fire flower shot a fireball. The fireball hit Michael. Michael died. The end.

That's more than one sentence, isn't it?

I'll like to give it a good addition!

There was a stinker living in WONDERTOWN. His name was Michael. He ventured into the forever forest. He met a fire flower. The fire flower shot a fire ball. It hit him. While he was hit, he went into a parallel dimension where he was lost in a violet void and a huge image of the fireflower appeared before him. The fireflower said "you killed my girlfriend with pow magic, I'm taking revenge for it". Then he died. THE END

Trolololololololol Its amazing how one funyn story evolves into one fabulous adventure.

There was a stinker living in WONDERTOWN. His name was Michael. He loved treasure hunting, so he wanted to go for some. He got Peegue's pass and went into the forever forest. He ventured in the forever forest. There were creepy scritters, deadly chompers along his way. Now he went into the darker part of the jungle. He met a fire flower named FLARE. The fire flower told "hehehee, you are in my trap now". Michael asked why?. An instant after that, it shot a fire ball. It hit him. While he was hit, he went into a parallel dimension where he was lost in a violet void and a huge image of the fireflower appeared before him. The fireflower said "I know you! You are the nasty stinker guy who went into the good flower, bad flower garden in Lazy Leaf Forest. There, you killed my girlfriend with pow magic. I was supposed to marry her next week.But, I couldn't bcos of your evil deeds. I'm taking revenge for it. DIE". Then he died.

THE END

Dark Drago wrote:There was a stinker living in WONDERTOWN. His name was Michael. He loved treasure hunting, so he wanted to go for some. He got Peegue's pass and went into the forever forest. He ventured in the forever forest. There were creepy scritters, deadly chompers along his way. Now he went into the darker part of the jungle. He met a fire flower named FLARE. The fire flower told "hehehee, you are in my trap now". Michael asked why?. An instant after that, it shot a fire ball. It hit him. While he was hit, he went into a parallel dimension where he was lost in a violet void and a huge image of the fireflower appeared before him. The fireflower said "I know you! You are the nasty stinker guy who went into the good flower, bad flower garden in Lazy Leaf Forest. There, you killed my girlfriend with pow magic. I was supposed to marry her next week.But, I couldn't bcos of your evil deeds. I'm taking revenge for it. DIE". Then he died.

THE END

Perfect!

I hate bad flower,good flower.And Lazy Leaf Forest,too!

Hi Dark Drago,
this wonderland story was a fun idea, glad you liked people's posts,
+ my poetry rhyme.

By the way, too many stories end with

..Then he died. THE END

Do we have to end it that way?
Just saying that it kind of squashes the possibility of sequels, if you kill off the character.

Well, maybe people will plug in some more ideas... I'll check back later.

This is the next part of your story,drago!



There was a stinker named (Lola).
He went to forever forest.
He meet the same flower that killed Michael!
He said: Why you killed my friend!
The flower said: Because he killed my friends in Lazy Leaf Forest!
Lola: I'LL KILL YOU!
Fire flower: HA HA! How??
Lola: I'll use POW!
Fire flower: No!
Lola shot the fire at the flower and the flower dead..
The stinkers were happy because the evils flowers dead.
THE END
What do you think?

I do not know what to say.

kidkidaaa1 wrote:This is the next part of your story,drago!



There was a stinker named (Lola).
He went to forever forest.
He meet the same flower that killed Michael!
He said: Why you killed my friend!
The flower said: Because he killed my friends in Lazy Leaf Forest!
Lola: I'LL KILL YOU!
Fire flower: HA HA! How??
Lola: I'll use POW!
Fire flower: No!
Lola shot the fire at the flower and the flower dead..
The stinkers were happy because the evils flowers dead.
THE END
What do you think?

Looking good!
But I'd like to end the first story without Michael's kill. Virtlands was correct!

Okay, here's my continuation; while you people can continue the sequel.

There was a stinker living in WONDERTOWN.
His name was Michael. He was a very comical stinker.
He was simple, serene and confident.
He loved treasure hunting, so he wanted to go for some.
He wanted to keep collecting gems and coins.
Now, his twin brother Mitchell gave him a task.
He had to go the Forever forest to retrieve the GREY SHARD.
He accepted the challenge.
He got Peegue's pass and went into the forever forest.
He ventured in the forever forest.
There were creepy scritters, deadly chompers, friendly turtles and goofy ducks along his way.
The breeze was pleasant and the sky was sea blue, a perfect day for a picnic.
He walked, jogged, ran, hopped, skipped and jumped for sometime.
When it was time for rest, he sat down under a pink leaftree.
Suddenly, he heard a voice.
It was the voice of the forest spirit.
The forest spirit told: "Hey Michael. Thee come to seek grey shard? Et tu Stinkers? I wont allow thy to do so!"
But Michael was playful and locked the spirit inside a white gate.
Now he went into the darker part of the jungle.
There were many spiders, fireflowers, giant scritters and more.
He met a fire flower named FLARE.
He was petrified as this firflower looked very angry.
The fire flower told "hehehee, you are in my trap now".
Michael asked why?.
The fireflower roared.
An instant after that, it shot a fire ball.
The fireball travelled with great velocity. He tried to escape it but he didn't.It hit him.
While he was hit, he went into a parallel dimension where he was lost in a violet void and a huge image of the fireflower appeared before him.
The fireflower said:
"I know you! You are the nasty stinker guy who went into the good flower, bad flower garden in Lazy Leaf Forest. There, you killed my girlfriend with pow magic. I was supposed to marry her next week.But, I couldn't bcos of your evil deeds. I'm taking revenge for it. DIE".
Then the fireball exploded and the stinker was burnt.
There was a lot of smoke around the scene.
The fireflower laughed: "HAHAHAA"
After the smoke was cleared, the stinker was missing.
It didn't know if he was vaporised or he fled bcos there was a lake nearby.
But, luckily, Michael escaped into the lake and healed his wounds a little.
Then, he went to carry on his task.

