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The Chao Squad:A Sonic Fanfiction

Post by boywhoflies » Thu Apr 21, 2011 11:10 pm

Some other are doing it, so I guess it can't hurt to try.

Just saying, I started a game about them. It's very early in development, only Wheels, Fist, and Cloud are completly playabe(but Boost is almost done). I haven't worked on it for a while, though.

Yeah. They are pretty much all fan charecters...here's a list of the chao squad.

There's a group of 7 chao who call themselves the Chao Squad. Their names(well, nicknames) are Wheels, Fist, Cloud, Splash, Boost, Blend and Gears(and formaly Flash, the final aponent on chao karate over in SA2B). They are very strong but because of their high-pitched voices nobody takes them seriously until they prove themselves to that person. Outside of their specaltys, they have normal stats(with the exeption of Blend, who has higher stats evreywhere)

Wheels
The leader of the "gang". He is blue, with indgo highlights and 2 whip cream-like spikes comming out of the top of his head, one in front of the other(the other is smaller). He can run allmost as fast as Sonic, but not quite. However, he can reach his max speed pretty much right away(just like any other chao).He can make tornadoes by running in circles. He drives a mortorcycle full of spikes.

Fist
He is Wheel's right wing. He has a long spike going backward starting at his forehead, 3 spikes comming out of the back on his head, spikes on his fists like Knuckles and a drangon-like tail. He is red with dark red hilights(probaly, I made the sprites a while ago). He is crazy strong, he can pick up trees like they were coins, buldings like they were bricks and skyscrapers...well...barely. Him and Cloud are dating. He drives a tank.

Cloud
She is ranked right after Fist, not missing by much. She has a square-like head(sorta) with the hilight on her head going in between her eyes, and a block-thing comming out of the back of her head with 2 small airplane-like wings comming out of the sides. Also, her wings are huge. She can fly almost as fast as Wheels can run, and can pick up the whole gang(with a bit of trouble)(excluding Gears since he's allwas at the base) at once. She and Fist are dating. She drives a fighter jet.

Splash
She can swim...well, I never actually deided on this so lets just say faster than Wheels. I never made her sprite, but the plan was to have a giant fin comming out of the top of her head. She's yellow. She can make hurricanes by swiming in circles. She dirves a cruse ship that makes a river in front of it. :lol:

Boost
He is the Stamina type of the group. He almost never runs out of breath, and can give himself large boosts that let him go much faster than Sonic, even if it's only for a second. He's green with dark green hilights, and his head is shaped like someone threw a bunch of glass shards at his head and then his skin grew over them. When he gives himself a boost, he starts fliping rapidly and starts to glow. He is also effected less by gravity, so if he can hold a boost for long eneugh he can "glide" around. I haven't decided on a vencile, but I'm thinking something along the lines of a rocket or a rocket booster with a steering wheel.

Blend
Blean is a all-around type. She is very skilled at evreything, but her skills on each one go nowhere near the skills of her friends(well, but Gears. her intelgence is avrage just like the other members, other than Gears). She also has ninja skills, so she can "wall jump", etc. . That's not needed by most of them, since Wheels can run up the side of walls, Cloud can fly very well, Fist, well, he can just smash whatever is in his way, ect. but she needs to keep up somewhow. I never thought about her design at all. She drives a ATV that can cover itself(and make a roof to cover her up)with steel plates.

Gears
Gears is part of the chao squad, but he dosen't get out with the others very much. He is grey and his body is square, not round like all the other chao...ever. :P He is insainly smart, and the others often can't understand what the heck he's saying. He built all their venicles, the HQ, and his underground lab. He spends most of his time inventing stuff for the crew, like lazer guns. He put a device in his arm that lets him teleport, so he dosen't drive anything. Using it is tricky, even for him, so the others would have no chance of using it so he never gave them any.

Flash
He's not part of the group anymore. He's a onix light chaos chao, who used to drive a giant robot when he was with the chao squad. He was once the leader, and that's realy all you need to know about him.

Four
She's not a real member of the chao squad, just a plan, but i thought I would mention a bit about her. She is a luck type. She isn't realy good at anything, but her overdose of luck keeps anything from happening to her. Lets say, if you throw her off a building, she's goona end up landing is a car full of pillows or something. Her name, Four, if from that whole 'Four-leaf clover" bit. I haven't even thought about what she would drive.





