Stinky Ice

Randome · Post by **Randome** » Sat Oct 20, 2012 9:25 pm

Well .. I've never seen ice sewage ...

But as it is only a game!

Wonderman109 · Post by **Wonderman109** » Sat Oct 20, 2012 11:24 pm

Not bad for a second level, but could be better. And yes, I do wonder how sewers get frozen over so much in Wonderland...

GRADINGS

Puzzle 18/25 The puzzles were fun and hard enough, but they weren't very original. Try to spend more time on your puzzle. yot yot, (another user here,) told me once in a PM that he plans all his puzzles on paper before making them in the editor.

Action 22/25 Good job with the spikeyballs and the chomper at the end.

Storyline N/A I would recommend you start putting a storyline of some sort in your adventures. It's not the most important thing in a level, but you can only get so far with the type of levels you're making right now. Storyline adds purpose to the level and allows plot twists.

Scenery 21/25 Not bad, but this didn't look that much like a sewer.

Glitch-Free: 23/25 Was the chomper in the powder keg area supposed to kill itself?

OVERALL GRADE: 84/100

Good, but I still found some weak points.

This was better than your #1, but you should start focusing on a plot and some new puzzle ideas. Also, it's okay to make your levels longer. There are some levels here that are over 30 wlvs in size!

Randome · Post by **Randome** » Sun Oct 21, 2012 12:53 am

you think I could invent ...
The abandoned castle 2?

Wonderman109 · Post by **Wonderman109** » Sun Oct 21, 2012 1:03 am

You could put some ghosts in, have the player talk to themselves, make the castle dark and bigger with brick basements and creepy -type puzzles, and you'd have a Halloween Special. Use your imagination; I think you have the potential for good levels.

Randome · Post by **Randome** » Sun Oct 21, 2012 1:09 am

Response of three words

Randome · Post by **Randome** » Sun Oct 21, 2012 1:34 am

do not know