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After the chase started, the whole scene changed into a red vortex with a soccer field in between.
The chomper challenged him to a soccer match.
It'd be funny how a chomper can play soccer.
Michael rose up and back kicked the ball right into the chomper's goal. But just an instant before it went to the goal, the chomper expanded and caught the ball in his mouth.
That's what I call a CATCH!
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The chomper challenged him to a soccer match.
It'd be funny how a chomper can play soccer.
Michael rose up and back kicked the ball right into the chomper's goal. But just an instant before it went to the goal, the chomper expanded and caught the ball in his mouth.
That's what I call a CATCH!
2 B continued
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MICHAEL AND THE SHARD OF LIFE
CHAPTER 1 - OFF TO THE FOREST
There was a stinker living in WONDERTOWN.
His name was Michael. He was a very comical stinker.
He was simple, serene and confident.
He loved treasure hunting, so he wanted to go for some.
He wanted to keep collecting gems and coins.
Now, his twin brother Mitchell gave him a task.
He had to go the Forever forest to retrieve the SHARD OF LIFE.
He accepted the challenge.
He got Peegue's pass and went into the forever forest.
He ventured in the forever forest.
There were creepy scritters, deadly chompers, friendly turtles and goofy ducks along his way.
The breeze was pleasant and the sky was sea blue, a perfect day for a picnic.
He walked, jogged, ran, hopped, skipped and jumped for sometime.
When it was time for rest, he sat down under a pink leaftree.
Suddenly, he heard a voice.
It was the voice of the forest spirit.
The forest spirit told: "Hey Michael. Thee come to seek shard o life? Et tu Stinkers? I wont allow thy to do so!"
But Michael was playful and locked the spirit inside a white gate.
Now he went into the darker part of the jungle.
There were many spiders, fireflowers, giant scritters and more.
He met a fire flower named FLARE.
He was petrified as this firflower looked very angry.
The fire flower told "hehehee, you are in my trap now".
Michael asked why?.
The fireflower roared.
An instant after that, it shot a fire ball.
The fireball travelled with great velocity. He tried to escape it but he didn't.It hit him.
While he was hit, he went into a parallel dimension where he was lost in a violet void and a huge image of the fireflower appeared before him.
The fireflower said:
"I know you! You are the nasty stinker guy who went into the good flower, bad flower garden in Lazy Leaf Forest. There, you killed my girlfriend with pow magic. I was supposed to marry her next week.But, I couldn't bcos of your evil deeds. I'm taking revenge for it. DIE".
Then the fireball exploded and the stinker was burnt.
There was a lot of smoke around the scene.
The fireflower laughed: "HAHAHAA"
After the smoke was cleared, the stinker was missing.
It didn't know if he was vaporised or he fled bcos there was a lake nearby.
But, luckily, Michael escaped into the lake and healed his wounds a little.
Then, he went to carry on his task.
In the way, he met another stinker called Henry.
Henry was a farmer incharge of Forever Farm.
He asked him about the shard of life.
He told :
"Michael, you have been set one of the most dangerous missions. The mission consists of 4 parts. First, you need to pass the valley of chompers. Then, you must cross the icey caverns of wonderfalls. Next, you must travel beneath the ocean of Wonderfalls and fourthly, you must go inside the CASTLE"!
Michael told: "ooh, so interesting. Where do I start?"
He replied you must go through the cavern of fire to the chomper valley.
He went inside this cavern.
There were so many fire traps in it that he used gymnastics to go through.
Then, he reached the valley.
CHAPTER 2 - THE SOCCER MATCH
A chomper came near him and told:
"Who dares enter the valley of chompers?"
He told: "Michael, hath come to seek the SHARD"
It told: "Ha ha ha! You must pass through us."
Then it started chasing Michael.
After the chase started, the whole scene changed into a red vortex with a soccer field in between.
The chomper challenged him to a soccer match.
It'd be funny how a chomper can play soccer.
Michael rose up and back kicked the ball right into the chomper's goal. But just an instant before it went to the goal, the chomper expanded and caught the ball in his mouth.
That's what I call a CATCH!
Then the chomper split into 3 baby chompers and they used the same technique as BARCELONA used.
The triangular formation was tough.
Michael tried hard to break through but was defeated 3 times.
After the third goal, Michael was in despair.
"How can I lose to a chomper."
"I will never give up!"
And suddenly an aura of flame was around him.
His speed increased 2 times and power 5 times.
He got the ball, dashed along the way and hit a hard goal such that the chomper's goal post broke literally.
The chomper told: "Looks like I'm gonna enjoy this match. Michael's quite a good opponent."
Suddenly, fellow chompers gathered around the stadium shouting "CHOMPY, CHOMPY, CHOMPY!"
The power that arose suddenly in Michael was the Ultimate Stinker Potential.
Its a power that comes out only when you are in despair.
The 3 babies united into CHOMPY and he started dribbling.
Michael slided and kicked CHOMPY's mouth and the refree THWART THE THWART signalled a yellow card.
CHOMPY received a free kick.
A blue aura came out of him and chompy head smashed the ball very hard such that the there was a imaginary driller on the ball and he shouted "DRILL ARROW".
The driller charged towards Michael.
These graphics come from INAZUMA ELEVEN anime.
Michael suddenly rose his hands up and shouted "POSEIDON'S SHIELD".
An imaginary Poseidon showed up and the shield intercepted the drill.
It was a fierce clash of soul vs soul.
For 5 mins, neither the ball went in nor Poseidon stopped it.
Chompy charged up and smashed it again.
It broke thru Poseidon and it was a goal.
The score is 4-1
TO BE CONTINUED!!!
CHAPTER 1 - OFF TO THE FOREST
There was a stinker living in WONDERTOWN.
His name was Michael. He was a very comical stinker.
He was simple, serene and confident.
He loved treasure hunting, so he wanted to go for some.
He wanted to keep collecting gems and coins.
Now, his twin brother Mitchell gave him a task.
He had to go the Forever forest to retrieve the SHARD OF LIFE.
He accepted the challenge.
He got Peegue's pass and went into the forever forest.
He ventured in the forever forest.
There were creepy scritters, deadly chompers, friendly turtles and goofy ducks along his way.
The breeze was pleasant and the sky was sea blue, a perfect day for a picnic.
He walked, jogged, ran, hopped, skipped and jumped for sometime.
When it was time for rest, he sat down under a pink leaftree.
Suddenly, he heard a voice.
It was the voice of the forest spirit.
The forest spirit told: "Hey Michael. Thee come to seek shard o life? Et tu Stinkers? I wont allow thy to do so!"
But Michael was playful and locked the spirit inside a white gate.
Now he went into the darker part of the jungle.
There were many spiders, fireflowers, giant scritters and more.
He met a fire flower named FLARE.
He was petrified as this firflower looked very angry.
The fire flower told "hehehee, you are in my trap now".
Michael asked why?.
The fireflower roared.
An instant after that, it shot a fire ball.
The fireball travelled with great velocity. He tried to escape it but he didn't.It hit him.
While he was hit, he went into a parallel dimension where he was lost in a violet void and a huge image of the fireflower appeared before him.
The fireflower said:
"I know you! You are the nasty stinker guy who went into the good flower, bad flower garden in Lazy Leaf Forest. There, you killed my girlfriend with pow magic. I was supposed to marry her next week.But, I couldn't bcos of your evil deeds. I'm taking revenge for it. DIE".
Then the fireball exploded and the stinker was burnt.
There was a lot of smoke around the scene.
The fireflower laughed: "HAHAHAA"
After the smoke was cleared, the stinker was missing.
It didn't know if he was vaporised or he fled bcos there was a lake nearby.
But, luckily, Michael escaped into the lake and healed his wounds a little.
Then, he went to carry on his task.
In the way, he met another stinker called Henry.
Henry was a farmer incharge of Forever Farm.
He asked him about the shard of life.
He told :
"Michael, you have been set one of the most dangerous missions. The mission consists of 4 parts. First, you need to pass the valley of chompers. Then, you must cross the icey caverns of wonderfalls. Next, you must travel beneath the ocean of Wonderfalls and fourthly, you must go inside the CASTLE"!
Michael told: "ooh, so interesting. Where do I start?"
He replied you must go through the cavern of fire to the chomper valley.
He went inside this cavern.
There were so many fire traps in it that he used gymnastics to go through.
Then, he reached the valley.
CHAPTER 2 - THE SOCCER MATCH
A chomper came near him and told:
"Who dares enter the valley of chompers?"
