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Post by LittleZbot » Tue Apr 26, 2011 9:02 pm

eee226 wrote:The main story is the Z-bots came for class and I skip the class.And in the night loof could not sleep So he sneaked out and he saw this UFO landing and was curious.But a The UFO school bus was going back but then it saw loof and took him.And now stinky wakes up and sees loof gone so he goes to save loof.
I was stupid enough to not write my plot down, and all my good ideas are forgotten quickly, so I ended up forgetting my plot. I was trying to remember it, but this gives me a good start-off for another. Thanks! :)
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Post by eee226 » Wed Apr 27, 2011 6:03 pm

Is the plot ready lil'z
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Post by LittleZbot » Thu Apr 28, 2011 12:04 am

My brain unclogged and I have at least a fourth done. Can I include Custom Characters?
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Post by eee226 » Thu Apr 28, 2011 12:26 am

Yeah
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Post by LittleZbot » Thu Apr 28, 2011 12:33 am

thx.

If Emerald will allow it, I'm going to include Jamiff. :)
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Post by eee226 » Fri Apr 29, 2011 12:32 am

Are we ready with the plot?
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Post by LittleZbot » Fri Apr 29, 2011 12:43 am

Not really. I haven't had much time to think about it. Some more previews would help(since I'm starting over). :)
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Post by eee226 » Fri Apr 29, 2011 12:46 am

That will be nice
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Post by eee226 » Fri Apr 29, 2011 9:03 pm

I'll wait if it takes long because I'll be at church
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Post by LittleZbot » Fri Apr 29, 2011 9:07 pm

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Post by eee226 » Wed May 04, 2011 6:36 pm

This was LONG is it ready yet
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Post by LittleZbot » Thu May 05, 2011 2:03 am

It's only been five days. Sometimes it takes quite a while for a great idea to come bursting out. :wink:

At the moment I've got some more down, but my brain hit another block. Like I said before, more previews would certainly help.
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Post by LittleZbot » Sat May 07, 2011 10:10 pm

WOO I GOT THE PLOT:

It starts out with Loof running up and hugging Stinky in that "YOU'RE ALIVE!" fashion, as they had just finished another adventure. Since it's been a long day with the adventure and all, the gang plans to sleep in their Treehouse Hideout. At night-time Loof sees some bright flashes. Curious, he heads toward them, only to be sucked up in a Z-bot ship.

The next day, Stinky finds that Loof is missing. He alert everyone, and soon every stinker in Wondertown is looking for him. Then certain traces lead the gang to believe that Loof has been kidnapped by the Z-bots. They head to the Wonderland Teleport Agency in order for Jamiff to teleport them to the Planet of the Z-bots.

Wiener, who wants to help and have a big "adventure", convinces Ned to help him(by paying him two Wonder-Cream cones) and heads toward the Teleport Agency. Jamiff isn't there, but Wiener is confident he can use the Teleporters himself. However, he accidentally enters the wrong code and ends up in the Void.

Jamiff, once seeing that Wiener and Ned are missing and the last code that was entered, assumes Wiener wanted to save Loof and tried to teleport there, only to go to the Void. He then constructs a Rescue team, containing Morklin, himself, Squiddish, and Pootsy. Mr. Zurkon also gets thrown into the mix.

Meanwhile, Wiener is surprised to find the Thwarts throwing a bunch of Fireballs at him. Weren't the turned good? In an attempt to escape, he bumps into a Thwart, who quickly takes him and Ned to his cave. He explains that all the Thwarts were just walking about when a Z-bot ship came and demanded that they join forces with them. The Thwarts, f course, objected, and suddenly bright flashes of light struck them. As each thwart was struck, he lost his color and became evil. He would then disappear. By the time they got Throlls(as he said his name was) they seemed to have run out of evilness whatever-they-used, for he did not become evil.

Back at the Planet of the Z-bots, Loof wakes up tied to a pole with tape around is mouth as a gag. He rolls his eyes, thinking How Cliche. He is then permitted to ask one question to one of the Z-bot Commanders. He asks why he is here. The Z-bot Commander says that they have been told of how Wonderland began to fall apart when the color was sucked out. They then planned to suck out the color once again with the power of the Void. However, the Power was not much, only able to suck up small amounts of color and turn a few things evil, ect. They plan to harness the Power of the Shards to make them more powerful. A group of Z-bot students spotted Loof and the Teacher captured him. They are using him to lure the rest of the gang to the Planet of the Z-bots, so they can destroy them and easily capture the Shards. He also remarks that he just gave a long speech.

Outside the Lair, Stinky, Qookie, and Peegue are under heavy fire from multiple Z-bots. In a wild search for cover, Stinky slips into a dark hole. Peegue, being braver than Qookie, jumps down to rescue him. Qookie, left behind, spots a cave and, still under fire, dives into it. He is surprised to see WildScritter and Spoofy inside.