Anyway, lets get this thing started.

Chapter 1:He's gone mad
It was a boring day over at the HQ. Splash, Boost, and Blend were playing pocker, for about the last 5 hours. Gears was working on a jet pack...until he fell asleep, anyway. Wheels was trying to play with a yoyo, but a chao is about twice the size of a yoyo, so it's pretty hard to have it drop. The only 2 who wernt bored were Fist and Cloud, who were making out. Wheels called out 'Yo, Fist! Ya wanna fight?". He knew Fist would cream him, but it's better than being that bored.

Suddenly, the doors(which are about 10 feet tall(for no reason) and made of steel) flew off the hinges, went across the room(whice was quite big), hit Fist and got stuck in his spikes. He was to wraped in Cloud to realise that.

Boost, Blend, and Splash put down their cards and looked over where the doors were. Wheels made a tornado around Fist to pick up the doors while Boost yelled "There's a doorbell, you idiot! Do you have any idea how hard it is to get Fist to stop kissing Cloud and fix it?!?". He was talking to 2 chao standing at the doorway. One of them was Charoon(he's a grey chao who rules at chao races, probaly because Wheels dosen't enter them. He loves sleeping and allwas looks bored.) and the other was a buff-looking baby chao with the basic blue-yellow colors.

The BBC said "The chao squad, ri-" and got hit by Fist and Cloud, who were now still kissing but also rolling on the floor hugging. The BBC got up, and they rolled out the doorframe onto a hill. Wheels said "Hey, can I get some help getting them back over here, Clou-oh yeah, right." Wheels ran out the door, and started trying to pust them back inside. After half a hour of trying, Boost said "For crying out loud...", went up to Fist and Cloud, and did a boost into them, knocking them across the room. Fist's spikes got stuck in the wall. He noticed, but only eneugh to grab Cloud in his arms so she wouldn't fall. They were still making out.

Wheels said "Thanks, B-man. Now, what were you guys saying?"
Charoon said "He was saking if you guys were the chao squad."
Splash walked over and said "Yeah. Why?"
BBC said "You know Flash? Well, he lost his mind and is destroying evreything!"
Wheels said "We're your guys. What should we start wi-"
Splash said "Guys? Half of us are girls, remember?"
Wheels said "Ok...We're your dudes slash dudettes. What should we start with?"
Splash said "Better."
BBC said "How should we know? Uh, have any of your weppons been stolen?".
Gears called out "Yes, there has...". He came out of his lab and yawned.
Blend said "Good morning, Doc. What was stolen?"
Gears said "Flash's old robot. That thing is loaded."
Charoon said "It's Flash on the loose, remember?

Fist sliped from the wall, and landed on the floor, getting his spikes stuck in there. He didn't notice.

Charoon continued saying "If his robot was stolen, it's not that crazy that he might of stole it. He knows where is is, you know?"
Gears pitched in "I created a blueprint for a upgraded version of that model, 1.1 . Should I confirm if it is still present?
BBC said "Uh...ok. Good idea?"

Gears ran to the lab, and Splash followed him. After a minute or two, Splash yelled out "OH ****!".
She ran upstairs and said "It's gone. Flash can upgrade the robot."
Blend started swearing and yelled "Doc, can you tell us how powerful it is?"
Gears said "It's at least more powerful than all of us combined. We have 2 options:Keep him from finishing the upgrade or, well, get a army."
Blend said "I'm fresh out of armies."
Wheels said "Then we gotta go with #1."
Wheels, Boost, Blend, and Splash ran to the garage. Boost boosted into Cloud, seperating her and Fist since Fist was still stuck in the ground.
Fist yelled "I'm gonna kill you!"
Boost said "Were gonna die if we don't go beat some guy up, ok?"
Fist said "Nevermind your death. That sounds like fun!"
Boost, Cloud, and Fist ran into the garage.

That's the end of chapter 1. What did you guys think? :D
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Post by boywhoflies » Thu Apr 21, 2011 11:17 pm

Oh, yeah. I forgot to put in this joke:
When Boost hit Fist across the room, the audence from SSBB started shouting "Boo-oost! Boo-oost! Boo-oost!"