He told: "Michael, hath come to seek the SHARD"
It told: "Ha ha ha! You must pass through us."
Then it started chasing Michael.
After the chase started, the whole scene changed into a red vortex with a soccer field in between.
The chomper challenged him to a soccer match.
It'd be funny how a chomper can play soccer.
Michael rose up and back kicked the ball right into the chomper's goal. But just an instant before it went to the goal, the chomper expanded and caught the ball in his mouth.
That's what I call a CATCH!
Then the chomper split into 3 baby chompers and they used the same technique as BARCELONA used.
The triangular formation was tough.
Michael tried hard to break through but was defeated 3 times.
After the third goal, Michael was in despair.
"How can I lose to a chomper."
"I will never give up!"
And suddenly an aura of flame was around him.
His speed increased 2 times and power 5 times.
He got the ball, dashed along the way and hit a hard goal such that the chomper's goal post broke literally.
The chomper told: "Looks like I'm gonna enjoy this match. Michael's quite a good opponent."
Suddenly, fellow chompers gathered around the stadium shouting "CHOMPY, CHOMPY, CHOMPY!"
The power that arose suddenly in Michael was the Ultimate Stinker Potential.
Its a power that comes out only when you are in despair.
The 3 babies united into CHOMPY and he started dribbling.
Michael slided and kicked CHOMPY's mouth and the refree THWART THE THWART signalled a yellow card.
CHOMPY received a free kick.
A blue aura came out of him and chompy head smashed the ball very hard such that the there was a imaginary driller on the ball and he shouted "DRILL ARROW".
The driller charged towards Michael.
These graphics come from INAZUMA ELEVEN anime.
Michael suddenly rose his hands up and shouted "POSEIDON'S SHIELD".
An imaginary Poseidon showed up and the shield intercepted the drill.
It was a fierce clash of soul vs soul.
For 5 mins, neither the ball went in nor Poseidon stopped it.
Chompy charged up and smashed it again.
It broke thru Poseidon and it was a goal.
The score is 4-1
TO BE CONTINUED!!!
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DP
Here's my story.
The Myth of the Grid Shard
CHAPTER 1
There was a stinker in a land far, far away, in the land of Aquirapo. His name was Zack and he hated cliches, (like 'a land far, far away,') most of the things that make custom adventures fun, (like malevolent magic, evil sentinent signs, and radioactive bookshelfs,) and anything related to the Wonderland Forums.
But he did enjoy adventuring, like most people. He was probably the greatest expert on the subject that ever lived. So when he heard a rumour in the metropolis of Aquirapo, (known as Xonio City,) that there was a new shard far away to be collected to- (and this is the cliche Zack hated) -save Wonderland, he was of course tremendously excited.
Zack went and volunteered for the mission. He was the only one. This is because, first, unlike most of the peoples in Wonderland, the citizens of Aquirapo disliked adventuring, except for a few people like Zack. Second, the shard was called the Grid Shard, meaning it was in one of the secret grid worlds that were haunted, lonely, and scary. The Grid Worlds were even farther away than Aquirapo, so far that they had only been visited before by teleporter, and only for minutes.
So Zack started his expedition. Outside of Aquirapo, there was forest hundreds of stinkermetremiles around. Zack would have to be very brave to succeed in this quest.
FINIS OF CHAPTER 1
Here's my story.
The Myth of the Grid Shard
CHAPTER 1
There was a stinker in a land far, far away, in the land of Aquirapo. His name was Zack and he hated cliches, (like 'a land far, far away,') most of the things that make custom adventures fun, (like malevolent magic, evil sentinent signs, and radioactive bookshelfs,) and anything related to the Wonderland Forums.
But he did enjoy adventuring, like most people. He was probably the greatest expert on the subject that ever lived. So when he heard a rumour in the metropolis of Aquirapo, (known as Xonio City,) that there was a new shard far away to be collected to- (and this is the cliche Zack hated) -save Wonderland, he was of course tremendously excited.
Zack went and volunteered for the mission. He was the only one. This is because, first, unlike most of the peoples in Wonderland, the citizens of Aquirapo disliked adventuring, except for a few people like Zack. Second, the shard was called the Grid Shard, meaning it was in one of the secret grid worlds that were haunted, lonely, and scary. The Grid Worlds were even farther away than Aquirapo, so far that they had only been visited before by teleporter, and only for minutes.
So Zack started his expedition. Outside of Aquirapo, there was forest hundreds of stinkermetremiles around. Zack would have to be very brave to succeed in this quest.
FINIS OF CHAPTER 1
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okay, you can make an adventure of my story.Wonderman109 wrote:If you lose interest again, I can continue the story for you.Dark Drago wrote:Then, the chomper lost very badly to him.
Then he explored...
I lOST inTEreST Bad tImE
Also, I'd like to turn your story into an adventure series. Do I have your permission?
You can edit your post instead of DP and TP instantly
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Dark Drago
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MICHAEL AND THE SHARD OF LIFE
CHAPTER 1 - OFF TO THE FOREST
There was a stinker living in WONDERTOWN.
His name was Michael. He was a very comical stinker.
He was simple, serene and confident.
He loved treasure hunting, so he wanted to go for some.
He wanted to keep collecting gems and coins.
Now, his twin brother Mitchell gave him a task.
He had to go the Forever forest to retrieve the SHARD OF LIFE.
He accepted the challenge.
He got Peegue's pass and went into the forever forest.
He ventured in the forever forest.
There were creepy scritters, deadly chompers, friendly turtles and goofy ducks along his way.
The breeze was pleasant and the sky was sea blue, a perfect day for a picnic.
He walked, jogged, ran, hopped, skipped and jumped for sometime.
When it was time for rest, he sat down under a pink leaftree.
Suddenly, he heard a voice.
It was the voice of the forest spirit.
The forest spirit told: "Hey Michael. Thee come to seek shard o life? Et tu Stinkers? I wont allow thy to do so!"
But Michael was playful and locked the spirit inside a white gate.
Now he went into the darker part of the jungle.
There were many spiders, fireflowers, giant scritters and more.
He met a fire flower named FLARE.
He was petrified as this firflower looked very angry.
The fire flower told "hehehee, you are in my trap now".
Michael asked why?.
The fireflower roared.
An instant after that, it shot a fire ball.
The fireball travelled with great velocity. He tried to escape it but he didn't.It hit him.
While he was hit, he went into a parallel dimension where he was lost in a violet void and a huge image of the fireflower appeared before him.
The fireflower said:
"I know you! You are the nasty stinker guy who went into the good flower, bad flower garden in Lazy Leaf Forest. There, you killed my girlfriend with pow magic. I was supposed to marry her next week.But, I couldn't bcos of your evil deeds. I'm taking revenge for it. DIE".
Then the fireball exploded and the stinker was burnt.
There was a lot of smoke around the scene.
The fireflower laughed: "HAHAHAA"
After the smoke was cleared, the stinker was missing.
It didn't know if he was vaporised or he fled bcos there was a lake nearby.
But, luckily, Michael escaped into the lake and healed his wounds a little.
Then, he went to carry on his task.
In the way, he met another stinker called Henry.
Henry was a farmer incharge of Forever Farm.
He asked him about the shard of life.
He told :
"Michael, you have been set one of the most dangerous missions. The mission consists of 4 parts. First, you need to pass the valley of chompers. Then, you must cross the icey caverns of wonderfalls. Next, you must travel beneath the ocean of Wonderfalls and fourthly, you must go inside the CASTLE"!
Michael told: "ooh, so interesting. Where do I start?"
He replied you must go through the cavern of fire to the chomper valley.
He went inside this cavern.
There were so many fire traps in it that he used gymnastics to go through.
Then, he reached the valley.
CHAPTER 2 - THE SOCCER MATCH
A chomper came near him and told:
"Who dares enter the valley of chompers?"
He told: "Michael, hath come to seek the SHARD"
It told: "Ha ha ha! You must pass through us."
Then it started chasing Michael.
After the chase started, the whole scene changed into a red vortex with a soccer field in between.
The chomper challenged him to a soccer match.
It'd be funny how a chomper can play soccer.
Michael rose up and back kicked the ball right into the chomper's goal. But just an instant before it went to the goal, the chomper expanded and caught the ball in his mouth.
That's what I call a CATCH!
Then the chomper split into 3 baby chompers and they used the same technique as BARCELONA used.
The triangular formation was tough.
Michael tried hard to break through but was defeated 3 times.