Meanwhile, the Rescue team ends up in the Void and are attacked. Morklin quickly blocks the fire with Grow and Floing Bubbles, also freezing the Thwarts with Brr. Mr. Zurkon stumbles upon the door to a cave, and decides to knock on it, planning to get invited in to tea, despite the others' protests. Of course, nobody(except Mr. Zurkon) actually expects a Thwart to answer the door and invite everyone in for tea, who gladly accept. When Mr. Zurkon is served cake, he asks if it was made in the Toaster. Throlls, of course, says no, to which Mr. Zurkon is evidently relieved, because, as he states it, "Mr. Zurkon allergic to Tasty Toaster." He then begins to eat his plate, which causes Throlls to wonder if he needs brain surgery.

Back at the Planet of the Z-bots, Spoofy reveals that when Loof was captured he, holding WildScritter, quickly jumped into the Z-bot ship to rescue Loof. When Loof was handed over to the Z-bot Commander Spoofy, still carrying WildScritter, made a run for it before he was discovered. He hid in the Cave and planned to stay there until things had cleared up outside. Then he would try to rescue Loof.

Inside the Lair, Stinky and Peegue popped out of a hole in the wall. It turned out to be a tube laid as a trap for the gang. Three cages fall from the ceiling and one falls on Stinky, one falls on Peegue, and one falls on the floor, causing the Z-bot Commander to notice Qookie was missing. He believes that Qookie has already been destroyed by the Z-bots. He is about to order them incinerated, but has second thoughts and decides he would rather see their expression when he sucks the color out of Wonderland.

At the Void, Throlls says that he and his pet Chomper, Nyak, would be glad to help. Morklin tries to teleport them all back into Wonderland, but he can't do it with the Shards so far away. Throlls gets an idea, and hooks Mr. Zurkon's hat to his computer, much to Mr. Zurkon's protests, who says "BUT MR. ZURKON WILL ELECTRIFY!" Throlls then shines something that looks like a scanner around the room, and tells Morklin to try to teleport Mr. Zurkon to Wondertown. As teleporting one person is much easier than teleporting a bunch, this is easily accomplished. The teleporting then spreads across the room, teleporting everything.

Meanwhile, Peegue, who happened to bring a shovel, was furiously digging through the floor, trying to dig his way out. After a while, Stinky asks if he is done yet. Peegue replies "No, but I found a new route to China!" Stinky thinks this is ridiculous, as there is no china in the Planet of the Z-bots, nor on Wonderland. Peegue asks that if there is no China, how would you explain the Paper Z-bot Lanterns, the Pinatas, the Chinese Music, and the strange Festival. He then pops out of the hole full of Z-bot-ish Chinese good-luck charms and necklaces, beads and such. Loof rolls his eyes and Stinky Facepalms. He tells Peegue to simply dig a way out already. Peegue begins once again.

Back at Wondertown, Morklin rushes into the Temple which was being guarded by Wysp. He checks on the Shards. To his relief, they are completely safe. Mr. Zurkon, However, sees the Indigo Shard and decides he likes the "STARRY SHINY THINGIE!" and starts hugging it. Ned sees the Red Shard and decides it must be one of those different-hue-chocolates. He quickly jumps on it and tries to bite it, only to find it hard as rock. Morklin FacePalms. All of the sudden, the shards fly out of the open window, carrying Ned and Mr. Zurkon with them. Nyak bites onto the Orange Shard, determined to save them.

The Z-bot Commander, who, of course, was sucking up the Power orbs with a tractor beam, opens a window to let the Shards in. He doesn't take much notice of Mr. Zurkon and Ned, however. But Mr. Zurkon started beating up the Z-bot Commander, claiming that the Commander was trying to "STEAL STARRY SHINY THINGIE FROM MR. ZURKON!!!" Ned is too busy trying to eat the Red Shard to notice anything, though. His ears(if stinkers have ears) prick up when Stinky asks him to eat the Cage containing him. Ned, of course, accepts. Nyak watches it all with intrest and an occasional "Nyak."

The Z-bot Commander ignores Mr. Zurkon and, using the Power of the Shards, shoots a GIANT purpleish ray at Wonderland. Suddenly many different colors stray out into space. Wonderland was slowly being robbed of its color.

Suddenly, Stinky and Peegue(who had dug his way out) start grabbing the Z-bot Commander and twisting and turning him around and around, trying to stop him, ignoring the fact that a thousand Z-bots are all gonna destroy them right then and there. However, they are distracted by Mr. Zurkon, thanks to his Z-bot hat, and thought he was a Z-bot spy who was pretending to be a Stinker. They decide to hold a party in his honor and ignore the Stinkers. Just then Qookie, Spoofy, and WildScritter jump through the tube. Qookie unties Loof, WildScritter runs about blocking the Z-bots, Nyak decides to see if Z-bots are tasty, and Spoofy doesn't do anything.

All of the sudden TZBC(The Z-bot Commander) gasps and looks outside the window. Out there in outer space all the color is mixing together in a swirling vortex. Stinky remarks that it looks like the Void, and everyone gulps. TZBC reasons that the Color is so powerful that if it wasn't placed and used properly, it would create a gravity field powerful enough to suck up the Universe. Loof quickly maps out a plan to restore the color.