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Post by LittleZbot » Fri Apr 22, 2011 3:35 am

Kinda funny, but slightly hard to understand.
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Post by boywhoflies » Fri Apr 22, 2011 4:08 pm

Thanks( :D ), and yeah, I guess it is a bit hard to understand...sorry about that! :(
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Post by boywhoflies » Fri Apr 22, 2011 11:04 pm

Time for chapter 2...I guess.

Chapter 2:I'm allergic to death
They started their venciles, and drove out of the garage. After a few mintues, Blend said "Uh, where are we going, anyway?"
Wheels replied "To beat up Flash. Duh.".
Blend said "And do we know where he is?".
Wheels said "Good point...".
Fist hopped out of the dirving part of his tank, into the gun part and said "How about I shoot in random places until I hear screaming, then we follow the sound?" with a :twisted: kind of face.
Splash said "Hey, brain-o, you realise that you could kill someone else, right?"
Fist said "Who cares?"
Splash jumped in front of fist and smacked him.
Fist grabed splash by the neck, held his fist back, and shouted "FALCON...PUNCH! and did a...well, falcon punch on Splash's face.
Splash is defeated!

Bad ending #596 found! Returning to previous save.

Splash said "Hey, brain-o, you realise that you could kill someone else, right?"
Fist said "Yeah...shure I did..." but he was oviously lying.
Boost said "Uh, I think this is what Gears is for.".
Wheels said "Good point." and took oput his comunicator.
Fist said "Uh, remember when Lil' Z said that this thing was hard to understand? It would help if you said what that comunicator is...".
Wheels said "Ok. Fine.". He looked at you and said "The comunicator I'm talking about is one of Gears's inventions. It's like a portible webcam;you can hear and see whoever you are talking with. We'd use a Iphone 4 but it's about as big as one of us.". He looked at fist and said "I just broke the 4th wall."
Blend said "I hope I don't turn into the 4th wall...I'm allregic to dying. Or in this case, breaking.".
Fist said "We need to make sence, remember?"
Blend said "Ok..."

Suddenly, the grond started to break!
Fist said(with charcasm):The floor is the 4th wall. That makes perfect sence.
Wheels screamed "FORMATION B!"
Fist said "We haven't mentioned formations, ither.".
Wheels said "DOES IT MATTER? WERE ABOUT TO DIE IF CLOUD DOSEN'T GRAB US! BLEND IS ALLERGIC TO DYING, REMEMBER?".
Cloud flew out of her jet and grabed the others just before the grond completely schtered. Saddly, none of the venciles made it.
Wheels said "Ok, I'll mention formations now. Fist, you don't need to rip me in two or anything." He looked at you and said "The "Formations" let us combine our stregnths;"Formation B" is when Cloud picks up Fist, who grabs the rest of us, then Cloud flies us to a safe point above our foes while Fist clucks us at them. B is short for Bomber. It combines Cloud's and Fist's powers. There's also "Formation R", which is short for ram. Fist stands on my and either Cloud's or Boost's head, and we ram into our foes. Fist punches as we hit for extra force. That combines my, Fist's, and Cloud/Boost's powers. Lastly, yes, we know 3 isn't a lot, is "Formation H". H is short for huge. He all grab onto Fist(Cloud on his head for flight, me and Blend on his feet for speed, and Boost and Splash on his hands for no reason in Splash's case, and for extra punch in Boost's case. Boost can get his boosts in midair, too.). Right now there's no formation that uses Splash well, but Gears is trying to figgure it out. You happy now, Fist?".
Fist said 'Yeah.".
Splash said "I feel useless.".
Cloud said "You're not. Hey, I don't think BWF has given me any lines before this.".
Fist said "Try to not break the 4th wall, honey.".
Wheels said "She has a airplane for a head. How did you get a crush on her?"
Fist said "You want some of this?!?" and punched the ground, which made it shake.
Wheels said "No way, man. I'm allergic to getting creamed.".
Fist said "Good excuse." and cooled off.
Wheels said "Now, I'm gonna finaly call Gears. Don't break and 4th walls while I'm busy, k?".
Cloud said "Can do.".