After the third goal, Michael was in despair.
"How can I lose to a chomper."
"I will never give up!"
And suddenly an aura of flame was around him.
His speed increased 2 times and power 5 times.
He got the ball, dashed along the way and hit a hard goal such that the chomper's goal post broke literally.
The chomper told: "Looks like I'm gonna enjoy this match. Michael's quite a good opponent."
Suddenly, fellow chompers gathered around the stadium shouting "CHOMPY, CHOMPY, CHOMPY!"
The power that arose suddenly in Michael was the Ultimate Stinker Potential.
Its a power that comes out only when you are in despair.
The 3 babies united into CHOMPY and he started dribbling.
Michael slided and kicked CHOMPY's mouth and the refree THWART THE THWART signalled a yellow card.
CHOMPY received a free kick.
A blue aura came out of him and chompy head smashed the ball very hard such that the there was a imaginary driller on the ball and he shouted "DRILL ARROW".
The driller charged towards Michael.
These graphics come from INAZUMA ELEVEN anime.
Michael suddenly rose his hands up and shouted "POSEIDON'S SHIELD".
An imaginary Poseidon showed up and the shield intercepted the drill.
It was a fierce clash of soul vs soul.
For 5 mins, neither the ball went in nor Poseidon stopped it.
Chompy charged up and smashed it again.
It broke thru Poseidon and it was a goal.
The score is 4-1
And the half time whistle was blown.
Michael relaxed and rested till the start of the second half.
He remembered: "If you play freely, it will help you evolve."
It was a fierce clash in the second half.
Neither team scored a goal.
Poseidon kept blocking Drill Arrows and Flame Ball was blocked by Chompy's CATCH.
Then, Michael's eyes turned red just like the autumn's spirit.
He kicked the ball so hard that it turned into a meteor and charged towards CHOMPY's goal.
He told: METEOR FALL!
Chompy used CATCH but it dropped and went to GOAL!!!
The score was 4-2.
He did it two more times to even the score.
The fourth time, CHOMPY evolved and a dragon came out and caught the meteor with its claw.
Michael said "CHOMPY's not bad... I'm having real fun"
Then Chompy used his mouth in addition to Drill Arrow and it became Death Arrow.
The arrow charged with great velocity.
Michael smiled, closed his eyes and kept his left hand in the air.
The ball hit his hand and whoosh.
It just stopped.
The arrow was broken and all the power had gone.
What a save!
Then Michael kicked simply the ball.
Chompy used his dragon move but a normal shoot from Michael itself broke past the goal.
The score was 5-4.
THWART blew the final whistle.
It was Michael's victory.
After thanking CHOMPY for a wonderful match, he went to the next area to the icey caverns.
TO BE CONTINUED!!!
CHAPTER 1 - OFF TO THE FOREST
There was a stinker living in WONDERTOWN.
His name was Michael. He was a very comical stinker.
He was simple, serene and confident.
He loved treasure hunting, so he wanted to go for some.
He wanted to keep collecting gems and coins.
Now, his twin brother Mitchell gave him a task.
He had to go the Forever forest to retrieve the SHARD OF LIFE.
He accepted the challenge.
He got Peegue's pass and went into the forever forest.
He ventured in the forever forest.
There were creepy scritters, deadly chompers, friendly turtles and goofy ducks along his way.
The breeze was pleasant and the sky was sea blue, a perfect day for a picnic.
He walked, jogged, ran, hopped, skipped and jumped for sometime.
When it was time for rest, he sat down under a pink leaftree.
Suddenly, he heard a voice.
It was the voice of the forest spirit.
The forest spirit told: "Hey Michael. Thee come to seek shard o life? Et tu Stinkers? I wont allow thy to do so!"
But Michael was playful and locked the spirit inside a white gate.
Now he went into the darker part of the jungle.
There were many spiders, fireflowers, giant scritters and more.
He met a fire flower named FLARE.
He was petrified as this firflower looked very angry.
The fire flower told "hehehee, you are in my trap now".
Michael asked why?.
The fireflower roared.
An instant after that, it shot a fire ball.
The fireball travelled with great velocity. He tried to escape it but he didn't.It hit him.
While he was hit, he went into a parallel dimension where he was lost in a violet void and a huge image of the fireflower appeared before him.
The fireflower said:
"I know you! You are the nasty stinker guy who went into the good flower, bad flower garden in Lazy Leaf Forest. There, you killed my girlfriend with pow magic. I was supposed to marry her next week.But, I couldn't bcos of your evil deeds. I'm taking revenge for it. DIE".
Then the fireball exploded and the stinker was burnt.
There was a lot of smoke around the scene.
The fireflower laughed: "HAHAHAA"
After the smoke was cleared, the stinker was missing.
It didn't know if he was vaporised or he fled bcos there was a lake nearby.
But, luckily, Michael escaped into the lake and healed his wounds a little.
Then, he went to carry on his task.
In the way, he met another stinker called Henry.
Henry was a farmer incharge of Forever Farm.
He asked him about the shard of life.
He told :
"Michael, you have been set one of the most dangerous missions. The mission consists of 4 parts. First, you need to pass the valley of chompers. Then, you must cross the icey caverns of wonderfalls. Next, you must travel beneath the ocean of Wonderfalls and fourthly, you must go inside the CASTLE"!
Michael told: "ooh, so interesting. Where do I start?"
He replied you must go through the cavern of fire to the chomper valley.
He went inside this cavern.
There were so many fire traps in it that he used gymnastics to go through.
Then, he reached the valley.
CHAPTER 2 - THE SOCCER MATCH
A chomper came near him and told:
"Who dares enter the valley of chompers?"
He told: "Michael, hath come to seek the SHARD"
It told: "Ha ha ha! You must pass through us."
Then it started chasing Michael.
After the chase started, the whole scene changed into a red vortex with a soccer field in between.
The chomper challenged him to a soccer match.
It'd be funny how a chomper can play soccer.
Michael rose up and back kicked the ball right into the chomper's goal. But just an instant before it went to the goal, the chomper expanded and caught the ball in his mouth.
That's what I call a CATCH!
Then the chomper split into 3 baby chompers and they used the same technique as BARCELONA used.
The triangular formation was tough.
Michael tried hard to break through but was defeated 3 times.
After the third goal, Michael was in despair.
"How can I lose to a chomper."
"I will never give up!"
And suddenly an aura of flame was around him.
His speed increased 2 times and power 5 times.
He got the ball, dashed along the way and hit a hard goal such that the chomper's goal post broke literally.
The chomper told: "Looks like I'm gonna enjoy this match. Michael's quite a good opponent."
Suddenly, fellow chompers gathered around the stadium shouting "CHOMPY, CHOMPY, CHOMPY!"
The power that arose suddenly in Michael was the Ultimate Stinker Potential.
Its a power that comes out only when you are in despair.
The 3 babies united into CHOMPY and he started dribbling.
Michael slided and kicked CHOMPY's mouth and the refree THWART THE THWART signalled a yellow card.
CHOMPY received a free kick.
A blue aura came out of him and chompy head smashed the ball very hard such that the there was a imaginary driller on the ball and he shouted "DRILL ARROW".
The driller charged towards Michael.
These graphics come from INAZUMA ELEVEN anime.
Michael suddenly rose his hands up and shouted "POSEIDON'S SHIELD".
An imaginary Poseidon showed up and the shield intercepted the drill.
It was a fierce clash of soul vs soul.
For 5 mins, neither the ball went in nor Poseidon stopped it.
Chompy charged up and smashed it again.
It broke thru Poseidon and it was a goal.
The score is 4-1
And the half time whistle was blown.
Michael relaxed and rested till the start of the second half.
He remembered: "If you play freely, it will help you evolve."
It was a fierce clash in the second half.
Neither team scored a goal.
Poseidon kept blocking Drill Arrows and Flame Ball was blocked by Chompy's CATCH.
Then, Michael's eyes turned red just like the autumn's spirit.
He kicked the ball so hard that it turned into a meteor and charged towards CHOMPY's goal.
He told: METEOR FALL!
Chompy used CATCH but it dropped and went to GOAL!!!
The score was 4-2.
He did it two more times to even the score.
The fourth time, CHOMPY evolved and a dragon came out and caught the meteor with its claw.
Michael said "CHOMPY's not bad... I'm having real fun"
Then Chompy used his mouth in addition to Drill Arrow and it became Death Arrow.
The arrow charged with great velocity.