TO BE CONTINUED...

WOW!
Good story!
I like it,Drago!

kidkidaaa1 wrote:WOW!
Good story!
I like it,Drago!

Thanks for the comments!
I'm looking forward to upgrade this to a novel!
MYSTERY OF THE GREY SHARD!

Dark Drago wrote:

kidkidaaa1 wrote:WOW!
Good story!
I like it,Drago!

Thanks for the comments!
I'm looking forward to upgrade this to a novel!
MYSTERY OF THE GREY SHARD!

Or shard of life

epicdude15 wrote:

Dark Drago wrote:

kidkidaaa1 wrote:WOW!
Good story!
I like it,Drago!

Thanks for the comments!
I'm looking forward to upgrade this to a novel!
MYSTERY OF THE GREY SHARD!

Or shard of life

Good Idea!
But let us all think it over!

kidkidaaa1 wrote:This is the next part of your story,drago!

There was a stinker named (Lola).
He went to forever forest.
He meet the same flower that killed Michael!
He said: Why you killed my friend!
The flower said: Because he killed my friends in Lazy Leaf Forest!
Lola: I'LL KILL YOU!
Fire flower: HA HA! How??
Lola: I'll use POW!
Fire flower: No!
Lola shot the fire at the flower and the flower dead..
The stinkers were happy because the evils flowers dead.
THE END
What do you think?

That 'Lola' inspired me, thanks to you ḳ̣̣̣̣i̤̤̤̤̤d̤̤̤̤̤ḳ̣̣̣̣i̤̤̤̤̤d̤̤̤̤̤a̤̤̤̤̤a̤̤̤̤̤ạ̣̣̣̣1̤̤̤̤̤.

But, I think I won't use the evil or dead themes so far.

So here's my new sequel poem, which is
The Copa-Cobana, -sort of.


Return To Wonderland-Cabana --

The stinker's name was Lola, she was not sola
With gold stars in her lair, and a level cut down to there
She would play this level so fine, as sweet as coily wine
And while she tried to find a star, Peegue tended from afar

Across the wonderland floor, they played from 8 till more
They were stinkers, they had their blinkers.
Who could ask for more.

At the Copa, Midnight-Cabana,
The hottest spot north of Havana

His name was Peego, he wore a diamond,
He traveled by teleport, to see Lola by resort
But Peego went a bit too far, and sent Lola skidding across the bar

And then the coilies flew and stars were smashed in two
There was sticky-cube a-goo, and a single ghostie too
But just who shot who?

The stinker's name was Lola, she was from La Jolla
But that was 30 years ago, when Pat gave the game a -go.
Now it's a disco level too, but not for Lola true
Still a level-mess to solve, and nothing for resolve
She sits there so defined, with these puzzle levels from her mind

She lost her Peego, and and now she lost her -eego
She can't unwind!

At the Copa, Midnight-Cabana,
The hottest spot north of Havana



and lastly,

The Wonderland Backwards Rhyme, by Andy

Early one morning and Late last night,

Two dead scouges got up to fight.
Back to back, they faced each other,
Drew their surrender-flags and fired on each other.

They fell to the ground,

From the holes they were in,
One from without, One from within.

Up the hill their heavy bodies did roll,
Like a boulder free on it's way to a goal.

They rolled and they flipped, and followed eachother
like a blue link-sphere follows a red-link brother.

Until finally their green bodies hit bottom and fell up.

They sprang from the teleporters,
That they were never in,
And started to duel all over again.

A Kaboom was there,
exploded with delight,
but remained frozen and still
and will be all-right.

I saw two coilys rise,
saw the looks in their eyes,

Saw how short they were,
At seven feet tall,
they were nothing at all.

Then I started to think,
In a blinding slow flash,

How Pat is on the brink
and does not need the cash.

I'll tell the whole world of what I saw today here
But first, my blindness I shall cure, oh dear!

Again, wonderful from you, Virtlands!
I've started to continue my story too!

Next Part:


In the way, he met another stinker called Henry.
Henry was a farmer incharge of Forever Farm.
He asked him about the grey shard.
He told :
"Michael, you have been set one of the most dangerous missions. The mission consists of 4 parts. First, you need to pass the valley of chompers. Then, you must cross the icey caverns of wonderfalls. Next, you must travel beneath the ocean of Wonderfalls and fourthly, you must go inside the CASTLE"!
Michael told: "ooh, so interesting. Where do I start?"
He replied you must go through the cavern of fire to the chomper valley.
He went inside this cavern.
There were so many fire traps in it that he used gymnastics to go through.
Then, he reached the valley.
A chomper came near him and told:
"Who dares enter the valley of chompers?"
He told: "Michael, hath come to seek the SHARD"
It told: "Ha ha ha! You must pass through us."
Then it started chasing Michael.

TO BE CONTINUED...

What happened?

Dark Drago wrote:What happened?

IDK!

The thing is even I got bored to continue this story!