Wheels called Grears.
Gears said "Hey, Wheels. What do you need?".
Wheels said "Any idea where Flash went?" as a black figure walked around in the background.
Gears said "No idea. If you can get a DNA sample, I could trace hi-" and the black figgure grabed the back of his head.
The black figure said "Me you lookin' for? Meet me in the Chao Karate Arena." and smashed Gears face into his comunicator.
Wheel's comunicator went "SIGNAL HAS BEEN LOST. PLEASE SET UP A NINTENDO WIFI CONNECTION TO TRY AGAIN.".

Wheels told the others what happened.
Fist said "I guess that was Flash. Hey, we should say what Chao Karate is."
Wheels said "Aw jeez, fine.". He looked at you and said "Chao Karate is a fighting match between 2 chao. That's all I'm saying, I'm tired of explaining all this stuff."

That's the end of chapter 2 cus' I got a stomach ache and want to go lie down. I'll try to remember to upload the made charecter sprites so you know what they look like a bit more.

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Post by LittleZbot » Sat Apr 23, 2011 12:11 am

For some reason, I imagine Fist as Knuckles, Wheels as Sonic, and Cloud as Rouge. :P :lol:
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Post by boywhoflies » Sat Apr 23, 2011 12:47 am

You know, those realy fit. Fist's hands were based on Knuckles's, Wheel's original design was a Sonic chao, Rouge and Cloud and fly(well), Rouge has a crush on Knux and Cloud has a crush on Fist(I don't think Knux likes her back, though), Sonic and Wheels are Indigo, and Fist and knux are red.

Run on sentence alert.

Here's the sprites, like I said earlyer.
(From left to right:Wheels, Fist, Could, Boost)
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Post by ~xpr'd~ » Sat Apr 23, 2011 12:48 am

I read this, and I actually really like it. Go on :D
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Post by boywhoflies » Sat Apr 23, 2011 12:49 am

Thanks man! :D
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Post by LittleZbot » Sat Apr 23, 2011 12:55 am

I'm beginning to imagine Gears as Tails. :lol: :P
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Post by boywhoflies » Sat Apr 23, 2011 12:56 am

That works too. 8)
I'm gonna work on Gears's sprite...
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Post by boywhoflies » Sat Apr 23, 2011 1:04 am

Ok. I G2G now, but I'll post what I've done so far:
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Post by LittleZbot » Sat Apr 23, 2011 1:09 am

I'm imagining Four as Cosmo(from season 3 of "Sonic X"). :P
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Post by boywhoflies » Sat Apr 23, 2011 2:38 pm

Because clovers and Cosmo are both green? :P

Oh, wait, I just realised something. Boost is allready green, so if I make Four a actual charecter I'm gonna have some trouble with the design...shoot.
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Post by LittleZbot » Sat Apr 23, 2011 5:42 pm

boywhoflies wrote:Because clovers and Cosmo are both green? :P
Indeef.
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Post by boywhoflies » Sun Apr 24, 2011 12:55 am

Kewl...

Chapter 3:Please don't break the 4th wall anymore

Wheels, after saying what chao karate is, said "Ok, now we need to get there...but our venciles are busted. Or not. Lets go into the place where the ground/4th wall was and check. If they still work Fist can cluck them out of the hole.".
Fist said "Will do.".

They jumped(or fly in Clouds case, or Boost-Glide in Boost's case) into the hole. They fell for a good ten minutes. Durring the fall, they chated a bit.

"Hey", said Fist, "How are we gonna drive to the Chao Karate Arena? Isn't it in another world, or something?"
Wheels said "Yeah, good point. The chao world. Fist, if the guy out there wants to know what the chao world is, he/she's gonna have to look it up.".
Fist said "Fine, I'll take this one. The chao world is a world consisting of the chao lobby(where there are portals to the other places), the chao garden(where all types of chao call home), the hero garden(like the chao garden but only angel-like hero chao live there), the dark garden(only devil-like dark chao live there), and the chao kindergraden(where some realy dumb chao, not like the ones in this story, learn to play flutes and stuff). The chao stadium is in the chao garden, through a waterfall. The chao karate arena is in there.".
Boost said "Yeah...don't we need a chao key to get in there?".
Wheels said "For gods sake, put a link to chao island up allredy!".
Fist said "Good job, now he need to explain 2 of them.".
Cloud said "Wait, before that...".
She apeared to be thinking for a few seconds.
Cloud said "We broke the 4th wall 3 times in this chapter, make that 4 since I said there are chapters, make that 5 now, plus the 4th wall I broke in chapter 2 that was never mentioned what it was, which is 6, plus 1 because I said there are chapters, plus another because I just said there are chapters again, and I better stop saying that now. anyway, there are 8 4th walls that were broken that we didn't see break yet.