Michael smiled, closed his eyes and kept his left hand in the air.
The ball hit his hand and whoosh.
It just stopped.
The arrow was broken and all the power had gone.
What a save!
Then Michael kicked simply the ball.
Chompy used his dragon move but a normal shoot from Michael itself broke past the goal.
The score was 5-4.
THWART blew the final whistle.
It was Michael's victory.
After thanking CHOMPY for a wonderful match, he went to the next area to the icey caverns.
TO BE CONTINUED!!!
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Its not my story or your story, its our story. The community takes credit and its equally shared between the 12000 odd users.Wonderman109 wrote:You made the name Michael?epicdude15 wrote:LOL
Credit goes to me,
Well some of it
why you ask?
I made the name Michael,
and I used the Shard of light in my game in this!
so its like 50% each i guess xD
and three of us times 50 percent=150 percent. *shot*
He has both hissatsu technique and the shoots.Yzfm wrote:Well you have a point..
Thats for the soccer ball, but what about the chomper opponent??
Ooh, and the "hissastsu technique"??
Chompy is the ace striker of his team.
In the third chapter, I'm going to try brr fight between you and another guy.
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I see how it's everyone story when I look back again, but that doesn't explain how everyone gets 50% when there's only 100% in total. 
For the chomper opponent, I could use a regular chomper scale adjusted and use springs to direct it and the spikeyball all over the field.
But I haven't even started Chapter 1 yet, so this can be brainstormed a little later! [/b]
For the chomper opponent, I could use a regular chomper scale adjusted and use springs to direct it and the spikeyball all over the field.
But I haven't even started Chapter 1 yet, so this can be brainstormed a little later!
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About the soccer match...
You can make a spikey and chomper and brr magic.
You freeze the chomper at various paths, the spikey hits it and turns and goes to goal (by goal I mean, a new button)
And if its chompy's goal, use icewalls to brr yourself and chomper goes to button
Like that, you can 7 to 8 different types of puzzles as per the total no of goals in the match
You can make a spikey and chomper and brr magic.
You freeze the chomper at various paths, the spikey hits it and turns and goes to goal (by goal I mean, a new button)
And if its chompy's goal, use icewalls to brr yourself and chomper goes to button
Like that, you can 7 to 8 different types of puzzles as per the total no of goals in the match
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MICHAEL AND THE SHARD OF LIFE
CHAPTER 1 - OFF TO THE FOREST
There was a stinker living in WONDERTOWN.
His name was Michael. He was a very comical stinker.
He was simple, serene and confident.
He loved treasure hunting, so he wanted to go for some.
He wanted to keep collecting gems and coins.
Now, his twin brother Mitchell gave him a task.
He had to go the Forever forest to retrieve the SHARD OF LIFE.
He accepted the challenge.
He got Peegue's pass and went into the forever forest.
He ventured in the forever forest.
There were creepy scritters, deadly chompers, friendly turtles and goofy ducks along his way.
The breeze was pleasant and the sky was sea blue, a perfect day for a picnic.
He walked, jogged, ran, hopped, skipped and jumped for sometime.
When it was time for rest, he sat down under a pink leaftree.
Suddenly, he heard a voice.
It was the voice of the forest spirit.
The forest spirit told: "Hey Michael. Thee come to seek shard o life? Et tu Stinkers? I wont allow thy to do so!"
But Michael was playful and locked the spirit inside a white gate.
Now he went into the darker part of the jungle.
There were many spiders, fireflowers, giant scritters and more.
He met a fire flower named FLARE.
He was petrified as this firflower looked very angry.
The fire flower told "hehehee, you are in my trap now".
Michael asked why?.
The fireflower roared.
An instant after that, it shot a fire ball.
The fireball travelled with great velocity. He tried to escape it but he didn't.It hit him.
While he was hit, he went into a parallel dimension where he was lost in a violet void and a huge image of the fireflower appeared before him.
The fireflower said:
"I know you! You are the nasty stinker guy who went into the good flower, bad flower garden in Lazy Leaf Forest. There, you killed my girlfriend with pow magic. I was supposed to marry her next week.But, I couldn't bcos of your evil deeds. I'm taking revenge for it. DIE".
Then the fireball exploded and the stinker was burnt.
There was a lot of smoke around the scene.
The fireflower laughed: "HAHAHAA"
After the smoke was cleared, the stinker was missing.
It didn't know if he was vaporised or he fled bcos there was a lake nearby.
But, luckily, Michael escaped into the lake and healed his wounds a little.
Then, he went to carry on his task.
In the way, he met another stinker called Henry.
Henry was a farmer incharge of Forever Farm.
He asked him about the shard of life.
He told :
"Michael, you have been set one of the most dangerous missions. The mission consists of 4 parts. First, you need to pass the valley of chompers. Then, you must cross the icey caverns of wonderfalls. Next, you must travel beneath the ocean of Wonderfalls and fourthly, you must go inside the CASTLE"!
Michael told: "ooh, so interesting. Where do I start?"
He replied you must go through the cavern of fire to the chomper valley.
He went inside this cavern.
There were so many fire traps in it that he used gymnastics to go through.
Then, he reached the valley.
CHAPTER 2 - THE SOCCER MATCH
A chomper came near him and told:
"Who dares enter the valley of chompers?"
He told: "Michael, hath come to seek the SHARD"
It told: "Ha ha ha! You must pass through us."
Then it started chasing Michael.
After the chase started, the whole scene changed into a red vortex with a soccer field in between.
The chomper challenged him to a soccer match.
It'd be funny how a chomper can play soccer.
Michael rose up and back kicked the ball right into the chomper's goal. But just an instant before it went to the goal, the chomper expanded and caught the ball in his mouth.
That's what I call a CATCH!
Then the chomper split into 3 baby chompers and they used the same technique as BARCELONA used.
The triangular formation was tough.
Michael tried hard to break through but was defeated 3 times.
After the third goal, Michael was in despair.
"How can I lose to a chomper."
"I will never give up!"
And suddenly an aura of flame was around him.
His speed increased 2 times and power 5 times.
He got the ball, dashed along the way and hit a hard goal such that the chomper's goal post broke literally.
The chomper told: "Looks like I'm gonna enjoy this match. Michael's quite a good opponent."
Suddenly, fellow chompers gathered around the stadium shouting "CHOMPY, CHOMPY, CHOMPY!"
The power that arose suddenly in Michael was the Ultimate Stinker Potential.
Its a power that comes out only when you are in despair.
The 3 babies united into CHOMPY and he started dribbling.
Michael slided and kicked CHOMPY's mouth and the refree THWART THE THWART signalled a yellow card.
CHOMPY received a free kick.
A blue aura came out of him and chompy head smashed the ball very hard such that the there was a imaginary driller on the ball and he shouted "DRILL ARROW".
The driller charged towards Michael.
These graphics come from INAZUMA ELEVEN anime.
Michael suddenly rose his hands up and shouted "POSEIDON'S SHIELD".
An imaginary Poseidon showed up and the shield intercepted the drill.
It was a fierce clash of soul vs soul.
For 5 mins, neither the ball went in nor Poseidon stopped it.
Chompy charged up and smashed it again.
It broke thru Poseidon and it was a goal.
The score is 4-1
And the half time whistle was blown.
Michael relaxed and rested till the start of the second half.
He remembered: "If you play freely, it will help you evolve."
It was a fierce clash in the second half.
Neither team scored a goal.
Poseidon kept blocking Drill Arrows and Flame Ball was blocked by Chompy's CATCH.
Then, Michael's eyes turned red just like the autumn's spirit.
He kicked the ball so hard that it turned into a meteor and charged towards CHOMPY's goal.
He told: METEOR FALL!
Chompy used CATCH but it dropped and went to GOAL!!!
The score was 4-2.
He did it two more times to even the score.
The fourth time, CHOMPY evolved and a dragon came out and caught the meteor with its claw.
Michael said "CHOMPY's not bad... I'm having real fun"
Then Chompy used his mouth in addition to Drill Arrow and it became Death Arrow.
The arrow charged with great velocity.
Michael smiled, closed his eyes and kept his left hand in the air.
The ball hit his hand and whoosh.
It just stopped.
The arrow was broken and all the power had gone.
What a save!
Then Michael kicked simply the ball.
Chompy used his dragon move but a normal shoot from Michael itself broke past the goal.
The score was 5-4.
THWART blew the final whistle.
It was Michael's victory.
After thanking CHOMPY for a wonderful match, he went to the next area to the icey caverns.
