Small Adventure: Obstacle Course
- Timecrokba
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Small Adventure: Obstacle Course
So, this is a small, fairly simple adventure I made while testing things out in a test hub before I moved onto bigger projects (Like possibly a full hub). I felt I might want to post one of the adventures and this one was my favorite of the bunch (that wasn't a joke adventure). Suggestions and whatnot are always appreciated!
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"Its almost scary how go to bed" -Morgana Probably. Persona 5 if you don't know what thats from.
"Its almost scary how go to bed" -Morgana Probably. Persona 5 if you don't know what thats from.
That was a fun little adventure!
- I Advice you to use the wall height 1.0 instead of 0.5, it looks better specially indoors.
- Try to not use big wlvs if they can be made smaller, specially if the big wlvs contain a lot of empty space in them, either fill it up with something (decoration/tiny puzzles) or make it smaller, it should look way better if done correctly.
- Try to decorate your levels, it'll make them look much cooler if you used the correct elements.
Other than that, it was a fine level.
I also noticed a few things in this adventure that can be improved:spoiler??? wrote:The error room did actually manage to troll me at the end even though it didn't the first time (since I was expecting it), I like how you tricked me twice in a row with the U turn.
- I Advice you to use the wall height 1.0 instead of 0.5, it looks better specially indoors.
- Try to not use big wlvs if they can be made smaller, specially if the big wlvs contain a lot of empty space in them, either fill it up with something (decoration/tiny puzzles) or make it smaller, it should look way better if done correctly.
- Try to decorate your levels, it'll make them look much cooler if you used the correct elements.
Other than that, it was a fine level.
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- Timecrokba
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Thanks for the feedback! I'll keep it in mind (IF I can figure out how to do this ) Might try to recreate the level later to shorten the file size, maybe edit thekidkidaaa1 wrote:That was a fun little adventure!I also noticed a few things in this adventure that can be improved:spoiler??? wrote:The error room did actually manage to troll me at the end even though it didn't the first time (since I was expecting it), I like how you tricked me twice in a row with the U turn.
- I Advice you to use the wall height 1.0 instead of 0.5, it looks better specially indoors.
- Try to not use big wlvs if they can be made smaller, specially if the big wlvs contain a lot of empty space in them, either fill it up with something (decoration/tiny puzzles) or make it smaller, it should look way better if done correctly.
- Try to decorate your levels, it'll make them look much cooler if you used the correct elements.
Other than that, it was a fine level.
and some of the obstacles (Like the starting Maze.)Spoiler maybe. wrote: Star Error Troll Room.
And that is the expectation I had for the room mentioned in the spoiler(s). First part, obvious, second part, not so much.
My Level List
"Its almost scary how go to bed" -Morgana Probably. Persona 5 if you don't know what thats from.
"Its almost scary how go to bed" -Morgana Probably. Persona 5 if you don't know what thats from.
Time Course
This was a nice adventure, Timecrokba!
Thank you very much.
Here's my video solution!
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=bZCkcdQa144
Thank you very much.
Here's my video solution!
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=bZCkcdQa144
Your only little stinker that's absolutely NOT a z-bot by this name,
Jutomi~
Also, if you want to see my level list, here it is!
(Also: List of Hubs, WA Manual)
Oh, and my YT wonderland channel. Forgot about that.
Jutomi~
Also, if you want to see my level list, here it is!
(Also: List of Hubs, WA Manual)
Oh, and my YT wonderland channel. Forgot about that.
- Timecrokba
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Re: Time Course
Noticed you didn't get the Pow charger. That was the whole point of the sign! Anyways, thanks for playing my adventure.Jutomi wrote:This was a nice adventure, Timecrokba!
Thank you very much.
Here's my video solution!
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=bZCkcdQa144
Re: Time Course
Oh... there was a Pow charger?Timecrokba wrote:Noticed you didn't get the Pow charger. That was the whole point of the sign! Anyways, thanks for playing my adventure.Jutomi wrote:This was a nice adventure, Timecrokba!
Thank you very much.
Here's my video solution!
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=bZCkcdQa144
Woops...
Your only little stinker that's absolutely NOT a z-bot by this name,
Jutomi~
Also, if you want to see my level list, here it is!
(Also: List of Hubs, WA Manual)
Oh, and my YT wonderland channel. Forgot about that.
Jutomi~
Also, if you want to see my level list, here it is!
(Also: List of Hubs, WA Manual)
Oh, and my YT wonderland channel. Forgot about that.