At that point, they were about to hit the ground. But then the 6 of the 8 4th wall turned into their venciles, and a 7th one turned into the floor. Luckly there was a cave-thing off to the side. They all got inside where there was a conveniently placed chao key. They are keys that, when collected, give you the perment power to warp to the chao world whenever you want. Fist, you don't have to say it.
Fist said "Thanks. Now, let's grab this thing".
As Fist said thing it broke. It turned out to the the 8th 4th wall.

Fist started to swear.

Wheels said "Ok, we need to grab another. How do we get out of here?".
Fist said charcastically"Do we have someone here who can rip trees from the ground with ease? If we did we could make a spiral tunnel to the surface.".
Boost just joined them now, because this glide-boost thing made him go realy slow. But he heard the chat.
Boost said "Don't bother. Leave it to me.".
Fist rolled his eyes.
Boost said "Chao island is a huge chao fansite full of info on chao rasing."
Fist said 'What the heck was that?".
Some of the ground shatered, forming a spiral tunnel to the surface.
Boost said "You were saying?"
Fist riped out a piece of the wall ot of the, well, wall, and held it up as if he was gonna kill Boost with it.
Boost screamed "HOLY ****" and ran up the tunnel. Fist chaced him with his piece of wall, so he was slow. Wheels dashed up the tunnel, grabed Boost, and ran at his near-sound top speed back to the HQ.

Fist said "They ditched us. shoot. Get ready for a lllllooooonnnnngggggg walk.". He stuck his leg and smashed the wall over it, like you can do with a stick.
Splash said "At least were not Flash. He must be bored to death waiting for us."
Fist said "Good. We want to kill him, remember?".
Blend said "We don't want him dead. We just want him to stop breaking evreything."
Cloud said "Wait, did that happen here, or was that just the plot for BWF's fangame "Super Chao Race"?".
Fist said "Please, teddy bear, try to not break the 4th wall."

At this point I got bored of that random 4th wall joke, so nothing is gonna shater like that.

Fist said "Nevermind...in that case, Super Chao Race is a fangame BWF made which is kind of chao crossed with the online game "Duck life 2".".
Cloud said "Uh, we can go faster.".
Fist said "Good point.".
Fist chucked Splash to the HQ. She turned into a big yellow splat on the window. Splash was defeated like she was in Chapter 1!

Bad ending #9001x9001 found! Returning to last save.

Fist chucked Splash to the HQ. She landed on a loof bridge from Kooky's "What the plot for WA4 should be" topic. She fall through and hopped out of the water.
Cloud flew over.
Blend did a giant ninja jump over.
Fist grabed the back of his neck, picked himself up somehow, and clucked himself over there somehow.

Fist said "It's cool, Boost. I'm not gonna smash you."
Wheels said "Let's see if Gears knows where to find chao keys.


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Post by LittleZbot » Sun Apr 24, 2011 1:30 am

This is getting strangely wefight-ish. :P
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Post by boywhoflies » Sun Apr 24, 2011 1:50 pm

The "Bad ending #_ found! Returning to last save..." jokes were joked on wefight...but yeah, now that you mention it, the rest of it is like Wefight, too. (There's gonna be fights. Don't worry, they aren't gonna break the 4th wall and hope their opponent is the 4th wall. :lol: )
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Post by boywhoflies » Mon Apr 25, 2011 10:07 pm

DP

Ok, I was thinking...after I finish the story, should I "animate" it on game maker?
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Post by boywhoflies » Mon May 02, 2011 11:34 pm

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Chapter 4:Hunt for a chao key(Part 1)