CHAPTER 3 - THE NORTHERN SECRET
As he took the northern road to the cave, it started growing colder and longer.
There were a lot of cold lakes and forests.
Many brr puzzles, blue lakes and watery areas were on the way.
It took Micheal a long time to pass through.
Until, he went to the Labyrinth to get a blue key to go further north.
The labyrinth was full of trappy mazes.
Michael gasped thru every moment and escaped out of the maze with a key.
After he went to the foothills...
Michael was tired and exhausted.
He camped near Qookie's cottage.
He rested that night and woke up the next morning.
Michael went to Qookie's cottage.
QOOKIE: Hello
MICHAEL: My name is Michael
...
...
QOOKIE: So, you have come to seek the shard?
MICHAEL: Yes
QOOKIE: Do you mind if I join you?
MICHAEL: Yay! You can also come with me
QOOKIE: Wonder full
Both the friends set to cross the northern road
When they went to the colder and frostier part of the road, an avalanche stopped them.
The snow from top gushed on them with massive linear momentum.
The two stinkers were terrified.
But we know what Michael is capable of.
He was a gifted athlete.
He squeezed his way through the falling snow.
Qookie followed his way.
Soon, both of them lurked out of Mr.Avalanche's trap.
A heavy fog surrounded them.
It took aabout 5 minutes for the fog to clear.
A shadow of some thing was observed.
Michael shrieked in fear and anxiety.
As the fog cleared, the shadow grew darker.
Both of them were wondering what that shadow was.
Instant by instant, the shadow took a proper metamorphic form.
After the fog cleared, they were shocked.
Who knows what the shadow was?
TO BE CONTINUED!!!
CHAPTER 1 - OFF TO THE FOREST
There was a stinker living in WONDERTOWN.
His name was Michael. He was a very comical stinker.
He was simple, serene and confident.
He loved treasure hunting, so he wanted to go for some.
He wanted to keep collecting gems and coins.
Now, his twin brother Mitchell gave him a task.
He had to go the Forever forest to retrieve the SHARD OF LIFE.
He accepted the challenge.
He got Peegue's pass and went into the forever forest.
He ventured in the forever forest.
There were creepy scritters, deadly chompers, friendly turtles and goofy ducks along his way.
The breeze was pleasant and the sky was sea blue, a perfect day for a picnic.
He walked, jogged, ran, hopped, skipped and jumped for sometime.
When it was time for rest, he sat down under a pink leaftree.
Suddenly, he heard a voice.
It was the voice of the forest spirit.
The forest spirit told: "Hey Michael. Thee come to seek shard o life? Et tu Stinkers? I wont allow thy to do so!"
But Michael was playful and locked the spirit inside a white gate.
Now he went into the darker part of the jungle.
There were many spiders, fireflowers, giant scritters and more.
He met a fire flower named FLARE.
He was petrified as this firflower looked very angry.
The fire flower told "hehehee, you are in my trap now".
Michael asked why?.
The fireflower roared.
An instant after that, it shot a fire ball.
The fireball travelled with great velocity. He tried to escape it but he didn't.It hit him.
While he was hit, he went into a parallel dimension where he was lost in a violet void and a huge image of the fireflower appeared before him.
The fireflower said:
"I know you! You are the nasty stinker guy who went into the good flower, bad flower garden in Lazy Leaf Forest. There, you killed my girlfriend with pow magic. I was supposed to marry her next week.But, I couldn't bcos of your evil deeds. I'm taking revenge for it. DIE".
Then the fireball exploded and the stinker was burnt.
There was a lot of smoke around the scene.
The fireflower laughed: "HAHAHAA"
After the smoke was cleared, the stinker was missing.
It didn't know if he was vaporised or he fled bcos there was a lake nearby.
But, luckily, Michael escaped into the lake and healed his wounds a little.
Then, he went to carry on his task.
In the way, he met another stinker called Henry.
Henry was a farmer incharge of Forever Farm.
He asked him about the shard of life.
He told :
"Michael, you have been set one of the most dangerous missions. The mission consists of 4 parts. First, you need to pass the valley of chompers. Then, you must cross the icey caverns of wonderfalls. Next, you must travel beneath the ocean of Wonderfalls and fourthly, you must go inside the CASTLE"!
Michael told: "ooh, so interesting. Where do I start?"
He replied you must go through the cavern of fire to the chomper valley.
He went inside this cavern.
There were so many fire traps in it that he used gymnastics to go through.
Then, he reached the valley.
CHAPTER 2 - THE SOCCER MATCH
A chomper came near him and told:
"Who dares enter the valley of chompers?"
He told: "Michael, hath come to seek the SHARD"
It told: "Ha ha ha! You must pass through us."
Then it started chasing Michael.
After the chase started, the whole scene changed into a red vortex with a soccer field in between.
The chomper challenged him to a soccer match.
It'd be funny how a chomper can play soccer.
Michael rose up and back kicked the ball right into the chomper's goal. But just an instant before it went to the goal, the chomper expanded and caught the ball in his mouth.
That's what I call a CATCH!
Then the chomper split into 3 baby chompers and they used the same technique as BARCELONA used.
The triangular formation was tough.
Michael tried hard to break through but was defeated 3 times.
After the third goal, Michael was in despair.
"How can I lose to a chomper."
"I will never give up!"
And suddenly an aura of flame was around him.
His speed increased 2 times and power 5 times.
He got the ball, dashed along the way and hit a hard goal such that the chomper's goal post broke literally.
The chomper told: "Looks like I'm gonna enjoy this match. Michael's quite a good opponent."
Suddenly, fellow chompers gathered around the stadium shouting "CHOMPY, CHOMPY, CHOMPY!"
The power that arose suddenly in Michael was the Ultimate Stinker Potential.
Its a power that comes out only when you are in despair.
The 3 babies united into CHOMPY and he started dribbling.
Michael slided and kicked CHOMPY's mouth and the refree THWART THE THWART signalled a yellow card.
CHOMPY received a free kick.
A blue aura came out of him and chompy head smashed the ball very hard such that the there was a imaginary driller on the ball and he shouted "DRILL ARROW".
The driller charged towards Michael.
These graphics come from INAZUMA ELEVEN anime.
Michael suddenly rose his hands up and shouted "POSEIDON'S SHIELD".
An imaginary Poseidon showed up and the shield intercepted the drill.
It was a fierce clash of soul vs soul.
For 5 mins, neither the ball went in nor Poseidon stopped it.
Chompy charged up and smashed it again.
It broke thru Poseidon and it was a goal.
The score is 4-1
And the half time whistle was blown.
Michael relaxed and rested till the start of the second half.
He remembered: "If you play freely, it will help you evolve."
It was a fierce clash in the second half.
Neither team scored a goal.
Poseidon kept blocking Drill Arrows and Flame Ball was blocked by Chompy's CATCH.
Then, Michael's eyes turned red just like the autumn's spirit.
He kicked the ball so hard that it turned into a meteor and charged towards CHOMPY's goal.
He told: METEOR FALL!
Chompy used CATCH but it dropped and went to GOAL!!!
The score was 4-2.
He did it two more times to even the score.
The fourth time, CHOMPY evolved and a dragon came out and caught the meteor with its claw.
Michael said "CHOMPY's not bad... I'm having real fun"
Then Chompy used his mouth in addition to Drill Arrow and it became Death Arrow.
The arrow charged with great velocity.
Michael smiled, closed his eyes and kept his left hand in the air.
The ball hit his hand and whoosh.
It just stopped.
The arrow was broken and all the power had gone.
What a save!
Then Michael kicked simply the ball.
Chompy used his dragon move but a normal shoot from Michael itself broke past the goal.
The score was 5-4.
THWART blew the final whistle.
It was Michael's victory.
After thanking CHOMPY for a wonderful match, he went to the next area to the icey caverns.
CHAPTER 3 - THE NORTHERN SECRET
As he took the northern road to the cave, it started growing colder and longer.
There were a lot of cold lakes and forests.
Many brr puzzles, blue lakes and watery areas were on the way.
It took Micheal a long time to pass through.
Until, he went to the Labyrinth to get a blue key to go further north.
The labyrinth was full of trappy mazes.
Michael gasped thru every moment and escaped out of the maze with a key.
After he went to the foothills...
Michael was tired and exhausted.
He camped near Qookie's cottage.
He rested that night and woke up the next morning.
Michael went to Qookie's cottage.
QOOKIE: Hello
MICHAEL: My name is Michael
...
