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Surprise! Bet you guys didn't expect this, huh?

Me and FinnThor decided to do a tennis, but he had to go on vacation, so I lost some motivation. But as I am on vacation right now, and had access to the editor, I had enough time to work on this!

I won't spoil anything for you in the description, but have fun (?). i decided to make the action room pretty evil I just hope FinnThor manages to keep up the plot..

(Note: The reason it's 5 and not 4 is because 4 is already in the works and I didn't want to mess up the flow jeeboos get triggered of my adventures.)

PhoenixBlaze wrote:jeeboos get triggered

Why do you think I'm going to spoil anything? There's nothing to spoil. (Unlike in CvP, where I could spoil the entire final boss right now if I wanted to.)

Anyways, I look forward to making part 2! (In a few weeks)

But, ummmm, video solution? *Goes to check channel*

Nope, no video solution. QUICKLY! MAKE ONE! DO AS I SAY! [/reference]

Edit: Wait, did you name the next part for me? It says that "Main Directory" is in the works. I AM CONFUZZLED. HELP.

I can't record, as I don't have access to Bandicam. Even if I did, i wouldn't, because this and The Crimson Legacy are super plot packed and I don't want people to just watch my videos instead of playing themselves. (Yes, I know you're on vacation)

As for the Directory part, that's going to be similar to the TMD Megathread, but I'm only making a new topic for that once we get deeper into the storyline. I'll just put the link to the newest tennis part once you finish it.

It was a nice adventure, I can't wait (even though I can) to see where this goes!

That being said, I should say the exploding barrel segment is COMPLETELY exploitable because you gave the adventurer blink. They can just teleport behind the barrels and not have to do much of anything.

That gem at the end though, that got me

One last thing, the name of the last person to come to this place...

That was meant to let the player fly over the water gaps but to give the barrels more time to get to you because you can't move when you blink. I guess I should fix that, but I don't want to do it right now.

There are markings that indicate the different commands; one stripe was a dialogue, while three stripes were when the barrels and pow shooters would go off.

Ahm, it was a long time ago when I proposed to Finn to make one new tennis series with you, but he said not now... and now this

Whatever, I am starting now

Finn must have helped you to think of these names

It looks interesting for now, but we'll see...

I mean, we'll see will Finn ruin everything

No, I made these up myself.

Crokba was intentional, though.

PhoenixBlaze wrote:No, I made these up myself.

Crokba was intentional, though.

I see

Reuploaded. Try avoiding that barrel section now!

This was a great start to a new series, with an intriguing storyline, and great potential for world building. Although the puzzles weren't that difficult, I'm glad you included some

PhoenixBlaze wrote:Reuploaded. Try avoiding that barrel section now!

It's still possible to (mostly) avoid the barrel section (thank God for that!): the secret is to blink backwards, instead of forwards, which is presumably what you intended

I think I'll regret telling you this because I don't especially like evil sections

ALSO WHAT IS WRONG WITH YOU RE: THE LAST GEM SERIOUSLY

Just played this. The puzzles were pretty easy, but I have some notes for them.

Blink Puzzle: Finished with one blink left over.

Brr Puzzle: RAWR

TNT Barrel Chase: RAWR I HATED THIS SO MUCH SO I DID THE BLINK BACKWARDS WAY THAT samuelthx DID

As for the plot, it was pretty nice. I'll be working on Part 2 after I make CvP 11.

FinnThor wrote:Just played this. The puzzles were pretty easy, but I have some notes for them.

Blink Puzzle: Finished with one blink left over.

HOW?! I mean, you probably got the coins in an alternate order, but it usually takes me the last two blinks to get to the gate!

FinnThor wrote:Brr Puzzle: RAWR

Really? I thought it was pretty easy, there's a clear path with just a little misdirection.

FinnThor wrote:TNT Barrel Chase: RAWR I HATED THIS SO MUCH SO I DID THE BLINK BACKWARDS WAY THAT samuelthx DID

Yes, I'm sorry for that, guys. I'll make sure to include a skip option when I add it to my archive.

FinnThor wrote:As for the plot, it was pretty nice.

Thanks! I thought it was a bit rushed...

FinnThor wrote:I'll be working on Part 2 after I make CvP 11.

PhoenixBlaze wrote:

FinnThor wrote:Just played this. The puzzles were pretty easy, but I have some notes for them.

Blink Puzzle: Finished with one blink left over.

HOW?! I mean, you probably got the coins in an alternate order, but it usually takes me the last two blinks to get to the gate!

FinnThor wrote:Brr Puzzle: RAWR

Really? I thought it was pretty easy, there's a clear path with just a little misdirection.

FinnThor wrote:TNT Barrel Chase: RAWR I HATED THIS SO MUCH SO I DID THE BLINK BACKWARDS WAY THAT samuelthx DID

Yes, I'm sorry for that, guys. I'll make sure to include a skip option when I add it to my archive.

FinnThor wrote:As for the plot, it was pretty nice.

Thanks! I thought it was a bit rushed...

FinnThor wrote:I'll be working on Part 2 after I make CvP 11.

For the Brr Puzzle: I didn't add anything after RAWR so I meant that it was pretty easy and fun.

Plot: Yes, it was a bit rushed, but I didn't really care.

FinnThor wrote:Also, I was joking, I'm making part 2 before CvP 11.

I have nothing against it. I'll have more time to make some adventures for IOTD

Woo! This was a kinda neat one.

I really am looking forward to the next part. >:3

And for my playthrough:

Part 1
and
Part 2

Boop~