The chao squad walking into the HQ.
Fist called out "Yo, Gears! Where can we find a chao key?"
There was no reply.
Fist called out "Yo, Gears! Where can we find a chao key?"
There was no reply.
Fist called out "Yo, Gears! Where can we find a chao key?"
There was no reply.
Fist called out "Yo, Gears! Where can we find a chao key?"
There was no reply.
Fist called out "Yo, Gears! Where can we find a chao key?"
There was no reply.
Fist called out "Yo, Gears! Where can we find a chao key?"
There was no reply.
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Wheels runs into the lab, and the rest follow.
They found Gears on the floor, knocked out cold.
Wheels said "Oh, yeah. Flash slammed his head into the communicator.
Cloud said "So, uh, what do we do now?".
Fist says "Stupid Flash. We could of brawled on the roof or something. But no... we have to get ourselves into another dimension. The idiot.".
Splash said "Maybe Gears has a portal to the chao world in here, or something.".
Fist says "I don't feel like looking around this place. Too lazy."
He grabbed Gears, picked him up, and shook him until he woke up.
Gears said "Ow...my head...uh...what do...you guys..." and passed out.
Fist said "Wow. That idiot must of hit him pretty hard...now I REALLY wanna kill Flash. What if I rip a hole in space-time, we jump into it, and hope we enter the chao world?".
Splash said "I don't think that's possible.".
Cloud said "Fist, try not to kill her, okay? Splash already died twice, and both deaths were caused by you.".
Fist said "We return to the "last save", remember? That's always right before I kill her.".
Splash said "Go ahead. I don't feel anything, and it's funny."
Fist said "No argument here." and clucked Splash into space.

Splash is defeated! Returning to last save...

Cloud said "Fist, try not to kill her, okay? Splash already died twice, and both deaths were caused by you.".
Fist said "Ah, okay. If I killed her again that would make 4 deaths.".
Wheels said "Hey, wait a second. Chao keys are from SA2B, right? Where were they found?".
Blend said "Uh, levels..."
Fist said "Oh. So, which level do we enter?"
Wheels said "I say City Escape. It's the first and easiest level, so we skip any challenges and just get to fighting Flash."
Fist said "As long as I can break everything in it for no reason at all, I'm okay with it.".
Wheels said "Go ahead. Now, lets get over there...somehow."
Cloud said "It's past a ocean. Only me, Wheels, Splash, and Blend can get there. I can fly over the water, Wheels can run on water, Splash and Blend can swim.".
Boost said "And I only get boosts, not normal quick speed. I'd sink as soon as I lose the Boost.".
Fist said "Cloud, can you fly the rest of us over? You can pick all of us up, anyway.".
Cloud said "I can't hold you guys up for long. And were talking flying over a ocean. Sorry, it's a no-go.".
Wheels said "Me, Cloud, Blend and Splash and search for a chao key in City Escape, while Fist and Boost try to wake up Gears. You guys okay with that?".
Everyone said "Okay", but Fist said "As long as I can smash Flash downward later so hard he gets stuck in the earth's core.".
So Wheels, Cloud, Blend, and Splash went off, and Fist stayed behind with Boost and tried to call 911, but that it pretty hard to do considering chao have no fingers.

End of chapter! I used firefox, so the spelling should be better. Any comments?
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Post by LittleZbot » Tue May 03, 2011 1:02 am

lol at the death joke
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Post by boywhoflies » Tue May 03, 2011 11:25 pm

Thanks! :D

List of Splash's deaths:
  • #1 FALCON PUNCH
    #2 Thrown at a wall a few KMs away
    #3 Clucked into space
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You know, I think dying is Splash's only perpose. Wheels can run on water anyway, so Wheels can do pretty much evreything Splash can. :P
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Post by LittleZbot » Tue May 03, 2011 11:35 pm

Then make a sequel where splash gets kicked out because he's no use(much to Fist's dismay. As he puts it "I need somebody to kill after a long day's work!") and he must prove himself. Or something. :lol:
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Post by boywhoflies » Tue May 03, 2011 11:43 pm

Good idea. Actually, I wanted to make a sequel, but I had no idea for a plot. Actually, this is the plot of one of my games("Super Chao Race"). :lol:

Well, I started it from that thing. I only though of Flash going crazy and Charoon and the Buff Baby Chao(who you play as in the game) getting the chao squad. :P
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Post by LittleZbot » Tue May 03, 2011 11:46 pm

I am now to imagine Flash as Shadow. :lol:
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Post by boywhoflies » Tue May 03, 2011 11:54 pm

Not that you mention it, he does seem like him.
(Flash isn't a fan charecter, though. He's a actual charecter. :P 8) )
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Post by LittleZbot » Wed May 04, 2011 12:12 am

Really? What Game?
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Post by boywhoflies » Wed May 04, 2011 12:27 am

SA2B. He's the final battle in the "chao karate" minigame. He dosen't actually lose his mind, used to lead the chao squad, or drives a giant robot but he is a very skilled fighter. That is probaly the only thing in the story that was said about him that's true(besides him being a black light chaos chao).