...
QOOKIE: So, you have come to seek the shard?
MICHAEL: Yes
QOOKIE: Do you mind if I join you?
MICHAEL: Yay! You can also come with me
QOOKIE: Wonder full
Both the friends set to cross the northern road
When they went to the colder and frostier part of the road, an avalanche stopped them.
The snow from top gushed on them with massive linear momentum.
The two stinkers were terrified.
But we know what Michael is capable of.
He was a gifted athlete.
He squeezed his way through the falling snow.
Qookie followed his way.
Soon, both of them lurked out of Mr.Avalanche's trap.
A heavy fog surrounded them.
It took aabout 5 minutes for the fog to clear.
A shadow of some thing was observed.
Michael shrieked in fear and anxiety.
As the fog cleared, the shadow grew darker.
Both of them were wondering what that shadow was.
Instant by instant, the shadow took a proper metamorphic form.
After the fog cleared, they were shocked.
Who knows what the shadow was?
TO BE CONTINUED!!!
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Wonderman109
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Lemme guess: The forest spirit from Chapter 1?Dark Drago wrote:MICHAEL AND THE SHARD OF LIFE
Chapter 3
When they went to the colder and frostier part of the road, an avalanche stopped them.
The snow from top gushed on them with massive linear momentum.
The two stinkers were terrified.
But we know what Michael is capable of.
He was a gifted athlete.
He squeezed his way through the falling snow.
Qookie followed his way.
Soon, both of them lurked out of Mr.Avalanche's trap.
A heavy fog surrounded them.
It took about 5 minutes for the fog to clear.
A shadow of some thing was observed.
Michael shrieked in fear and anxiety.
As the fog cleared, the shadow grew darker.
Both of them were wondering what that shadow was.
Instant by instant, the shadow took a proper metamorphic form.
After the fog cleared, they were shocked.
Who knows what the shadow was?
TO BE CONTINUED!!!
Or maybe it was Carnifex, finding two new victims. *shot*
'use icewalls to brr yourself'
There's a glitch in the WA Player so you can't be affected by Brr. That's why Data-3 Iceflowers aren't very common in custom levels.
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Dark Drago
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Wonderman109
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Possibilities:
Micheal's brother Mitchell
Dark Drago in disguise
*shot*
Flare (the fireflower) returning for his revenge after discovering Michael is not dead...
A brother or duplicate of the white shadow spirit
Peegue in disguise *shot again*
Evil alternate ego of a shadow stinker
Carnifex *shot shot shot*
*puts on bulletproof suit*
The farmer who owns Forever Farm.
The yellow thwart referee.
The chomper leader Chompy, returning for revenge after losing the soccer game.
The statue of Poseidon or whoever Greek God, turned evil somehow and into a shadow.
ME IN DISGUISE!!!
*bullet reflects off of suit*
...*runs out of ideas*
Micheal's brother Mitchell
Dark Drago in disguise
*shot*Flare (the fireflower) returning for his revenge after discovering Michael is not dead...
A brother or duplicate of the white shadow spirit
Peegue in disguise *shot again*
Evil alternate ego of a shadow stinker
Carnifex *shot shot shot*
*puts on bulletproof suit*
The farmer who owns Forever Farm.
The yellow thwart referee.
The chomper leader Chompy, returning for revenge after losing the soccer game.
The statue of Poseidon or whoever Greek God, turned evil somehow and into a shadow.
ME IN DISGUISE!!!
*bullet reflects off of suit*...*runs out of ideas*
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Dark Drago
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MICHAEL AND THE SHARD OF LIFE
CHAPTER 1 - OFF TO THE FOREST
There was a stinker living in WONDERTOWN.
His name was Michael. He was a very comical stinker.
He was simple, serene and confident.
He loved treasure hunting, so he wanted to go for some.
He wanted to keep collecting gems and coins.
Now, his twin brother Mitchell gave him a task.
He had to go the Forever forest to retrieve the SHARD OF LIFE.
He accepted the challenge.
He got Peegue's pass and went into the forever forest.
He ventured in the forever forest.
There were creepy scritters, deadly chompers, friendly turtles and goofy ducks along his way.
The breeze was pleasant and the sky was sea blue, a perfect day for a picnic.
He walked, jogged, ran, hopped, skipped and jumped for sometime.
When it was time for rest, he sat down under a pink leaftree.
Suddenly, he heard a voice.
It was the voice of the forest spirit.
The forest spirit told: "Hey Michael. Thee come to seek shard o life? Et tu Stinkers? I wont allow thy to do so!"
But Michael was playful and locked the spirit inside a white gate.
Now he went into the darker part of the jungle.
There were many spiders, fireflowers, giant scritters and more.
He met a fire flower named FLARE.
He was petrified as this firflower looked very angry.
The fire flower told "hehehee, you are in my trap now".
Michael asked why?.
The fireflower roared.
An instant after that, it shot a fire ball.
The fireball travelled with great velocity. He tried to escape it but he didn't.It hit him.
While he was hit, he went into a parallel dimension where he was lost in a violet void and a huge image of the fireflower appeared before him.
The fireflower said:
"I know you! You are the nasty stinker guy who went into the good flower, bad flower garden in Lazy Leaf Forest. There, you killed my girlfriend with pow magic. I was supposed to marry her next week.But, I couldn't bcos of your evil deeds. I'm taking revenge for it. DIE".
Then the fireball exploded and the stinker was burnt.
There was a lot of smoke around the scene.
The fireflower laughed: "HAHAHAA"
After the smoke was cleared, the stinker was missing.
It didn't know if he was vaporised or he fled bcos there was a lake nearby.
But, luckily, Michael escaped into the lake and healed his wounds a little.
Then, he went to carry on his task.
In the way, he met another stinker called Henry.
Henry was a farmer incharge of Forever Farm.
He asked him about the shard of life.
He told :
"Michael, you have been set one of the most dangerous missions. The mission consists of 4 parts. First, you need to pass the valley of chompers. Then, you must cross the icey caverns of wonderfalls. Next, you must travel beneath the ocean of Wonderfalls and fourthly, you must go inside the CASTLE"!
Michael told: "ooh, so interesting. Where do I start?"
He replied you must go through the cavern of fire to the chomper valley.
He went inside this cavern.
There were so many fire traps in it that he used gymnastics to go through.
Then, he reached the valley.
CHAPTER 2 - THE SOCCER MATCH
A chomper came near him and told:
"Who dares enter the valley of chompers?"
He told: "Michael, hath come to seek the SHARD"
It told: "Ha ha ha! You must pass through us."
Then it started chasing Michael.
After the chase started, the whole scene changed into a red vortex with a soccer field in between.
The chomper challenged him to a soccer match.
It'd be funny how a chomper can play soccer.
Michael rose up and back kicked the ball right into the chomper's goal. But just an instant before it went to the goal, the chomper expanded and caught the ball in his mouth.
That's what I call a CATCH!
Then the chomper split into 3 baby chompers and they used the same technique as BARCELONA used.
The triangular formation was tough.
Michael tried hard to break through but was defeated 3 times.
After the third goal, Michael was in despair.
"How can I lose to a chomper."
"I will never give up!"
And suddenly an aura of flame was around him.
His speed increased 2 times and power 5 times.
He got the ball, dashed along the way and hit a hard goal such that the chomper's goal post broke literally.
The chomper told: "Looks like I'm gonna enjoy this match. Michael's quite a good opponent."
Suddenly, fellow chompers gathered around the stadium shouting "CHOMPY, CHOMPY, CHOMPY!"
The power that arose suddenly in Michael was the Ultimate Stinker Potential.
Its a power that comes out only when you are in despair.
The 3 babies united into CHOMPY and he started dribbling.
Michael slided and kicked CHOMPY's mouth and the refree THWART THE THWART signalled a yellow card.
CHOMPY received a free kick.
A blue aura came out of him and chompy head smashed the ball very hard such that the there was a imaginary driller on the ball and he shouted "DRILL ARROW".
The driller charged towards Michael.
These graphics come from INAZUMA ELEVEN anime.
Michael suddenly rose his hands up and shouted "POSEIDON'S SHIELD".
An imaginary Poseidon showed up and the shield intercepted the drill.
It was a fierce clash of soul vs soul.
For 5 mins, neither the ball went in nor Poseidon stopped it.
Chompy charged up and smashed it again.
It broke thru Poseidon and it was a goal.
The score is 4-1
And the half time whistle was blown.
