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2nd Adventure: TES P4: The Bluehouse
Posted: Sun Mar 01, 2015 2:30 pm
by loofisawesome
Alrighty, round 4!
Jutomi's video:
Clicky again!
Posted: Sun Mar 01, 2015 8:04 pm
by Master Wonder Mage
I noticed a bug in this adventure: if you read the billboard, it traps you, and you cannot get out of the dialog.
This adventure had a lot more care put into it, and it showed. The puzzles were far more structured/present, and there was a bit more plot motion. That being said, the plotting could use a little bit of work. The events of this adventure didn't seem to be really following up on anything that happened previously, rather seeming like a random event. You are suddenly going to a blue/greenhouse. This is the main thing, in my opinion, that you need to work on in a plot-oriented series like a tennis.
Bottoms Up
Posted: Mon Mar 02, 2015 12:06 am
by Jutomi
Huh!
So it looks like we were sent, eastward, to an even colder place!
Unfortunately I did end up recording the glitchier version...
Still, it was pretty fun! Thank you.
Posted: Mon Mar 02, 2015 1:29 am
by loofisawesome
You mean, westward?
I'm glad you liked this one. Can't wait to see part 5!
Left and Right
Posted: Mon Mar 02, 2015 1:31 am
by Jutomi
I get East/West and left/right mixed up.
Well, at least this was way more accurate than I was just now.
Posted: Mon Mar 02, 2015 8:17 am
by samuelthx
This one's an improvement from your previous adventure--there are more puzzles!
There wasn't much plot development here, though.
Thanks!
Posted: Fri Mar 06, 2015 7:37 pm
by garirry
Definitely better than last adventure, but still a bit short and story-less in my opinion. Can't wait to see what newer adventures will be!
Changing
Posted: Mon Jun 22, 2015 7:47 pm
by loofisawesome
I decided to change some things. I changed the topic titlle, deleted the message at my post, and removed the glitchy version.