I just realised something...chaos chao are immortal. Sorry Fist, but you can't kill him.
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Post by boywhoflies » Wed Jul 06, 2011 10:15 pm

BUMB!
So...I'm gonna continue this. Yayz! No spellcheck cuz' I don't feel like it. :3

Chapter 5:Hunt for a chao key(Part 2)
Ah, the ocean. Next to a nice calm beach. You COULD hear the gentle waves washing up onshore, if that 5-inch tall guy running at near the speed of sound wasn't so dang loud.
Wheels was running on the ground(he was going super-fast so there's a trail of fire behind him), Cloud was flying a little behind him and Splash and Blend were on her back because they wouldn't be amble to keep up.
Wheels reached the beach and jumped over it. He landed on the water and ran on it.
Cloud grabbed Splash in one "hand", Blend in the other, and threw them at the water. They eazly began swiming. Cloud flew lower until she was just above the water. Lets skip until they reach the other side, shall we?
...
When at the speed of sound you can go around the world in 8 seconds IIRC.
...
I guess that makes this about half a second later?
...
1 second later...
Wheels, Cloud, and Splash are sitting onshore, waiting for Blend to catch up.
Wheels said "I wish she was faster."
...
5 seconds later...
Blend arives onshore.
Cloud said "So...where's City Ecsape?
Splash grabbed Cloud's head and turned it to a sign marked "City Escape"
Splash said "It's at the sign marked "Chao World".
Cloud said "Very funny. I mean really. There's a sign marked "Chao World" right there."
Cloud pointed at a sign marked "Chao World"
Wheels said "Ok. Lets get that chao key." and ran off.
The others followed.
After about 0.000000060008 seconds, they reached a random staircase.
Wheels got shot in the face by a GUN robot.
Wheels rammed the robot.
The robot exploded.
Wheels said "Dang, robots are weak."
A voice in the background called out "Oh, are they?"
The part of the chao squad that's here turned around.
There was Flash in his giant robot.
Wheels yelled "Bring it! FORMATION B!"
Cloud said "We need Fist for that."
Wheels yelled "FORMATION R!"
Cloud said "We need Fist for that too."
Wheels yelled "FORMATION H!"
Could said "We need Fist. Again."
Flash was ROLF-ing. Or something.
Wheels yelled "MAKE OUT!"
Cloud said "I need Fist for tha-oh god."
Wheels said "I still don't get what he sees in you. You're nice and all, but you got a -ing airplane for a head. Wait, did Gears ever mention formation S to you guys?"
Blend said "No...am I actually usefull for it?"
Flash said "Probaly not. Lol."
Wheels said "Yes, you are."
Flash yelled "WHAT THE FU-BOOOOOOM!"
Flash said "Hold on a sec, I can be killing them right now."
Flash presses a button and some heat-seeking missles shot out of the robot's hand.
The chao squad ran around the robot to lure the missles into it.
Flash hit another button just before he got hit and the missles powered down. They just droped not doing damage.
Wheels said "That's new...I guess he did upgrade it. FORMATION S!"
Splash said "We need to know what it is."
Wheels said "Oh, yeah. S is shot for squash. It's simple;we all ram the foe at the same time from diffrent parts. Splash, you can help if you go in the water, gain speed, and jump out of it to have your speed outside of water."

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Post by boywhoflies » Sun Jul 10, 2011 1:20 am

LittleZbot wrote:Then make a sequel where splash gets kicked out because he's no use(much to Fist's dismay. As he puts it "I need somebody to kill after a long day's work!") and he must prove himself. Or something. :lol:
I was re-reading the topic...this is slightly incorrect...Splash is a girl. I made the "he" part bold. *shot*
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