Michael relaxed and rested till the start of the second half.
He remembered: "If you play freely, it will help you evolve."
It was a fierce clash in the second half.
Neither team scored a goal.
Poseidon kept blocking Drill Arrows and Flame Ball was blocked by Chompy's CATCH.
Then, Michael's eyes turned red just like the autumn's spirit.
He kicked the ball so hard that it turned into a meteor and charged towards CHOMPY's goal.
He told: METEOR FALL!
Chompy used CATCH but it dropped and went to GOAL!!!
The score was 4-2.
He did it two more times to even the score.
The fourth time, CHOMPY evolved and a dragon came out and caught the meteor with its claw.
Michael said "CHOMPY's not bad... I'm having real fun"
Then Chompy used his mouth in addition to Drill Arrow and it became Death Arrow.
The arrow charged with great velocity.
Michael smiled, closed his eyes and kept his left hand in the air.
The ball hit his hand and whoosh.
It just stopped.
The arrow was broken and all the power had gone.
What a save!
Then Michael kicked simply the ball.
Chompy used his dragon move but a normal shoot from Michael itself broke past the goal.
The score was 5-4.
THWART blew the final whistle.
It was Michael's victory.
After thanking CHOMPY for a wonderful match, he went to the next area to the icey caverns.
CHAPTER 3 - THE NORTHERN SECRET
As he took the northern road to the cave, it started growing colder and longer.
There were a lot of cold lakes and forests.
Many brr puzzles, blue lakes and watery areas were on the way.
It took Micheal a long time to pass through.
Until, he went to the Labyrinth to get a blue key to go further north.
The labyrinth was full of trappy mazes.
Michael gasped thru every moment and escaped out of the maze with a key.
After he went to the foothills...
Michael was tired and exhausted.
He camped near Qookie's cottage.
He rested that night and woke up the next morning.
Michael went to Qookie's cottage.
QOOKIE: Hello
MICHAEL: My name is Michael
...
...
QOOKIE: So, you have come to seek the shard?
MICHAEL: Yes
QOOKIE: Do you mind if I join you?
MICHAEL: Yay! You can also come with me
QOOKIE: Wonder full
Both the friends set to cross the northern road
When they went to the colder and frostier part of the road, an avalanche stopped them.
The snow from top gushed on them with massive linear momentum.
The two stinkers were terrified.
But we know what Michael is capable of.
He was a gifted athlete.
He squeezed his way through the falling snow.
Qookie followed his way.
Soon, both of them lurked out of Mr.Avalanche's trap.
A heavy fog surrounded them.
It took aabout 5 minutes for the fog to clear.
A shadow of some thing was observed.
Michael shrieked in fear and anxiety.
As the fog cleared, the shadow grew darker.
Both of them were wondering what that shadow was.
Instant by instant, the shadow took a proper metamorphic form.
After the fog cleared, they were shocked.
Who knows what the shadow was?
It was the real Poseidon!
Poseidon told: I'm impressed that you could draw out my power in the soccer match".
But at the same time, I'm angry that you used me to lose a goal.
So, to protect my name, I'll give you this...
The gem of speed.
It will enable you to run faster and see through things at high speed clearly.
But he warned...
If Michael ever lost a soccer match in Poseidon's move...
He'll turn Michael into a great white shark.
After this encounter, the two friends went to the higher mountains.
Many iceflowers blocked their way.
One of the iceflowers, FRISTY grew taller and stronger every time, they tried to run away from her.
As trials occured...
She grew too big to pass through.
They used the gem to dash through.
But once they got through, she was before them again.
It happened a several times until...
Michael asked how she did that?
MICHAEL: Amazing, how can you do that?
FRISTY: You stinkers are bird brains for my powers.
MICHAEL: What powers?
FRISTY: My magic powers
MICHAEL: How did you learn blink magic?
FRISTY: Never judge a book by its cover...
MICHAEL: What do you mean?
FRISTY: I may be an ice flower
QOOKIE: I see...
MICHAEL: So, you can shoot blink balls?
FRISTY: No, you are very wrong!
MICHAEL: What?
FRISTY: Don't push your luck kid!
QOOKIE: What?
FRISTY: I have a secret, you have...
MICHAEL: What do you mean?
FRISTY: He He He!
MICHAEL: Don't tell me, you...
FRISTY: Yes, I have it
MICHAEL: Unbelievable!
TO BE CONTINUED!!!
CHAPTER 1 - OFF TO THE FOREST
There was a stinker living in WONDERTOWN.
His name was Michael. He was a very comical stinker.
He was simple, serene and confident.
He loved treasure hunting, so he wanted to go for some.
He wanted to keep collecting gems and coins.
Now, his twin brother Mitchell gave him a task.
He had to go the Forever forest to retrieve the SHARD OF LIFE.
He accepted the challenge.
He got Peegue's pass and went into the forever forest.
He ventured in the forever forest.
There were creepy scritters, deadly chompers, friendly turtles and goofy ducks along his way.
The breeze was pleasant and the sky was sea blue, a perfect day for a picnic.
He walked, jogged, ran, hopped, skipped and jumped for sometime.
When it was time for rest, he sat down under a pink leaftree.
Suddenly, he heard a voice.
It was the voice of the forest spirit.
The forest spirit told: "Hey Michael. Thee come to seek shard o life? Et tu Stinkers? I wont allow thy to do so!"
But Michael was playful and locked the spirit inside a white gate.
Now he went into the darker part of the jungle.
There were many spiders, fireflowers, giant scritters and more.
He met a fire flower named FLARE.
He was petrified as this firflower looked very angry.
The fire flower told "hehehee, you are in my trap now".
Michael asked why?.
The fireflower roared.
An instant after that, it shot a fire ball.
The fireball travelled with great velocity. He tried to escape it but he didn't.It hit him.
While he was hit, he went into a parallel dimension where he was lost in a violet void and a huge image of the fireflower appeared before him.
The fireflower said:
"I know you! You are the nasty stinker guy who went into the good flower, bad flower garden in Lazy Leaf Forest. There, you killed my girlfriend with pow magic. I was supposed to marry her next week.But, I couldn't bcos of your evil deeds. I'm taking revenge for it. DIE".
Then the fireball exploded and the stinker was burnt.
There was a lot of smoke around the scene.
The fireflower laughed: "HAHAHAA"
After the smoke was cleared, the stinker was missing.
It didn't know if he was vaporised or he fled bcos there was a lake nearby.
But, luckily, Michael escaped into the lake and healed his wounds a little.
Then, he went to carry on his task.
In the way, he met another stinker called Henry.
Henry was a farmer incharge of Forever Farm.
He asked him about the shard of life.
He told :
"Michael, you have been set one of the most dangerous missions. The mission consists of 4 parts. First, you need to pass the valley of chompers. Then, you must cross the icey caverns of wonderfalls. Next, you must travel beneath the ocean of Wonderfalls and fourthly, you must go inside the CASTLE"!
Michael told: "ooh, so interesting. Where do I start?"
He replied you must go through the cavern of fire to the chomper valley.
He went inside this cavern.
There were so many fire traps in it that he used gymnastics to go through.
Then, he reached the valley.
CHAPTER 2 - THE SOCCER MATCH
A chomper came near him and told:
"Who dares enter the valley of chompers?"
He told: "Michael, hath come to seek the SHARD"
It told: "Ha ha ha! You must pass through us."
Then it started chasing Michael.
After the chase started, the whole scene changed into a red vortex with a soccer field in between.
The chomper challenged him to a soccer match.
It'd be funny how a chomper can play soccer.
Michael rose up and back kicked the ball right into the chomper's goal. But just an instant before it went to the goal, the chomper expanded and caught the ball in his mouth.
That's what I call a CATCH!
Then the chomper split into 3 baby chompers and they used the same technique as BARCELONA used.
The triangular formation was tough.
Michael tried hard to break through but was defeated 3 times.
After the third goal, Michael was in despair.
"How can I lose to a chomper."
"I will never give up!"
And suddenly an aura of flame was around him.
His speed increased 2 times and power 5 times.
He got the ball, dashed along the way and hit a hard goal such that the chomper's goal post broke literally.
The chomper told: "Looks like I'm gonna enjoy this match. Michael's quite a good opponent."
Suddenly, fellow chompers gathered around the stadium shouting "CHOMPY, CHOMPY, CHOMPY!"
The power that arose suddenly in Michael was the Ultimate Stinker Potential.
Its a power that comes out only when you are in despair.
