Discord's Jail

tooncool64 · Post by **tooncool64** » Wed Aug 13, 2014 8:57 pm

Phew! This was hard to make! I took in yfzm and MWM advice and this level is AWESOME!!!!!
The Discord Trial Trilogy:
1. The Temple Of Discord
2. Discord's Jail
3. ???

tooncool64 · Post by **tooncool64** » Wed Aug 13, 2014 9:12 pm

NO MERCY

Wonderland King · Post by **Wonderland King** » Wed Aug 13, 2014 9:21 pm

I like it, but can I make a request? Could you rename the files (they appear in alphabetical order) so that this level appears after the first one in the series?

tooncool64 · Post by **tooncool64** » Wed Aug 13, 2014 9:25 pm

You finished it already? And yes I will do that form now on.

Wonderland King · Post by **Wonderland King** » Wed Aug 13, 2014 9:30 pm

No, not yet.

And of course, no pressure, but maybe you could rename this one too, just to avoid confusion? You can edit the post with the level.

tooncool64 · Post by **tooncool64** » Wed Aug 13, 2014 9:31 pm

Yes, but later. I'm supposed to be doing chores right now

tooncool64 · Post by **tooncool64** » Wed Aug 13, 2014 9:57 pm

Any feedback?

Yzfm · Post by **Yzfm** » Wed Aug 13, 2014 10:06 pm

So far, this is a BIG improvement. I haven't finished it yet, but just asking, did you test this adventure? The first part of the escape with the chompers barely behind you is apparently uncompletable.

tooncool64 · Post by **tooncool64** » Wed Aug 13, 2014 10:09 pm

CRUD! I did test this and I removed the chompers! Lemme check in editor!

tooncool64 · Post by **tooncool64** » Wed Aug 13, 2014 10:11 pm

Is the chomers behind you make it uncompleteable?

tooncool64 · Post by **tooncool64** » Wed Aug 13, 2014 10:13 pm

Ok, let me update my adventure. DO NOT DOWNLOAD PLEASE

Yzfm · Post by **Yzfm** » Wed Aug 13, 2014 10:13 pm

Yeah.

I also recommend you to change wall textures, it's hard to distinguish them from actual floors

tooncool64 · Post by **tooncool64** » Wed Aug 13, 2014 10:15 pm

Ok, I cant do that now sorry. OK ADVENTURE IS BEING UPDATED. WHEN YOU COMPLETE IT. PLEASE GIVE A FULL REVIEW EVERYONE!

tooncool64 · Post by **tooncool64** » Wed Aug 13, 2014 10:16 pm

Everyone fixed version is out. Please give a review after playing.

Yzfm · Post by **Yzfm** » Wed Aug 13, 2014 10:24 pm

I can't escape the chompers because of the dialogue.

tooncool64 · Post by **tooncool64** » Wed Aug 13, 2014 10:27 pm

I am so sorry I am not thinking today. I will fix that.

tooncool64 · Post by **tooncool64** » Wed Aug 13, 2014 10:29 pm

Fixed is uploading

tooncool64 · Post by **tooncool64** » Wed Aug 13, 2014 10:30 pm

Uploaded and yfzm I am so sorry about this!

Wonderman109 · Post by **Wonderman109** » Thu Aug 14, 2014 2:37 am

I think I'll wait till someone manages to finish the level before I try it myself.

Jutomi · Post by **Jutomi** » Thu Aug 14, 2014 4:49 am

I think it's not downloading your adventures that causes the problem...
I think it's redownloading them.

I have that glitch again where when I click on the adventure, my game crashes.

Sorry, Tooncool.

Edit: Tried it again; it worked...
What is Wonderland doing to me?

Jutomi · Post by **Jutomi** » Thu Aug 14, 2014 5:02 am

I managed to finish the adventure.

Thanks for this, Tooncool!

I'm a bit sad about Wuffy, though...

Though, it was kind of enjoyable, POWing the ice troll.

Yzfm · Post by **Yzfm** » Thu Aug 14, 2014 9:59 am

tooncool64 wrote:yfzm I am so sorry about this!

Oh, don't worry about it, stuff like that happens a lot to everyone.

I am going to redownload it now that I'm awake, and I'm gonna write a review as soon as I finish.

Yzfm · Post by **Yzfm** » Thu Aug 14, 2014 10:25 am

DP

Okay, firstly, this adventure is far better from your previous ones. Congratulations! It's still pretty easy, but it does contain a nice variety of content. The boss was kind of easy, yet fun.

But, there are a few things I need to mention:

1- You need to change walls' texture from the floors'. It's hard to tell them apart if they have the same textures.
2- I don't really know why was the faint Brr charger in the color-changers area, it seemed pretty pointless.
3- There should be some kind of warning before entering rooms that require you to immediately run or so.
4- Some of your walls keep acting like floors. To make sure all walls have wall logic, click on the HIDE LOGIC button in the editor and check which walls have their top red.

Other than that, it's a pretty amusing adventure. Kind of simplistic yet fun. Keep up the good work.

tooncool64 · Post by **tooncool64** » Thu Aug 14, 2014 3:29 pm

Did anyone notice that Wuffy had a monster noise when you talked to him?

Yzfm · Post by **Yzfm** » Thu Aug 14, 2014 3:39 pm

Yeah, that caught my attention. But now that you mention it, maybe he IS a traitor or something.

tooncool64 · Post by **tooncool64** » Thu Aug 14, 2014 3:44 pm

Master Wonder Mage · Post by **Master Wonder Mage** » Thu Aug 14, 2014 4:08 pm

Well done! While there were obviously flaws, I am no longer capable of truly saying my adventures were any better for quite a while in my career. Other than fixing the bugs already mentioned in your future adventures and setting dialogs that you don't want to be repeatable to not be repeatable, the only advice I can give is experiment! Play around with different elements, and try to come up with knew ways to make the interact. At this point, I have no way of knowing whether you'll eventually become a puzzle-making genius or not, but eventually you'll find your footing. You will make puzzles that fail along the way; The Mysterious Duck part 12 is arguably one of my worst adventures, but it paved the way to my far better adventures to come. Just play around with different ideas, and eventually you'll discover what you're good at and truly find your footing.

Good luck with your future adventure designing!

Jutomi · Post by **Jutomi** » Thu Aug 14, 2014 4:52 pm

tooncool64 wrote:Did anyone notice that Wuffy had a monster noise when you talked to him?

I just thought he was an interesting guy with a deep voice.

Wonderman109 · Post by **Wonderman109** » Sat Aug 16, 2014 12:49 am

Alright, I'll start playing it.

Discord's Jail

Discord's Jail

Uncoordinated Discord

Coordinate Discord

Wuffy... NO!