Small Adventure: Obstacle Course

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Timecrokba
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Small Adventure: Obstacle Course

Post by Timecrokba » Sat Mar 26, 2016 3:06 pm

So, this is a small, fairly simple adventure I made while testing things out in a test hub before I moved onto bigger projects (Like possibly a full hub). I felt I might want to post one of the adventures and this one was my favorite of the bunch (that wasn't a joke adventure). Suggestions and whatnot are always appreciated! :D
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Post by |Cookie| » Sat Mar 26, 2016 4:15 pm

That was a fun little adventure!
spoiler??? wrote:The error room did actually manage to troll me at the end even though it didn't the first time (since I was expecting it), I like how you tricked me twice in a row with the U turn. :lol:
I also noticed a few things in this adventure that can be improved:
- I Advice you to use the wall height 1.0 instead of 0.5, it looks better specially indoors.
- Try to not use big wlvs if they can be made smaller, specially if the big wlvs contain a lot of empty space in them, either fill it up with something (decoration/tiny puzzles) or make it smaller, it should look way better if done correctly.
- Try to decorate your levels, it'll make them look much cooler if you used the correct elements.

Other than that, it was a fine level. :P
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Post by Wonderland King » Sat Mar 26, 2016 5:02 pm

I have to say, the room with the star certainly messed with my head the second time around. :P
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Post by Timecrokba » Sat Mar 26, 2016 9:50 pm

kidkidaaa1 wrote:That was a fun little adventure!
spoiler??? wrote:The error room did actually manage to troll me at the end even though it didn't the first time (since I was expecting it), I like how you tricked me twice in a row with the U turn. :lol:
I also noticed a few things in this adventure that can be improved:
- I Advice you to use the wall height 1.0 instead of 0.5, it looks better specially indoors.
- Try to not use big wlvs if they can be made smaller, specially if the big wlvs contain a lot of empty space in them, either fill it up with something (decoration/tiny puzzles) or make it smaller, it should look way better if done correctly.
- Try to decorate your levels, it'll make them look much cooler if you used the correct elements.

Other than that, it was a fine level. :P
Thanks for the feedback! I'll keep it in mind (IF I can figure out how to do this :P) Might try to recreate the level later to shorten the file size, maybe edit the
Spoiler maybe. wrote: Star Error Troll Room.
and some of the obstacles (Like the starting Maze.)

And that is the expectation I had for the room mentioned in the spoiler(s). First part, obvious, second part, not so much.
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Time Course

Post by Jutomi » Wed May 18, 2016 12:43 am

This was a nice adventure, Timecrokba! :D

Thank you very much. :mrgreen:

Here's my video solution!
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=bZCkcdQa144
Your only little stinker that's absolutely NOT a z-bot by this name,
Jutomi~ :mrgreen:

Also, if you want to see my level list, here it is! :D
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Oh, and my YT wonderland channel. Forgot about that.
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Re: Time Course

Post by Timecrokba » Wed May 18, 2016 12:54 am

Jutomi wrote:This was a nice adventure, Timecrokba! :D

Thank you very much. :mrgreen:

Here's my video solution!
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=bZCkcdQa144
Noticed you didn't get the Pow charger. That was the whole point of the sign! Anyways, thanks for playing my adventure.
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Re: Time Course

Post by Jutomi » Thu May 19, 2016 9:26 pm

Timecrokba wrote:
Jutomi wrote:This was a nice adventure, Timecrokba! :D

Thank you very much. :mrgreen:

Here's my video solution!
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=bZCkcdQa144
Noticed you didn't get the Pow charger. That was the whole point of the sign! Anyways, thanks for playing my adventure.
Oh... there was a Pow charger?

Woops... :lol:
Your only little stinker that's absolutely NOT a z-bot by this name,
Jutomi~ :mrgreen:

Also, if you want to see my level list, here it is! :D
(Also: List of Hubs, WA Manual)
Oh, and my YT wonderland channel. Forgot about that.
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