The 3 babies united into CHOMPY and he started dribbling.
Michael slided and kicked CHOMPY's mouth and the refree THWART THE THWART signalled a yellow card.
CHOMPY received a free kick.
A blue aura came out of him and chompy head smashed the ball very hard such that the there was a imaginary driller on the ball and he shouted "DRILL ARROW".
The driller charged towards Michael.
These graphics come from INAZUMA ELEVEN anime.
Michael suddenly rose his hands up and shouted "POSEIDON'S SHIELD".
An imaginary Poseidon showed up and the shield intercepted the drill.
It was a fierce clash of soul vs soul.
For 5 mins, neither the ball went in nor Poseidon stopped it.
Chompy charged up and smashed it again.
It broke thru Poseidon and it was a goal.
The score is 4-1
And the half time whistle was blown.
Michael relaxed and rested till the start of the second half.
He remembered: "If you play freely, it will help you evolve."
It was a fierce clash in the second half.
Neither team scored a goal.
Poseidon kept blocking Drill Arrows and Flame Ball was blocked by Chompy's CATCH.
Then, Michael's eyes turned red just like the autumn's spirit.
He kicked the ball so hard that it turned into a meteor and charged towards CHOMPY's goal.
He told: METEOR FALL!
Chompy used CATCH but it dropped and went to GOAL!!!
The score was 4-2.
He did it two more times to even the score.
The fourth time, CHOMPY evolved and a dragon came out and caught the meteor with its claw.
Michael said "CHOMPY's not bad... I'm having real fun"
Then Chompy used his mouth in addition to Drill Arrow and it became Death Arrow.
The arrow charged with great velocity.
Michael smiled, closed his eyes and kept his left hand in the air.
The ball hit his hand and whoosh.
It just stopped.
The arrow was broken and all the power had gone.
What a save!
Then Michael kicked simply the ball.
Chompy used his dragon move but a normal shoot from Michael itself broke past the goal.
The score was 5-4.
THWART blew the final whistle.
It was Michael's victory.
After thanking CHOMPY for a wonderful match, he went to the next area to the icey caverns.
CHAPTER 3 - THE NORTHERN SECRET
As he took the northern road to the cave, it started growing colder and longer.
There were a lot of cold lakes and forests.
Many brr puzzles, blue lakes and watery areas were on the way.
It took Micheal a long time to pass through.
Until, he went to the Labyrinth to get a blue key to go further north.
The labyrinth was full of trappy mazes.
Michael gasped thru every moment and escaped out of the maze with a key.
After he went to the foothills...
Michael was tired and exhausted.
He camped near Qookie's cottage.
He rested that night and woke up the next morning.
Michael went to Qookie's cottage.
QOOKIE: Hello
MICHAEL: My name is Michael
...
...
QOOKIE: So, you have come to seek the shard?
MICHAEL: Yes
QOOKIE: Do you mind if I join you?
MICHAEL: Yay! You can also come with me
QOOKIE: Wonder full
Both the friends set to cross the northern road
When they went to the colder and frostier part of the road, an avalanche stopped them.
The snow from top gushed on them with massive linear momentum.
The two stinkers were terrified.
But we know what Michael is capable of.
He was a gifted athlete.
He squeezed his way through the falling snow.
Qookie followed his way.
Soon, both of them lurked out of Mr.Avalanche's trap.
A heavy fog surrounded them.
It took aabout 5 minutes for the fog to clear.
A shadow of some thing was observed.
Michael shrieked in fear and anxiety.
As the fog cleared, the shadow grew darker.
Both of them were wondering what that shadow was.
Instant by instant, the shadow took a proper metamorphic form.
After the fog cleared, they were shocked.
Who knows what the shadow was?
It was the real Poseidon!
Poseidon told: I'm impressed that you could draw out my power in the soccer match".
But at the same time, I'm angry that you used me to lose a goal.
So, to protect my name, I'll give you this...
The gem of speed.
It will enable you to run faster and see through things at high speed clearly.
But he warned...
If Michael ever lost a soccer match in Poseidon's move...
He'll turn Michael into a great white shark.
After this encounter, the two friends went to the higher mountains.
Many iceflowers blocked their way.
One of the iceflowers, FRISTY grew taller and stronger every time, they tried to run away from her.
As trials occured...
She grew too big to pass through.
They used the gem to dash through.
But once they got through, she was before them again.
It happened a several times until...
Michael asked how she did that?
MICHAEL: Amazing, how can you do that?
FRISTY: You stinkers are bird brains for my powers.
MICHAEL: What powers?
FRISTY: My magic powers
MICHAEL: How did you learn blink magic?
FRISTY: Never judge a book by its cover...
MICHAEL: What do you mean?
FRISTY: I may be an ice flower
QOOKIE: I see...
MICHAEL: So, you can shoot blink balls?
FRISTY: No, you are very wrong!
MICHAEL: What?
FRISTY: Don't push your luck kid!
QOOKIE: What?
FRISTY: I have a secret, you have...
MICHAEL: What do you mean?
FRISTY: He He He!
MICHAEL: Don't tell me, you...
FRISTY: Yes, I have it
MICHAEL: Unbelievable!
TO BE CONTINUED!!!
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StinkerSquad01
- Rainbow AllStar
- Posts: 4250
- Joined: Mon Aug 09, 2010 3:39 am
Is it really necessary to post the whole story over and over? Can't you just post the new part and edit the first post about it or something?
Last edited by StinkerSquad01 on Wed Jul 25, 2012 9:43 pm, edited 1 time in total.
Woo, epic!!
I want to make a story too:
Rescue Quest
Chapter 1: Kidnapped!
Pemble was a quiet stinker that lived on the northern shore of wondeland, His uncle was Mr. Turnip, the mayor of Pickletown. One day Pemble went to visit his uncle. He knocked the door and nobody answered.. He repeated two times with no new results.. He decided to enter and see what's wrong.. He broke the door with a log of a tree and found the place totally damaged.. and his uncle was not home.....
Just then an alarm bell rang and the police arrived.. One police stinker asked Pemble about what is going on.. And he told him everything he knows.. Just then one police stinker found a mysterious spherical object, it was an alarm delayer!! That's why the alarm bell rang after a while of what happened, Pemble walked around the house and then he found a paper on the ground. He picked it up, and read what was written: "IF YOU WANT TO SEE YOUR UNCLE AGAIN PUT THREE MILLION STINKODOLLARS IN THE RUINED COTTAGE ON THE FOGGY PEAK!!"
"What!! Uncle Turnip was kidnapped??" Pemble said in himself.. He decided not to tell the police bec. he was afraid the news reach to te kidnapper and tries to harm Pemble too.. He also would give away any money to save his uncle.. but he was too young and did not have that much money.. So he decided to visit the Foggy Peak first, he had some type of plan in his mind...
To Be Continued!!
I want to make a story too:
Rescue Quest
Chapter 1: Kidnapped!
Pemble was a quiet stinker that lived on the northern shore of wondeland, His uncle was Mr. Turnip, the mayor of Pickletown. One day Pemble went to visit his uncle. He knocked the door and nobody answered.. He repeated two times with no new results.. He decided to enter and see what's wrong.. He broke the door with a log of a tree and found the place totally damaged.. and his uncle was not home.....
Just then an alarm bell rang and the police arrived.. One police stinker asked Pemble about what is going on.. And he told him everything he knows.. Just then one police stinker found a mysterious spherical object, it was an alarm delayer!! That's why the alarm bell rang after a while of what happened, Pemble walked around the house and then he found a paper on the ground. He picked it up, and read what was written: "IF YOU WANT TO SEE YOUR UNCLE AGAIN PUT THREE MILLION STINKODOLLARS IN THE RUINED COTTAGE ON THE FOGGY PEAK!!"
"What!! Uncle Turnip was kidnapped??" Pemble said in himself.. He decided not to tell the police bec. he was afraid the news reach to te kidnapper and tries to harm Pemble too.. He also would give away any money to save his uncle.. but he was too young and did not have that much money.. So he decided to visit the Foggy Peak first, he had some type of plan in his mind...
To Be Continued!!
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Dark Drago
- Rainbow Master
- Posts: 919
- Joined: Mon Apr 09, 2012 7:50 am
Considering your view...StinkerSquad01 wrote:Is it really necessary to post the whole story over and over? Can't you just post the new part and edit the first post about it or something?
I'll make a new topic for this story...
Because this topic is attributed by EVERY user and it won't be fair if I feature this story in my first post