First, Loof takes the Seven Shards and heads down to the Near-Destroyed Wonderland. He talks to Wysp and tells her his plan that will re-activate the shards, as their power is used up. Peegue, Stinky, and Mr. Zurkon(who was very reluctant to go, as he was in the middle of his fourth pie), along with Nyak, who sneaked along, meanwhile, head down into the Lab, where Stinky tries to suck some Color into the Lab to give it power while Peegue tries to figure out what controls what. Mr. Zurkon simply acts as a Plugin with his Z-bot hat. Quite a few wires were plugged in and out and Mr. Zurkon was electrified quite a few times before they finally get it to work. Stinky also manages to capture some color. Nyak also pushed random buttons to see if they made Mr. Zurkon dance(that is what caused most of the electricusion).

In the Meantime, Loof is trying to restore the Power by throwing Spellballs at the shards. It doesn't work out.
Stinky is having much better luck. He manages to catch some color. He uses it to power the machines. He tries to catch some more color, and succeeds. He contacts Loof via Wonder-talkie and asks him the shard's exact position. Loof replied with some scientific stuff that Stinky has to call Peegue over to understand. He then shoots out the color at what he hopes is the right position. The Color hits the Shards and they power up. By putting them together, the color is called back into Wonderland and the Universe is saved.

TZBC continues his normal life and warns Loof: "I'll be back." to which Loof answers "Sure. Sure you will." The thwarts became Normal again, and the color was restored. Mr. Zurkon had to recover for a while after getting those electric shocks and everyone lived happily until the next adventure. Nyak wished he had a bigger part and he probably will someday.

THE END!

Too Big? :lol:
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Post by eee226 » Sun May 08, 2011 4:08 pm

Thats..... :shock: Actually very good.
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Post by LittleZbot » Mon May 09, 2011 11:21 pm

Thanks! Was it worth the wait?
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Post by eee226 » Tue May 10, 2011 12:13 am

Yep
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Post by eee226 » Thu May 12, 2011 3:09 pm

Ok Here are the results
Animator Not done yet
PlotDONE!
VoicesNot used
MusicNot used
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Post by ab-47 » Thu May 12, 2011 4:12 pm

LittleZbot wrote:THE END!
Too Big? :lol:
:shock: :shock: :shock:.
This is soooooooooooooooooooooooooooo.................
long :shock: .
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Post by eee226 » Thu May 12, 2011 4:44 pm

Whats the should the ratings be?
Rated G
Rated PG
Rated PG-13
Or Rated R
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Post by MyNameIsKooky » Thu May 12, 2011 5:10 pm

Rated X, obviously.

...Come on. What do you think? Rate it G. >.>
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Post by LittleZbot » Fri May 13, 2011 10:20 pm

agree^
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Post by boywhoflies » Fri May 13, 2011 10:45 pm

Eee, if you don't mind, I'd like to animate it. I'd use Game Maker for it(so it won't be a actual animation, saddly), but that's a good thing, because I could put things like better speech(like in ET4), a scene select, etc. .

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Post by ~xpr'd~ » Fri May 13, 2011 11:01 pm

When I heard about the animation I thought about flash. I didn't know you could make animations in game maker, but I doubt any fluent stop motion would work for this.
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Post by boywhoflies » Fri May 13, 2011 11:06 pm

You can't make animations on game maker. You can make cutscenes, though, and actually have the charecters do stuff...that's what I plan on doing. If eee is ok with it, of course.
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Post by MyNameIsKooky » Fri May 13, 2011 11:45 pm

boywhoflies wrote:You can't make animations on game maker.
You actually can. Just make a huge sprite and animate it frame-by-frame.
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Post by boywhoflies » Fri May 13, 2011 11:55 pm

Good point. :P

(But that would probaly lag a lot. lol)
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Post by eee226 » Mon May 16, 2011 7:54 pm

My sister is talking for qookie
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Post by eee226 » Mon May 16, 2011 7:55 pm

Try the animation with game maker and see
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Post by boywhoflies » Mon May 16, 2011 9:00 pm

I will...after I do my homework. :lol:

(I spend a lot of time here instead of doing homework, don't I? Lawl.)

Edit:Ok, I started. I'm probaly gonna change a few things while I do it, if it works, but nothing major. Like, right now, at the start, where Loof hugs Stinky, I have Qookie jumping up and down and Peegue sitting on the ground just so they could be in the scene...you mind that?
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Post by boywhoflies » Tue May 17, 2011 12:44 am

DP
I wanted to make shure you saw it. I made the first paragraph animated to show what it would look like briefly if I did it.

A few...uh...notes:

The background is a fail attempt at a sunset. Just so you know.
I can put voices in there.
Go through the speech with the spacebar. Pressing it before it's all typed out skips the typing, otherwise it goes to the next text.
I can add music. Don't worry about that.


Here it is:
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